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Turn Out the Lights

The single candle I hold casts a soft, golden glow about the room. You see me walk towards you, clad in silk and lace.

With a smile, I raise the candle to my lips, purse my lips and…

Darkness. Perfect, velvet darkness.

You smell my perfume, dark and feminine.
You taste my lips on yours
You hear my breath softly whispering against your skin.
You feel me press my body to against you.

The inky darkness is the great equalizer,
it strips away the day’s pretense and stills the world
leaving only sensations and perceptions.

I reach up and trace your jaw line.
As if in answer, your head turns, and your lips find my palm.

'Just be,' I whisper, 'Just be'
I wanted you to escape the light, the visual, and just be.

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Posted 01 Apr 2013 16:44
Lovely writing... Glad I found this one! (Thanks, Liz!)

Posted 01 Apr 2013 16:39
`Perfect, velvet darkness.` Rich, descriptive, exquisite!
Posted 29 Aug 2012 12:19
Very nice, very sensual
Posted 25 Jul 2011 08:44
'Just be,' how reassuring demand. Really you do write poems beautifully, with maturity of thought, flow is wonderful, diction is appropriate. As you trying blank verse, no need to look for rhythm, rhyme & beat.
Posted 20 Jan 2011 09:06
mmm... so romantic and sensual... specially liked the line... "the inky darkness is the great equalizer...." beautiful work.

Posted 16 Jan 2011 11:23
So sensual and sexy! A rich mix of textures and pleasures.. scent, taste and sound. Loved it!

Posted 16 Jan 2011 11:20
I've always shied away from poetry because I don't think I could write as succinctly and effectively as you do here. Touching and erotic. Well done.

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