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Tender Heart, Keep Still…

my first poem...please be gentle

Tender heart keep still
You've been through a lot
Of soul wrenching pain
and heart rending spell.

Torn, slashed, and tattered
Seeking refuge was all that mattered
Tried to look in all direction
Hoping to find divine intervention.

Then an angel in disguise
Came along to your surprise
A kind heart, so thoughtful
Bring healing to your soul.

Sweet words that flattered
A heart which has long been shattered,
Has always been looked forward to
Like a magnet, this heart clinged to.

But wait, dear heart
Be wary and don’t be hasty
Lest you will find yourself
Loving in vain
And being hurt again.

Tender heart, keep still...
(Try to learn your lesson well).

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asleep
Posted 19 Feb 2013 18:12
I think what you are saying is best defined/expressed in the last full verse?? I do not see death in the opening line, but rather an admonishment to just 'stop' a bit...rather like taking a rest break from a strenuous game. You have done a beautiful job with this and I am off to read the next one!! Thanks for sharing with us.
nazhinaz
Posted 26 Aug 2012 01:59
Sweetie, still heart means death. beware what you desiring. beautiful thoughts & form too. 5
spearone
Posted 31 Jul 2012 23:48
OMG! Fabulous flow and rhyme!! Wonderful talent there - look forward to reading more...
Makavelli
Posted 29 Jul 2012 19:29
I love the flow, the tone, and emotion of this poem. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem!
Kiki
Posted 25 Jul 2012 14:15
Beautiful Words... and beautifully put...

LatinSugar
Posted 25 Jul 2012 13:50
Bravo!!! Goodness, your first and it is amazing. Please share more of these precious gems, your words. You have all the right stuff.

VanGogh
Posted 24 Jul 2012 20:39
that was wonderful!! I could imagine it put to music ... wonderful!
etairay
Posted 24 Jul 2012 15:51
wow thank you love it ..tender thoughtful carin scared & loving ..beautiful
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 24 Jul 2012 13:54
how lovely....
2706ali
Posted 24 Jul 2012 12:25
Classy choice of words to tell you pain and warn others to use wisdom ...loved it !!!
HK4167
Posted 24 Jul 2012 09:58
Beautiful poem with heartfelt emotions and quite wise. Totally worth a 5, and congratulation on your very first poem!
 

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