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The Best You Ever Had

Yet another poem of lost love...originally posted under 67Goat...
All the trust we've built together,
Bonds developed from the start,
Have somehow been ripped in two,
Like you ripped apart my heart.

Funny how you think you know someone,
Because you lie beside them in bed,
But it's only their words you'll ever hear,
Not what goes on inside their head.

Now you tell me you want to leave,
With barely a spoken goodbye,
Taking your things and walking out,
And I'm left to wonder why.

Haven't I been good to you?
So loving and so kind,
But you say you're moving on,
Just leaving me behind.

I just have to try to realize,
To you I never really did belong,
This is something you had to do,
It's nothing I did wrong.

So much may happen in life,
So much I'll never understand,
So many things I've had to deal with,
So much of it unplanned.

I just hope someday you realize,
As you're sitting alone and sad,
That the one you chose to leave,
Was the best you ever had.

04-20-10.
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Comments(10)

BrandiFucks
Posted 28 Nov 2013 09:09
awesome

Mysteria27
Posted 12 Oct 2013 04:06
I really enjoyed your poem. It was very emotional. I could feel all your words. Lovely. 5
rune
Posted 28 Sep 2013 20:49
this is beautiful... sad too, thank you for sharing glad i found you here...
HotBttmInBriefs
Posted 10 Jul 2013 06:08
Great poem. Enjoyed reading it.
Bunny12
Posted 19 May 2011 11:58
Just read this again Alan in since the first read been there done that you struck a cord buddy!
easy_rider75
Posted 23 Feb 2011 12:08
Great poem Bro I can very much relate to it
harbour
Posted 09 Nov 2010 13:28
This so perfectly captures the pain only a loved one can inflict. Really beautifully done.
tinytit
Posted 23 Jun 2010 21:16
very nice ty
Juice
Posted 25 Apr 2010 18:19
Feels like your wrote that straight from the heart. Poignant and heartfelt.
Bunny12
Posted 25 Apr 2010 09:14
Another good one Alan!
 

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