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Taking a Chance

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The room is full of smoke and warm bodies.

You come to stand behind me as I sit at the bar

all pale pink silk and pearls.

I drink my chilled wine

as you order a scotch and take that first sip.

Your body is so close I can feel your heat

and hear that slight rasp

as you breathe in my roses and southern jasmine.

Our eyes meet in the mirror

for less than a moment.

My heart begins racing

as I understand your thoughts.

My skin flushes

as the back of your hand brushes my bare arm.

My body leans toward you

and the scent of desire wafts up

like mist from the morning river.

Our bodies sing to one another

still not touching.

The music slows as the saxophone begins

"I Can See Your Dreams."

I close my eyes

and see you

kissing my neck,

your hand on the small of my back,

your thigh pressing close

against the invitation between my legs.

Our moan is low and deep.

I raise my eyes to see you watching.

I feel your erection as you cross

that inch,

that gulf,

and breathe pure fire onto my neck.

"Chance, are you ready to go?"

The mirror reflects regret that matches mine

and you follow your wife

out of my night.

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Comments(13)

Talentedtongue
Posted 19 Jul 2012 23:04
Oh that terrible "inch" and that piercing image in the mirror. Devastating, simply devastating.
angeldust
Posted 28 Jun 2012 16:23
Beautiful,thank you for such a nice poem.I just love your work

playsit
Posted 20 Jun 2012 07:13
Oh what a disappointing ending, you left me at the bar as well. The mark of a great poem is how the reader is drawn in, if they can feel your emotions... great poem Sugah
etairay
Posted 17 Jun 2012 15:16
wow thank you love it ..beautiful honest & real a lovely surprise for the end which does happen ..sad moments
Sisyphus
Posted 16 Jun 2012 00:50
Oh unrequited lust, so hot and so unjust...these lines came to me when I read this exquisite, sensuous poem that is also really a short story. The setting, the sitution, the two, no three characters, the rising to climax then the ending where your "chance" (such an ironic name) disappears "out of my night." So many good llines.."desire wafts up like mist from the morning river." A Gem.
HK4167
Posted 15 Jun 2012 22:45
Oh my, what an ending, just as I was waiting that fire on your neck to burn all over your body...reality sucks isn't it? Well done!
nazhinaz
Posted 15 Jun 2012 21:33
You had a great surprise at conclusion. Lovely poem. 5
flytoomuch
Posted 15 Jun 2012 19:44
"That inch, that gulf"!! Wow you titillate every sense, smell, taste, visual, tactile, auditory.....the desire is palpable.....my god well done!!
LittleSister_
Posted 15 Jun 2012 18:36
Indeed what everyone else has said,, I was totally sucked in and didn't see it coming! I loved it Miss Laura, such a hot, enthralling, twisted tale 5
redlips
Posted 15 Jun 2012 18:22
Ah, shucks, darn, and poo-poo!! You led me to the edge and I fell right in. Very well done.

principessa
Posted 15 Jun 2012 17:37
Chance, indeed. Just ships passing in the night. So well done.
PhilAnders
Posted 15 Jun 2012 17:25
Totally sensuous.

DLizze
Posted 15 Jun 2012 17:15
Oh my, Miss Laura. And the name, Chance. Excellent.
 

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