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The Shower Gift

I know exactly what she needs...
As soon as I open the door and climb in
The desperate look on your face,
The way you’re carrying yourself,
Is so damn revealing
For you, my love, are in need
And I know
Exactly what you’re looking for

You need me
So I take hold of your arms
Placing them above your head
Your wrists held firmly against the cold, unforgiving marble
While I use my feet to spread your legs a little further apart
Pressing you against the wall of the shower

You need me
To pinch your nipples, and pinch them hard
As I ease behind you and caress the length of your body
Running my hands over your soft belly and lovely breasts
Then playfully tapping my cock against your hardened clit
Until you moan, yearning to be filled

You want me
To say those three words that you love to hear
But when other words reverberate on the walls
You moan in response
“You are mine!” I whisper in your ear, grabbing your hair
Taking my cock in hand I press forward
Shoving it between the tight, smooth folds of your sex

You need me
You want it hard... you want it furious
So it’s up on my tip toes
Enabling me to power fuck you
Burying my tool ever deeper inside of you
And as our love chamber echoes from your screams
Your body spasms through your first come of the morning

As the floodgates open,
Your body still quaking from my ministrations,
The water cascades over us
Cooling our bodies
As our co-mingled come
Washes down our limbs

And now, in spite of your tattered breathing,
Insatiable you requires more, a repeat performance
For you are a slave to your own need
Your body and mind, obliged to be satisfied
Your need to get off again is overwhelming

You need me
I can tell as you turn back and look at me with those half-closed eyes
So I drop to my knees
And ravage you with my lips, my tongue, my fingers
Nothing is off limits when you are like this
Your urges have robbed you of every inhibition, every fear
It’s just you...and me...and pleasure

You need me, plain and simple,
And in oh so many ways
And I, my lover, need you
I will fulfill every longing of your heart
For it is my privilege to be your man
To shower you with my love
For it is...
My gift to you

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Comments(19)

suzysucks
Posted 22 Aug 2012 06:25
Yes, what you're looking for.
Jon39
Posted 18 Aug 2012 19:29
I take back my 3 stars after a re-read. but Lush won't let me change my rating. After my first read I saw the narrator as conceited. Now I see him as a benevolent dom.
Jon39
Posted 15 Aug 2012 21:05
Well, I like the hot sex in the shower. It's steamy. But the "desperate look on your face," which is, of course, because "you need me," is a bit much. The piece ends with, "My gift to you." Oh well, it's a nice fantasy. I appreciate the passion as well as the writing.
assassin
Posted 27 Jul 2012 15:37
Nice job
Kiki
Posted 13 Jul 2012 08:03
Very hot very erotic, beautifully done!

playsit
Posted 13 Jul 2012 07:54
The desperate passion captured in this poem is wonderful. Nicely written.
MissyLuvsYa
Posted 08 Jul 2012 09:33
MIke this is just lovely, you did a wonderful job of writing! 5+
ArtMan
Posted 02 Jul 2012 07:37
Excellent writing on this!
SecretDesire
Posted 01 Jul 2012 11:12
A shower! Well with a poem like yours... I wish there was someone waiting for me in the shower now... cause I need one after reading this poem.

Excellent writing! I loved it..5+++.

Jayne33
Posted 28 Jun 2012 03:45
Capturing feelings with words and transporting me to the scene, loved it.

verity
Posted 28 Jun 2012 03:07
A gift of pure indulgence, excellent writing, very sexy!

sweet_as_candy
Posted 27 Jun 2012 23:28
Damn Iphone and autocorrect! What I meant to say was, 'Oh wow that was amazingly HOT and sexy!' Great descriptions that played perfectly in my mind! x
Ariel21
Posted 27 Jun 2012 22:32
Exquisite poem
XxPrimalGoddessxX
Posted 27 Jun 2012 20:40
You seem to know what many need!

TXGirl
Posted 27 Jun 2012 20:35
So clever, so creative, and SOOOO hot!! (That goes for you AND your poem.)
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 27 Jun 2012 20:23
well, well.. just... oh my.... lucky woman...

Buz
Posted 27 Jun 2012 19:31
That is really good. Great writing.

sweet_as_candy
Posted 27 Jun 2012 14:24
Oh that was amazingly got and sexy! W
etairay
Posted 27 Jun 2012 14:22
wow thank you love it ..felt it ..saw it ..was it ..ahm need a damn shower now with him thx
 

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