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Tears

Without them how will I know ...
I would like to say thank you to Nazhinaz and Soleillalune to have inspired this one.

Could I smile to stop tears from flowing?

Do you know how long they have been pouring?

I have lost track of

Time,

Body,

The salty moisture

Slipping,

Dripping,

Endlessly falling,

Is the only thing keeping me…

Alive.

Could I smile to stop the tears from flowing?

Do you know how long they have been pouring?

Without them I would lose

Hope,

Breath,

The tiny droplets,

Rolling,

Sliding,

Eternally coursing,

Are the only reminders keeping me…

Sane.

Please,

Someone tell me,

Could I stop the tears from flowing?

And still know,

That he was real?
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stargazing
Posted 11 Feb 2013 06:07
expressed so well..sometime we write poems with emotions,when other read he or she thinks it is for us....

"I thought I meant something to you
You meant the world to me
Now I see it wasn’t real
The tears roll down my cheek
My eyes they start to swell
I’m missing every part of you
Your laugh, your smile, your smell
You aren’t there to see it all
My heart continues to ache
You caused my tears to fall"

vjlegbabe
Posted 03 Feb 2013 21:17
Excellent!I would kiss the tears from your cheeks....

HK4167
Posted 02 Feb 2013 21:08
I like how you make the beautiful words flow in this wonderful piece. Well done.

Mazza
Posted 02 Feb 2013 08:18
I loved the flow of this (no pun intended!)

Only thing was it should be lose, not loose!! Grr

Great work though!!

blazestcyr
Posted 02 Feb 2013 06:46
again another writer here on lush who looks into your soul and writes it..wow..wow!!!

ShyVixen
Posted 02 Feb 2013 06:41
This was touching and personal for me. I thought at one time if I hadn't cried any longer would he have been real, would I remember him or forget him. Endings are hard and bring on so many emotions, Thank you for sharing yours with us.

nazhinaz
Posted 02 Feb 2013 05:44
You made tears appear so desireable. 5

allinabout18times
Posted 02 Feb 2013 05:19
This one made me 'believe'
 

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