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Soft cries of heightened pleasure,

Floating from his wicked soul,

Love dripping from her treasure,

Claiming the heart she once stole.

A tale of forbidden lust,

Of seduction and amour,

Angelic eyes speak of trust,

Her tongue spells of words impure.

Crumbling, submissive pleas,

Her whispers so raw and dark,

Surrendering, on his knees.

Licentious sins leave their mark.

Failing to resist her charms,

Of the beauty that is she,

Cradled softly in her arms,

Love blinded for him to see.

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Posted 20 Jul 2013 22:13
Softly blows your head back

Posted 25 Jun 2013 09:58
Loved how your words said just enough to allow my imagination to take off. The problem with being one of the last to read is everything I would have said has already been said. Very good comments by all.
Posted 20 Jun 2013 13:30
an excellent story of forbidden lust. I can feel the passion to my core. I love it! Good job Candy.
Posted 14 Jun 2013 23:16
Absolutely wonderful xx

Posted 12 Jun 2013 16:47
Great work! You did an excellent job writing this!
Posted 12 Jun 2013 06:35
Very erotic, lustful, and down right HOT! Anything involving a whisper is arousing to me.
Posted 11 Jun 2013 23:44
Very erotic. Loved it.
Posted 11 Jun 2013 11:58
So expressive. A great read.

Posted 10 Jun 2013 20:00
Such a beautiful, dark mood. I loved it. Lust conquers all? Well done!

Posted 10 Jun 2013 19:20
Oh sweets, you just keep getting better and better. This was incredible, just like you.

Posted 10 Jun 2013 14:19
My dear candy, that was sure a dandy!

I hope more people score well, If not you can tell them to go to hell!

Posted 10 Jun 2013 09:05
So Sensual and Passionate!

Posted 10 Jun 2013 01:08
Nicely done Candy. Simple and yet so powerful, with a beautiful flow. Really great poem and easy 5++ ;-)

Posted 10 Jun 2013 00:39
I am not sure where to even start. Do I talk about how your words peeled open my soul, or so I mention how it felt like you reached inside of me and cupped my heart and tenderly held it while you whispered that in my ear. I'm just lost for words in all honesty. I don't think anything has moved me the way that did. It made me ache inside.. I adore you..

Posted 09 Jun 2013 18:05
Nicely done enjoy it so much

Posted 09 Jun 2013 17:58
Her whispers so raw and dark.

That is a beautiful line, conjuring up images of sensual pleasure

Posted 09 Jun 2013 16:00
Sexy and sensual. Both raw and sophisticated. An irresistible blend of words. Nicely done!

Posted 09 Jun 2013 14:35
This is beautiful. It captures the passion of the moment and captivates the reader. Wonderful work.
Posted 09 Jun 2013 14:25
Well done. Passionate, raw and seductive. Thank you for sharing this excellent piece with us.

Posted 09 Jun 2013 13:55
so passionately worded!! Terrific!

Posted 09 Jun 2013 13:41
Lovely work! I enjoyed the whole mood of your poem, Candy. "Her whispers so raw and dark" was a standout for me.
Posted 09 Jun 2013 13:34
You go deep, Candy, very deep indeed. Whatever it was that prompted the muse to select you for this knew they had to find someone who could cut to the bone and lay it all out there. Nicely done once more.

Posted 09 Jun 2013 13:22
Your words flowed effortlessly as your desires pour from the page. Exudes passion and fire, I love it. Well done!

Posted 09 Jun 2013 13:11
Hard to resist these charming words, Candy

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