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Strange love

Tags: love, poem, want, desire
1st attempt at writing for lush. found only on lush
How I came to know you,
Might seem funny.
To me it was a strange turn of events,
Something I would cherish for life,
Your words mesmerise me,
Make me laugh sometimes,
We talk for hours,
Never realising how long it's been,
Sometimes I wish I could,
Just lay beside you,
Your arms around me,
Holding me close, holding me tight,
How I crave to feel your touch,
Your lips on mine,
Going to sleep staring into your eyes,
Waking up to your smile,
Share the moments with you,
Laugh and cry with you,
Talk is all that we do,
And talk is all that we can do.

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Comments(13)

Deputy_Dogg
Posted 05 May 2013 06:39
I loved it...and I know what you mean by it.
AlphaDaedalian11
Posted 31 Mar 2013 02:52
That was a lovely piece, you expressed those emotions wonderfully.
PuzzledPartridge
Posted 24 Mar 2013 03:22
The emotions you have expressed in this poem reflect on the same emotions I feel when holding a woman. Very passionate, I can't wait to see more!
niceguy28
Posted 15 Mar 2013 18:00
i like it you put all your emotions in words this person is so close to your heart but yet really distant this is really emotional

awake_
Posted 17 Feb 2013 05:06
As I already said 5++++++++

billybroadband
Posted 17 Feb 2013 02:40
Very good first effort. Lush has sections in the Forum designed to help novice writers. Your tenses got a bit mixed here, past tense vs. present tense. Lovely thoughts expressed well, though. Thanks for hanging in there to bring it to us.
simplyjohn
Posted 16 Feb 2013 23:44
Its lovely Jay as I said previously. Sensual perhaps and from the heart ... well done.
cupidstunts
Posted 16 Feb 2013 23:31
yeah you'd know better.. Lol
MrLosAngeles
Posted 16 Feb 2013 12:35
Lots of longing expressed here. Well done.
cupidstunts
Posted 16 Feb 2013 11:04
thank you all so much
asleep
Posted 16 Feb 2013 10:32
Well written...Thanks for sharing with us. I look forward to more of your writing!! "5" +++

Rick
overmykneenow
Posted 16 Feb 2013 10:19
Lovely first effort. More to come, let's hope

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nazhinaz
Posted 16 Feb 2013 08:24
Love expressed strong. 5
 

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