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The Green Eyed Monster

Love me for who I am
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J ealousy will never be a part of my daily life

E very time you display it causes me nothing but strife

A llow me to be me, I know right from wrong

L et me show you how as a couple we do belong

O utbursts and tantrums you say isn’t the real you

U nderstanding and respect is what should be our glue

S pying and snooping isn’t showing that you care

Y ou trying to control me and it’s something I can’t bear.

I try to be everything that you want me to be

But changing who I am will that set you free

You say I crave attention, I guess that’s what you see

I just love chatting with those that want to chat with me

My friendliness to others you somehow see as a flaw

When it gets too much for you, you walk out the door

So how are we going to resolve all these issues on display

Sweep them under the rug to talk about another day

Just love me for who I am and everything that I do

Let’s just make each other happy and never, ever blue

Green is a color that doesn’t look very good on you

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Banes1
Posted 26 Mar 2013 14:12
Nicely written. Loved it.

Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 12 Jan 2013 15:36
very well written, heartfelt with a strong message! Yes, you should be loved for being you!!!

asleep
Posted 07 Dec 2012 09:13
I just re-read this piece...thank you for the lesson!!

ily, RLA

TJRogue
Posted 28 Nov 2012 12:37
Simply wonderful. "just love me for who I am, and everything I do" I believe that is called unconditional love.

shado786
Posted 22 Nov 2012 13:42
nice poem and well written .getting ppl to understand the seriousness of the green eye

Buz
Posted 20 Nov 2012 19:12
Excellent writing Joan! Very expressive and and heartfelt.

1lush
Posted 20 Nov 2012 14:14
The true meaning of jealousy, you hit it on the nose. Never give in to someone forcing their will on you.

Navin
Posted 19 Nov 2012 14:29
Perfectly expressed.

Gramps
Posted 19 Nov 2012 06:40
Really now, who am I on the inside? Who really are you? Yes, answers to those questions can be discovered (yes, discovered) through caring and meaningful chat (on-line or in person) with one-another.
Thanks Joan for your writings and thoughts.

PhilAnders
Posted 19 Nov 2012 02:26
Joan, such a raw exploration of one's inner emotions and feelings is as rare as is a lovely, loving, lady such as you. Thank you for sharing it.

If this is about a real person in your life, you'd be better off without him.

frogprince
Posted 19 Nov 2012 00:26
The green eyed monster is an emotion that simmers just under the covers. Until one day it erupts killing everything in its path. Everyone needs trust and respect. Without it there is no love. I f you can't be trusted then forget the person who can't trust. Jealously eats away like an acid. It leaves nothing behind. Joanie you are a unique lady. You deserve the best. He is out there and will fall in your lap. Just be patient. ILY my love.

rolandloops
Posted 19 Nov 2012 00:25
It was a wonderful poem.
Roland

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nazhinaz
Posted 18 Nov 2012 20:36
Joan you express so wonderful in this typical form of poetry. 5

asleep
Posted 18 Nov 2012 20:16
You express yourself well about such strong emotions. "5" is never enough.

ily, Rick

Kal-El85
Posted 18 Nov 2012 19:30
Jealousy is a powerful emotion. . .liked how you use it as a message and created a powerful word-play.

Saga
Posted 18 Nov 2012 19:27
Strong emotions and powerful message!! Yes, you should be loved for being you! Hugs!

tarnishedknight
Posted 18 Nov 2012 19:23
Jealousy springs from insecurity and can grow like a cancer. Early issues nearly always get worse as time passes and the need to control increases. Be very very cautious if you choose to proceed.

Peter_Pan
Posted 18 Nov 2012 19:17
This is a very worrying poem. Good, well written, but worrying. Hope things are alright, sweetie.
 

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