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Two Hearts

Tags: love, longing
Now til the foreseeable future...
Two hearts
So far apart,
Separated by a vast sea,
Rampant storms, torrid currents.
Yet they beat harmoniously as One
And only One.
Two minds, two souls
Entwined like delicate lace,
Beautiful but complicated,
Strong but fragile.
Each passing day
We weave the very fabric of our Love.
Extending tendrils
Out from both shores
Uniting in the middle
Of this inhospitable world.
Our day, our time
It has come
I scan a landscape of nameless faces, then
There you are
Our eyes engage from a distance
A gaze of lust and love.
A mixture of excitement
Nervousness, leaves me paralysed
As my dreams morph into reality
I feel like I'm floating towards you
In slow motion
After what feels like an eternity
Our first touch
Its a brush of your skin
Its warm, smooth, soft
Woven from silk
Hearts once thousands of miles away
Nearer by all but a few inches
Pounding to escape confining bodies
To beat against one another.
Each beat circulates the air
Passed between brushing lips.
The embrace of joined bodies is warm, tender.
This exchange of heat and oxygen
Fueling the fire and passion
Of this Love
Beyond our dreams and fantasies.
My whole being
Buzzing, dizzy, trembling, tingling
Fighting my dazed senses
To hold on to clear pictures
Of this dazzling moment.
One I want to remember
Until I take
My last


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Posted 13 Oct 2013 11:58
Wow. What a poetic expression of emotion and passion. Wonderful!
Posted 29 Jul 2013 21:58
beautiful ...

Posted 11 Jul 2013 20:45
Beautiful words, such a perfect description of what love should be

Posted 04 Feb 2013 18:34
Emotional and powerful. It left me breathless. Beautiful way of expressing your feelings.

Posted 18 Nov 2012 10:00
Lovely! Very gentle and heartfelt poem, very dedicated love! Nice job!

Posted 17 Nov 2012 14:25
Oh this was beautiful! I loved it!!!
Posted 16 Nov 2012 19:28
Some very nice lines and images.
Posted 16 Nov 2012 01:11
That was beautiful! Very heartfelt and emotional... I loved it!
Posted 04 Sep 2012 18:45
Beautifully written, loved it.
Posted 31 Jul 2012 10:28
Your words bridge the gap & burning distance between two loving souls perfectly... Beautifully done!

Posted 23 Jun 2012 13:05
Beautiful! So passionate and emotional. Thankyou for sharing x
Posted 21 May 2012 01:33
fantastic/beautiful!!! - loving/longing/yearning=fulfillment - I wish!!
Posted 03 May 2012 12:31
So beautifully written with so much emotion, what a breathtaking piece.
Posted 02 May 2012 01:43
Absolutely beautiful and leaves me breathless with your emotion. Well written!
Posted 01 May 2012 18:04
WOW, Darren what a great poem love showing for way deep in the heart,loves it sorry i could only give it a 5.
Posted 01 May 2012 16:28
Posted 01 May 2012 07:52
what southern_sass said and more! truly beautiful!

Posted 30 Apr 2012 18:06
I LOVE THIS. This is the perfect poem expressing distance and that one beautiful moment of meeting.

Posted 30 Apr 2012 17:18
"Extending tendrils
Out from both shores"

Posted 30 Apr 2012 15:29
someday i want someone to long for me and love me like you love her.... she is a fortunate woman..... PERFECT.
Posted 30 Apr 2012 11:14
Excellent writing... very sensual and wonderful to read.... I loved it. Well done!
Posted 30 Apr 2012 07:20
a wonderful expression of love...wish i could be as lucky to be loved like this
Posted 30 Apr 2012 05:53
A perfect rendition of what Love is..when 2 hearts finally unite as 1.
Keep writing..your expressions touch our soul

Posted 30 Apr 2012 02:41
Everyone should be so lucky as to be loved like this.

Posted 30 Apr 2012 02:15
Lovely expression of longing from a distance. Beautifully done...
Posted 30 Apr 2012 00:56
Posted 30 Apr 2012 00:12
Great poem,really emotional.
Posted 29 Apr 2012 23:25
lovely poem, flow of feelings.....
"You can close your eyes to things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to the things you don't want to feel"

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