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To Be

Tags: angel, love, happy
Angel inside
To Be

To be

Or just to find

Not the glossy package

But the angel inside

Trying to shine her gentle light

Out

Into the world

“Look this is me” she says

"The real me

I’m here

Accept me

Love me

And I’ll be

Forever Happy" ...

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bobjack
Posted 25 Jun 2012 12:22
Beautiful I am amazed at how fast you can turn these out. In this one I accept you. Can you accept me?

playsit
Posted 24 Jun 2012 16:35
The desire for acceptance... we all have to some degree. Beautifully worded.

etairay
Posted 23 Jun 2012 17:26
wow thank you love it ..cryin screaming real & honest ..beautiful

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nazhinaz
Posted 22 Jun 2012 21:52
Love is what all of us want till the last breath. 5

EroticElegance
Posted 22 Jun 2012 21:44
Beautifully poignant! Thank you.

sexymlee520
Posted 22 Jun 2012 19:49
Soo beautiful. This is sooo me. Thank you soo much for soo beautifully writing it!!

LauraLee_sugah
Posted 22 Jun 2012 17:55
i understand this... it is what my last poem is about... so i guess it is something we all want...

Sisyphus
Posted 22 Jun 2012 17:47
So simple and diret, the desire to be seen and accepted is what we all need and want to be happy. Your desire to let the angel inside out, to shine to be your true self and loved is so honestly expressed. Lovely

Milik_The_Red
Posted 22 Jun 2012 17:25
Beautifully done

Navin
Posted 22 Jun 2012 16:28
A perfect use of minimalist language to say so very much. Well done.
 

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