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Love shared between a man and his woman

Love permeating
The stars wink
You kiss my lips
The moon descends
I hold you close
in my loving arms
The morning dew
Showering its droplets

I feel your lips over my nipples
warm, smooth, with delight
Kisses you planting and licking
you cupped my supple breasts
I hold my breath
you give them a loving squeeze
I moan aloud
you nibble my nipples
I feel your manhood arise

I kiss your lovely lips
I feel you licking every inch
Kissing my belly button
You smell so musky and desiring
I arch as you slide your finger
over my slit and feel me wet
So warm, so smooth, so ready
I wither, I convulse, I freeze
when you place your tongue
Over my pussy lips, slurping
juices I ooze just for you
My breathing stops
You push the tongue in
Feel you so hard and ready
Your tongue enters my pussy
I am over clouds and moon
You kiss my lips and share
your tongue full of my juices
and make me taste my own juices

You insert fingers in my wet pussy
and lick the soaked fingers
I hold your cock and lick
and take it full sucking deep
You rub your cockhead
pleading to enter
My hands guide you
to enter my soaking pussy
Your hardness I know well
is just for me, none but me

I moan I wither I convulse
you reach bottom in me
I urge you go fast and hard
You nibble my bottom lip
You pound hard fast and deep
I feel stars in the room
I scream aloud, yell your name
I cum hard yelling aloud
over your cock pumping in me
I squeeze my pussy muscles
and you cum deep in me
I feel you melting in me
and I melt in you

You permeating in me
My body, my mind, my soul,
my whole being
The oneness we share
So complete, heavens pleased
descending upon us
blessings and showering
petals of rose and jasmine
I feel so complete, so full
As never have been
And never shall be
I am incomplete without you
As you are without me
I love you so much
As you love me too
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Comments(18)

Banes1
Posted 18 Mar 2013 16:37
Covers the entire emotional spectrum. Another exceptional piece of writing. AWESOME!
Jethro
Posted 29 Nov 2012 11:15
Your ability to bring your feelings to life thru your words is amazing. While reading your work it seems as if you have allowed us to experience your passion and desire in a way we didn't think possible. You have a gift Joan of involving us in your inner being. The more I read your writings the more intrigued I become. Keep living life my friend and keep sharing it with us.
asleep
Posted 24 Nov 2012 16:35
I just re-read that ... and it seems better now than it initially did. You really got it down on this one. ily
Veronika
Posted 17 Sep 2012 10:42
Sensual, I love it .... 5/5
playsit
Posted 29 Jul 2012 08:38
Felt the passion in every line. "I am over clouds and moon" ... beautiful picture of a heightened sense of arousal. Nicely done Hotstuff.
Immortilous
Posted 28 Jul 2012 20:23
Really lovely, this poem shares the moment.. with passion and desire. Thank you for sharing, just brilliant!
asleep
Posted 26 Jul 2012 18:13
Perfect passion and no torment. Love it "10" and you know why!!
Makavelli
Posted 06 Jul 2012 20:14
Yes, I love the passion of this poem. Thanks for sharing!
pinklipgloss70
Posted 04 Jun 2012 05:32
This poem has such passionate desire and intensity, I loved it.
John_Doe
Posted 03 Jun 2012 09:25
A beautiful, sexually charged and very erotic poem. Very seductive and arousing experience reading every line of it.
etairay
Posted 03 Jun 2012 04:43
Thank you love it ..wow ..wow ..mmm ..beautiful ..jst beautiful
tnblue
Posted 02 Jun 2012 06:04
so deep and full of meaning
Kal-El85
Posted 02 Jun 2012 04:48
Wow! That was an awsome poem. Loved the sensual, seductiveness of it.
PhilAnders
Posted 02 Jun 2012 04:26
A lovely bit of sensuous poetry from the lovely Joan.
nazhinaz
Posted 01 Jun 2012 21:51
What a beautiful poetic feel of love and desire. Heavenly. May I scribe something to respond u? 5+++
Gramps
Posted 01 Jun 2012 13:23
Your words are saying what words need not say; you have spoken in words what you have conveyed with eyes and emotion.
EroticElegance
Posted 01 Jun 2012 12:51
I love the way you write with such sensitivity and emotion.
Navin
Posted 01 Jun 2012 12:37
passionate and full of emotion...well done
 

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