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Twisted

My insides feel twisted,
Can't seem to filter the pain

I'm slowly, and for certain
Going totally insane

I know what is happening,
I've been here before

I'm stronger and wiser,
But know we mean more

I've been called crazy, and pitiful
For loving a man

Who seems to find pleasure and solace,
With another one's hand

I have no hatred nor regret,
For the time that we shared

If I look back I can remember,
The times that you cared

So much distance between us,
At times not so kind

There was cheating and lying,
I have the visuals stuck in my mind

Forgiveness and trust,
Was given every time

I believed in you, stuck by you
No straying, or breaking the line

I knew this was special,
Right from the start

Falling in love and liking you,
Handing over my heart

Now I'm left with no contact,
And a broken heart

We planned on forever,
Never getting the start

When asked if I still love you,
I don't hesitate

I will love you forever,
Not believing it was fate
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SITTING
Posted 21 Sep 2012 03:23
Loved it! It was really emotional and heartfelt and felt so genuine... like it really came from the heart. I'm not used to poems actually 'getting' to me if you know what I mean but this one really did. It was simple and easy to understand and the meaning went far deeper than most of what I read these days. Well done! You are a great poet!

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WellMadeMale
Posted 26 Aug 2012 09:16
This made me hurt.

ArtMan
Posted 11 Jun 2012 06:34
Most excellent writing!

cocokisses
Posted 28 May 2012 09:35
Hey girl, that was sadly beautiful. So real and meaningful.

John_Doe
Posted 10 May 2012 02:42
Wow, beautiful poem. Written from the heart it seems. That sense of emotions and pain that hurt you as you break up is well described.

Michael
Posted 06 May 2012 13:35
The title says it all... perfectly disjointed, like so many loves... yeah, Twisted!
So many bits and pieces - I love, and I Hate
Bittersweet to say the least, superbly sublime at best!

mickeyfinn1
Posted 27 Feb 2012 23:58
Touching..feel the emotion.so sad.loved it!

Santamuerte
Posted 18 Jan 2012 11:18
Gut-wrenching and Beautiful.

Caligula
Posted 30 Dec 2011 00:00
Words full of power. I like this one a lot.

HK4167
Posted 10 Dec 2011 18:47
I'm not a poem fan but I could feel the true feeling behind those words. Being hurt and try to forgive.

flytoomuch
Posted 19 Nov 2011 08:34
Pulls at the heart strings and pokes at the tear ducts. Take care and treat yourself softly.

wifelover69
Posted 11 Oct 2011 04:39
man, powerful, emotional, stunning my heart weeps

scooter
Posted 26 Sep 2011 18:37
Your a true Angel, angel

tommie
Posted 13 Sep 2011 17:43
It is really twisted to feel two opposites. Hard to deal with and beautifully worded. Great job.

1curiouscat
Posted 06 Sep 2011 05:24
Emotions are never easy to convey, specially when they are on this end of the spectrum. It shows a lot about your character and personality to put in writing such a personal emotions. The best part for us, is that you did it wonderfully Congrats Angelheart! Very well Done!!!

Buz
Posted 06 Sep 2011 04:35
This is an excellent poem of heartfelt pain. Feels like it could be put to music (steel guitar & fiddle needed because only country music can express that kind of pain justly.) Great writing!

mare24
Posted 05 Sep 2011 16:46
Beautiful, truly spoke to my heart

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Dudealicious
Posted 05 Sep 2011 11:39
Meg I know where this is coming from and for you to publish this shows you are having a very difficult time right now. Hugs you tightly I'm so sorry.......

underthehood
Posted 05 Sep 2011 11:08
Very touching poem . Right from your heart expressing your raw emotions. Great job

Piquet
Posted 04 Sep 2011 01:56
Nicely written, but beautifully expressed AngelHeart. Well Done.

Makavelli
Posted 03 Sep 2011 21:08
I love it! Thanks for sharing, AngelHeart!

Callisto
Posted 03 Sep 2011 12:13
Beautifully written..

Dancing_Doll
Posted 03 Sep 2011 11:33
This kind of broke my heart a little. Honest, real, and from the heart, which is what we've come to expect from our Angelheart! It takes a lot of bravery and a kind of vulnerability to write and share something like this and for that I stand in awe and admiration. It's an emotional kind of reflection that's often hard to put into words. You did it beautifully. Well done, girl! xo

fsharp
Posted 03 Sep 2011 07:13
Beautifully expressed. My heart goes out to you.

Sebasphotograph
Posted 03 Sep 2011 02:44
A beautiful poem...

LOVE and RESPECT from The Netherlands,

Sebastian.

stephanie
Posted 03 Sep 2011 02:39
Heartfelt, sincere and genuinely touching... I'm with Felix, this is your best work to date. You get a sense of loss from the way you put the words together but there's also a sense of moving forward, of living through the regret... I'm very impressed. a 5. xx SF

HisKitten13
Posted 03 Sep 2011 01:31
I love this. It's sad and beautiful.

Magical_felix
Posted 03 Sep 2011 01:20
This is tough to read, a lot of real shit is. You have bared your heart once again, that's brave. This really hits Angelheart. It's one of the best things I've read by you. Maybe best isn't the right word... But maybe just real. This is a real piece of writing.

nazhinaz
Posted 03 Sep 2011 01:18
"I will love you forever, Not believing it was fate". What a commitment with the beloved one. Great.
 

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