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Things I want to see

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Before I die I want to see
The Northern Lights
Mysterious and daunting
The Southern Cross
In all its glory
Your nipples
A tiny strand of saliva still connecting me to one of them after a long kiss
Your vagina
Glistening, open and inviting
Healing
You healed from your pain

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ArtAngel
Posted 05 Feb 2012 16:49
I really liked your revision on this..sensual & yet written with such passion

Mobius_NR
Posted 03 Nov 2011 17:23
The rewrite is:

Things I want to see Before my time is done I want to see: The Northern Lights in all their mystery and brilliance

The Southern Cross in its magnificent simplicity

Within the year I want to see Your face in the first soft glimmer of morning

Your nipples, pierced and sensitive a thin strand of saliva still connecting us

Your vagina glistening and open, inviting me. Demanding of me.

Your soul healed and no longer in pain

smiler77
Posted 03 Nov 2011 15:00
I like this!

Mobius_NR
Posted 03 Nov 2011 13:35
Thanks. Actually I rewrote it on the plane and will send the revision to you later today.

LauraLee_sugah
Posted 03 Nov 2011 09:56
lovely
 

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