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The Message
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The Message

What she did not say in her message
I sent you a message today

filled with things I couldn't speak

I love you I need you

I am so very weak

I sent you a longing

in a message so short

my love was masked by pain

in all that I wrote

I sent you my love

in texts oh so sad

what I wanted to say

was hidden by words that were oh so mad

I sent you my heart

in a form oh so small

the actions of my love

on my life it befalls

I sent you me

wrapped up in hate

I need you my love

in this I failed to communicate

I know you moved on

I know you love me not

but even after all this time

for me...I cannot

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Comments(13)


GardenerGuy
Posted 17 Feb 2014 21:56
Powerful words on loss.
peteyx
Posted 06 Jan 2014 08:26
A sad poem I hope that you will soon start to feel better X
rosesrred
Posted 03 Jan 2014 20:32
You said it all in one beautiful, sad poem. I've been there myself so I cried with you! Love hurts but time heals!
DarkSide
Posted 03 Jan 2014 03:28
Sad but well expressed.
1hottflamingo
Posted 02 Jan 2014 19:16
you said it all. well done.

VanGogh
Posted 02 Jan 2014 18:15
Your poem made my heart ache and weep for you .... *hugs .... one day, some day - this will start to heal and your writing must be helping! xoxo
oldvietnamvet47
Posted 02 Jan 2014 15:02
Love hurts. Sad. Well written.
meredith
Posted 02 Jan 2014 13:44
"I know you love me not", saddest line in the verse. Tis time to move on.......
CharlesDickin
Posted 02 Jan 2014 12:25
I loved the line "I sent you my love in a form oh so small". What a shame that what we're really saying can often be so subtle that it can be so easily missed...
Piper71
Posted 02 Jan 2014 10:55
Very nice.

Strangerlyd
Posted 02 Jan 2014 08:13
, So many emotions, Lovely writing...

Mysteria27
Posted 02 Jan 2014 08:01
This is very beautiful and sad but you must move on. It isn't healthy to pine on people. You are a beautiful and confident women who will find love again. Maybe a months of sadness, but then happiness and brighter days. Lovely and beautiful writing as always. xoxo 5

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asleep
Posted 02 Jan 2014 07:59
Very well stated and so many folk can relate to this on a very personal level. I truly hope your "message" is not lost nor ignored. You are way worth NOT ignoring. It's difficult at times to put one's feeling out in the open like this. Thanks for sharing this with your readers and followers.

Love,
Rick
 

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