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Trembling Lips

Tags: lips, kiss, rainbow
Searching for that kiss.
Trembling Lips

He wandered around the world
seeking the lips he first kissed,

The ones he had the pleasure
to touch his lips to, at a beach.

He searched for the girl he met
as the red sun dipped in the sea.

His lips on her trembling lips,
At the beach, staring out to sea,
she let him .

So soft, supple and loving;
her lips, her arms, her voice.

He met thousands but none
did have the same warmth and glow

She, standing with the rainbow behind her,
she was awashed with its glow.

He saw a fairy with a halo in her,
or a vision of a poetess, a Venus.

Her slightly open lips urging
his pair of lips to join hers,

To complete the colors of
the rainbow or Venus’s glow.

His ship took him around,
away over the seven seas.

To countries far and near, but
he found that rainbow nowhere.

He missed the vision of the poetess,
Venus, the fairy of his vision.

His lips miss the glow of the rainbow
which the girl completed with her halo.
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Posted 22 Aug 2013 04:23
Very good poem. Very deep and heartfelt. 5
Posted 19 Dec 2012 04:33
Damn good stuff. I had to read it twice.

Posted 19 Mar 2012 12:59
That kiss is one which lingers much beyond and stands apart from all the rest. Lovely expression weaved from threads of yearning...

Posted 09 Dec 2011 09:12
"... to complete the colors of the rainbow..." very nice word picture. I agree with Buz about capturing the sweetness and sadness.
Posted 09 Dec 2011 08:25
Lovely, I don't think you'll turn me on to poetry but I'm impressed.
Posted 07 Dec 2011 16:02
Beautiful, touching and so sweet!!
Posted 07 Dec 2011 08:58
You paint a beautiful picture, Nazhinaz with every stroke of a poets' pen!
Posted 07 Dec 2011 08:24
Posted 07 Dec 2011 08:19
very nice, tender, fav so far
Posted 07 Dec 2011 07:14
Nicely written!
Posted 07 Dec 2011 06:19
Very well written. Touching.

Posted 07 Dec 2011 03:25
Oh, I like this one a lot. We do all look for that key feeling, to relive it. You captured that concept well.

Posted 06 Dec 2011 19:05
Nazzy Man! You did a great job on this. It does capture that sweetness and sadness both.
Posted 06 Dec 2011 17:09
The sadness of finding that perfect kiss as a first kiss, but never finding it again.... Beautifully Sad.
Posted 06 Dec 2011 12:21
Very good. Very sweet!

Posted 06 Dec 2011 11:28

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