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The Way You Make Me Feel

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How am I supposed to tell you,

The way that you really make me feel,

When every time I speak to you,

My words all leave my head?

So I guess I’m just going to have to tell you,

When you’re not online,

Exactly the way you make me feel,

When you are.

The way you talk to me,

Like I’m your best friend,

Your lover,

Your sister.

I lose track of time,

But you knew that,

I’m happy you’re here,

But sad I’m not there.

Down becomes up,

Left becomes right,

Out becomes in,

Dark becomes light.

I feel ecstatic,

When we’re at it,

Life’s dramatic,

But don’t stop it.

I feel like the strongest person,

The weakest person,

The richest person,

The poorest.

Strong because I know I have your love,

Weak because when I talk to you my defences are down,

Rich because your love should be currency,

Poor because I can never give you enough of mine.

Put simply,

I love you.
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Comments(18)

rune
Posted 06 Jun 2013 07:06
no one is poor in love, they are the best person who cares thank you for sharing they are lovely have a great day!
EroticElegance
Posted 07 Dec 2012 09:59
So beautifully written. Your heart's an open book. Well done!
Ianthomas
Posted 01 Dec 2012 08:13
sweetly told rendition of the ridiculous screwed up emotions of online love!
JamieW
Posted 14 Nov 2012 04:50
Accomplished word smith indeed 5/5
SecretDesire
Posted 13 May 2012 08:00
Excellent! Very sentimental….Loved it. Well written…5+
TonyNon
Posted 11 May 2012 17:22
looking at the above (or possibly below when this posts )... 'nuff said.Thanks
mickeyfinn1
Posted 08 May 2012 12:44
straight from the heart..beautifully constructed and thought out

AngelHeart01
Posted 07 May 2012 16:59
Nice one ... with love, the defenses aren't the same.
etairay
Posted 07 May 2012 15:59
thank you loved it
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 07 May 2012 13:10
i understand this sentiment.... lovely

DLizze
Posted 07 May 2012 11:46
Very well done. You captured exactly the roller coaster of emotion that is inherent in an online love relationship.
sexyeyes37
Posted 07 May 2012 08:48
Lovely words,good expression.

DanielleX
Posted 07 May 2012 07:50
This poem made me cry. It's so beautifully written and I know every word was torn from your heart. The fact that you've not even used rhyme or used assonance makes it all the more an incredible piece of work. She's a lucky girl, whoever this is about. A 5+ merit

simplyjohn
Posted 07 May 2012 07:48
Its good Sarah ... for me in comes together in the 2nd half but is tells a story and has good flow and super punchline.
lightheart
Posted 07 May 2012 07:18
"Many years ago we began
our journey of life together
many times to climb the hills
only to topple back down
we did not succumb to our falls
rather we comforted and healed
and carried the voyage on

Sometimes throughout the journey
our worries where heavy
to overwhelming to carry alone
we'd buckled beneath the weight
picking each other up , struggling up wards
dissolving the pain , laughing at our falls
surviving hand in hand , together"

you expressed beautifully....loved it
Michael
Posted 07 May 2012 06:08
Sarah, this is one of those poems that when I read it the second time, everything falls into place and I love....
Nice Work!
SpeedyC
Posted 07 May 2012 04:07
Love it
nazhinaz
Posted 07 May 2012 03:50
Beautifully expressed. Was it meant for the girl friend? If so why added "Your sister"? 5 for the multiplicity of thoughts.
 

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