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to know and be known

tonight I feel your hands
touching my face
touching my breasts
touching my very heart.

you have no idea
the gift you give me
as you show me your true self
as you seek to see my true self.

the orgasm is something beyond
mere physical reaction
and the spasm of muscles
and the rush of wetness.

it is an explosion
of life
and belonging
and forever.

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Comments(17)


SydneySider
Posted 14 Mar 2012 19:18
short, erotic, and to the point. Loved it...
ArtMan
Posted 12 Mar 2012 13:00
Excellent!
ibee
Posted 12 Mar 2012 09:11
gift wrapped?Under the covers.
wiseowl
Posted 12 Mar 2012 07:15
Ahhh .. I like that, .. a lot. I want to (will) take you there .. with words.

Buz
Posted 12 Mar 2012 05:44
Really great, very hot!
Sisyphus
Posted 12 Mar 2012 03:33
It's so beautiful and wonderful to be able to experience another realm through the power of an orgasm. You capture the miracle of ecstacy, the gift of being known through the giving of oneself. It reminds of the line from Shakespeare's The Tempest..."Ah brave new world that hath such wonders in it."
sweetpussyx
Posted 12 Mar 2012 02:36
Everything everyone has said here plus some...... you have a gift indeed
mickeyfinn1
Posted 12 Mar 2012 01:51
Erotic raw sex.I always love it as well!
nazhinaz
Posted 12 Mar 2012 01:14
Beautiful poem. You turning into a wonderful poet darling. Exceptionally beautiful expression, diction and poetic form. You great Sugah. 5

VanGogh
Posted 11 Mar 2012 18:50
bravo!!

DLizze
Posted 11 Mar 2012 15:14
excellent
ArtAngel
Posted 11 Mar 2012 12:13
Totally erotic..plays music to my ears..You have a rare style..unlike all others..Impressive & eloquent..((look over here Mods))..A Yellow Ribbon needed..!!!
HK4167
Posted 11 Mar 2012 11:03
Raw, sexy, I can see you closing your eyes craving for that touch. Impressive piece worth a 5.
angeldust
Posted 11 Mar 2012 10:49
what a rarity such an astounishing poem make one wonder is all you need is a touch to feel the energy of love.
Warlock
Posted 11 Mar 2012 09:47
Makes me want an orgasm.. hmmmm.. wonder who's around? lol.. very nicely done Sugah..

alexmarch
Posted 11 Mar 2012 09:28
It is rare and refreshing to see writing that simply gets exponentially better (not that it wasn't good to start out) with each posting. The clarity and focus is impressive. The expression that comes through so clearly is beautiful. Simplicity coupled with depth. A definite "5".

Frank_Lee
Posted 11 Mar 2012 08:34
This is fucking stunning...
 

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