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The Beach

So let us wander hand in hand
Along the barren shore,
Be buffeted by sea-swept gusts
And dare to dream of more.
Beneath the dark forbidding sky,
Pale footsteps in the sand;
Insignificant you and I
For love must make a stand.

Do pull me to your damaged heart,
Press my face to your chest.
Allow tempest to whip our clothes
Let our confusion rest.
And as the spraying salted air
Flays our trembling skin,
Please open yourself unto me
Once more allow me in.

The noisesome crowds are far behind
It is just you and me:
Solitary, conjoined, alone
A place we might be free.
Barriers I’ll lay at your feet;
Hear my supplicant plea.
I’ve come to crawl, I’ve come to beg
For our lost destiny.

Do you recall when we did stand
In such a windswept place,
And as raw nature thrashed and blew
We found our secret space?
Where all the world is but two eyes,
Two mouths, two tongues, four lips,
And I was captured in your arms
Succumbed to true love’s grip.

Yet now I know that you were Lear
And I was but The Fool;
That when to madness we did drift
Devotion can be cruel.
But I will stand upon this beach
Eyes staring out to sea,
Surrounded by my memories
Heart pining still for thee.

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Comments(19)

curious3045
Posted 27 May 2013 19:49
Very well written
Mambo_King
Posted 03 Feb 2013 08:26
How could I not read another one CG and I so enjoyed the rhythm and the fantasy that builds. I could feel the crashing waves of orgasm that was behind the words - Added to favorties
Create yet another amazing day!
Piquet
Posted 08 Jul 2012 04:51
I love your last four lines - perfect and poignant. Well done too for using Shakespearean allusions. Well Done.
redlips
Posted 20 Jun 2012 08:45
I've read it over and over and still come back and read it again. So lovely and touching.

Frank_Lee
Posted 17 Jun 2012 06:39
This is both beautiful and remarkable. The form is so well controlled it never gets in the way. It's driving your intent rather than demeaning it, as can easily happen. Real poetry takes risks, and this is real poetry. Thank you.

principessa
Posted 15 Jun 2012 14:55
What is it about the ocean? Bittersweet and romantic.

playsit
Posted 07 Jun 2012 05:16
CG, this is beautiful poetry. The flow, the metre, the pace... perfect. The emptiness of reflecting on lost love was captured elequently.
HK4167
Posted 03 Jun 2012 20:15
Such a beautifully written sweet romantic poem. Amazing work.
ArtMan
Posted 02 Jun 2012 20:52
Outstanding!
Coco
Posted 02 Jun 2012 07:40
Quite breathtaking! I've read it four times.
PhilAnders
Posted 02 Jun 2012 04:20
Superbly sensuous!
Yes, CG, let us wander hand in hand and go to wherever that leads us.

crazydiamond
Posted 02 Jun 2012 01:00
Wow CG you've done it again! That was excellent.
Alphamagus
Posted 02 Jun 2012 00:14
That was simply breathtaking!! This is one of the best poems, I have read on lush!!. Fantastic Job. xxx
sprite
Posted 01 Jun 2012 21:55
This is a beautiful piece, if a bit sad. the emotions you capture are of so many colors.
magnificent1rascal
Posted 01 Jun 2012 19:33
Simply lovely.
beowulf69
Posted 01 Jun 2012 19:15
that's great!
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 01 Jun 2012 16:43
wow...
Ianthomas
Posted 01 Jun 2012 15:21
Neat and sweet; the cleverness leaves me as always unsure; two eyes coz yours are closed devotedly or coz the others have already been plucked? It will be subtler than that I know! Whatever, the longing laps nicely in and out with this one. PS Neat link.
Sisyphus
Posted 01 Jun 2012 15:02
Quite lovely and lyrical. I like the allusion to Lear and cruel/fool rhyme. Several dramatic rhythms. "I've come to crawl. I've come to beg." I like the description in your secret space..two eyes, two mouths, two tongues, four lips..(the the lips/grip rhyme is a little off, but still works. I accept your desire to use certain words from another time...they are you and have a lovely charm...
 

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