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The Wonder of You

Ode from an admirer
Whispering softly, your words embrace me, like a gentle siren,
luring me towards your inner beauty, your foundry.

I wander through your work, discovering your gifts,
And with each line, I wonder, amazed how your writing lifts.

Whether erotic or teasing, you melt my heart, unknowing,
Your metre, a soft breath on my neck - making goose bumps.

You are an inspiration, your coppery tresses, pre-Raphaelite,
Leaving an indelible mark on my soul, you vixen, you wizard.

Your words sparkle, a myriad of thoughts, eliciting awe,
I shiver - reading, a delightful sympathetic response, tense and raw.

Never stop my darling, don't desist, feed us with your skill,
I will love you always, worship your locution, while ever you tease and thrill.

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Comments(15)

cumonmesweetpuss
Posted 19 Nov 2013 07:28
Mmm your hot!
HK4167
Posted 09 Nov 2013 19:30
So lovely, sweet and beautiful. Excellent work!
Tom1955
Posted 09 Nov 2013 04:56
Very well written! Just Beautiful! I loved it!
nazhinaz
Posted 08 Nov 2013 23:59
Fell in love. Amazed by the beauty. 5

Strangerlyd
Posted 08 Nov 2013 23:11
Just Beautiful....
Aussie_kitty77
Posted 08 Nov 2013 22:27
wow beautiful
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 08 Nov 2013 19:13
lovely...

Buz
Posted 08 Nov 2013 17:16
Outstanding poem Danielle!

Liz
Posted 08 Nov 2013 15:00
Wow. This is a really lovely piece, it flows really effortlessly. 'pre-Raphaelite' was an artistic touch - I loved that.
syzygy
Posted 08 Nov 2013 13:13
Love the idea of inner beauty as a foundry. And love the phrase "you vixen, you wizard." Nice work.

FeistyWolf1970
Posted 08 Nov 2013 13:03
excellent flow with meaning... very enjoyable read
Jsmooth721
Posted 08 Nov 2013 12:46
Such heartfelt expression of emotions, well written

Milik_Redman
Posted 08 Nov 2013 12:17
Beautifully expressed. Your verse flows easily. It's a joy to read of such powerful love and desire.

Nightmare414
Posted 08 Nov 2013 12:12
An amazing gift. You are one of the most gifted writers on this site. Love this one as well as all of your work
mountainbreeze
Posted 08 Nov 2013 11:50
I love it D!
 

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