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sweet surrender

Forbidden love
Thoughts of him invade my mind,

echoes of his whispers entwined

his shadowy touch

a sweet benediction to my senses

a love forbidden

a secret kept

his lure consuming

my soul he kept

my cravings stir

my need awakens

my body yearns

a desire I cannot hide, a want I will not deny

an agony I gladly endure

an ache with no control, as passion ignites within

heart racing

pulse pounding

my body explodes with a wanton damp rush of anticipation,

a titillating, delicious thrill, a sinful fruit to savor

this sweet taste of surrender.

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nazhinaz
Posted 19 Mar 2013 21:56
A strong communication.

Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 17 Mar 2013 00:13
a wonderful poem congrats

PersonalAssistant
Posted 13 Mar 2013 22:34
This is absolutely splendid!! wow!! Wonderful!

HK4167
Posted 13 Mar 2013 22:26
So beautiful and the feelings of a forbidden love is so well expressed. Well done. Congratulation on your first poem in lush! Looking forward to reading more beautiful poems from you.

SweetElle
Posted 13 Mar 2013 19:12
lovely

ShyRedRose
Posted 11 Mar 2013 16:29
Enjoyed it very much, thank you xxx

theplayer
Posted 11 Mar 2013 14:01
Congratulations on your first piece of erotica here in Lush. It was a wonderful read. I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work. You will do well here. A big 5 from the player.

Hotstuff
Posted 11 Mar 2013 12:37
Very well stated..."ah, sweet surrender"...loved it.
 

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