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The Day You Saved Me

The day She saved me
The loneliness, the despair and emptiness surrounds me,
A million words and yet not one touches my soul

I read but I feel nothing, a chasm opens before me,
As words for the sake of words spew out, meaninglessly

I try to see some beauty, or order, but all I see is darkness
It envelops, cloying, a fetid miasma it is

I want to run, but the walls close in, an evil thesaurus
I cry inwardly, seeing what no one should ever see

And then just when I think all is lost, you come along,
My beautiful campanoligist rings – your lovely peel

My heart lifts from its slumber as I hear your song,
Suddenly, my darling saves me and I know this is real

Your words dance and skip on the page, fine melody,
So sweet your lines, each thought a thousand kisses

The joy as I read is like warm air, a perfect remedy
You know I love you, as you alone grant my wishes

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Posted 15 Dec 2013 23:31
A naughty and nicely crafted poem. Well done.
Posted 15 Dec 2013 23:29
Such a beautiful poem. Well done.

Posted 13 Dec 2013 19:00
This is a truly beautiful poem Danny! I loved its rhythm as well as the content.
Posted 13 Dec 2013 08:11
Very nice! Beautiful!
Posted 11 Dec 2013 12:08
Posted 11 Dec 2013 08:39
A delightful change of pace and beautiful exploration of deep emotion. A wonderful poem Danny!
Posted 10 Dec 2013 23:19
Beautiful. 5

Posted 10 Dec 2013 20:36
Another amazing work of art by a gifted artist!! Great job!!!
Posted 10 Dec 2013 19:32
this started so dark, and ended so light. Hopeful and full of promise. Well done.

Posted 10 Dec 2013 18:59
Just beautiful...

Posted 10 Dec 2013 18:33
just glorious how love does save us and give us joy..lovely writing
Posted 10 Dec 2013 17:19
This poem is marvelous
Posted 10 Dec 2013 15:30
I agree . A beautiful poem . Well written5++

Posted 10 Dec 2013 15:23
This is a lovely and beautiful poem. 5

Posted 10 Dec 2013 15:22
Oh, Danny. There are no words. This was simply wonderful, thank you

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