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I'm giving poetry a try... so please do comment and forgive me if I'm not up to standard.

I lost my soul, my meaning and my eyes.
Forgave the time but not it's ever lasting traces
I gasped for air between a thousand sighs.
Believed your lies and all your many faces
But nothing held my world from crumbling
The night you left my side.

There are a million other clouds to rain
But I am dry from tears poring down my past.
And yet no rushing river can erase the stain
Of bitter words that crushed so fast
The little wonder world I built by dreaming
Of honesty and love but couldn't last.

By me, no curse would ever reach your soul
And there would be no restless nights for you.
I wish you light and joy to make you whole.
But you will find as time unravels you are due
To pay the broken shards still staining
The inside of my chest a deep red kind of hew.

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Comments(12)


asleep
Posted 15 Aug 2013 06:13
Very nice job! I'm glad I stumbled across this and look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for being brave enough and kind enough to share this with your readers. "5"+++ is an easy score on this.

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flytoomuch
Posted 22 Feb 2013 02:36
Well I've returned to this poem a few times. Very touching.

VanGogh
Posted 12 Jul 2012 19:12
I've read this poem a number of times .... so moving! thank you!

LatinSugar
Posted 28 Apr 2012 20:06
Lovely heartfelt work...Bravo...
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 04 Feb 2012 21:28
feel the shards.... phew... beautifully written...

Frank_Lee
Posted 04 Feb 2012 20:47
A beautifully written poem..whether it's a first, second or hundredth.

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flytoomuch
Posted 12 Nov 2011 05:58
"But you will find as time unravels...." Wonderful!! Well done!!
Jellyfish
Posted 28 Oct 2011 10:42
Great poem!
Knickerbocker7
Posted 07 Oct 2011 08:21
Nice job! Just flowed together nicely and no grammatical errors ;-) Sweet.
Simply_Susan
Posted 24 Sep 2011 06:23
Can't beleive its a first poem. beautiful work.
nazhinaz
Posted 20 Sep 2011 02:52
"There are a million other clouds to rain" yep there definitely are a million clouds to rain; but the one which can shower love upon you; thats the cloud for you.
Alphamagus
Posted 19 Sep 2011 21:13
I found it very moving. xx
 

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