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Victrola: A Song In Two Voices

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If music be the food of love, play on, give me excess of it.


Victrola: A Song In Two Voices

Frank Lee & Cum Girl

Author’s Note:

“Victrola” is a poetic rendition of an exchange of Online Messages between Frank Lee and me inspired by a picture featuring a record turntable (the Victrola of the title). The exchange was instant and spontaneous, a call and response, each building on the other’s contribution ... improvised freeform jazz through the language of words rather than music. The resultant piece is a near exact replication of the conversation with only some tiny amendments to preserve the dignity of the English Language.

Thank you for reading, and maybe, if you’re feeling inquisitive you may wish to try and decipher who said what.

Cum Girl

Xxx Xxx

Victrola: A Song In Two Voices

Because it feels lived in, the vinyl,
Bears the marks of its life in its crackles,
And only when they meet repeatedly
Does the diamond know best
How to ride the groove,
Pressing discreetly down into the soft
Forgiving skin, scraping its way
Across with unique caresses; pumping
Each note and cymbal crash
Toward a glorious finale,
Dislocating rhythm…The Rite of Spring
Spiralling into frenzied emotion,
Shudders of blissful dissonance…
Pounding strike of the mallet
To the heart’s racing tempo…
Kettle drums, tympanum, brass and woodwind
Throbbing in a crescendo of noise,
A choir of whispered howls…this music
Is the fuel of their ravening hunger,
Growing as it feeds…
Angels; seraphim and cherubim,
A pirouetting refrain ... Blessed Art Thou,
Throats open, voices entwined to strike
A hard chord of longing,
Sound dissolving into one, long, continuous
Note of desire thrust forward into quaking air,
An Ode to Joy sung in rabid gasps,
One voice rising off the floor of liquid dreams,
A singular note lost amongst many,
Bleating, screaming, crying, pleading
In twisted joy,
Everything throbs and deepens,
No more pulse but a tide of desperate lunging,
Rhythm becomes flesh…
Hallelujah! Hosanna! Fucking glory
To the highest ... Fuck! ... Fuck! ... Fuck!

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Comments(16)

Issaquah
Posted 07 Jul 2012 11:47
Excellent - like modern jazz with great interplay between two people completely in synch.
beowulf69
Posted 06 Jul 2012 20:25
That is brilliant!
Milik_The_Red
Posted 05 Jul 2012 15:17
Delightfully creative!
cocokisses
Posted 05 Jul 2012 14:53
Brilliance, I had to read it again. Loved it..
cumonmesweetpuss
Posted 05 Jul 2012 08:18
yes very intense
Ianthomas
Posted 04 Jul 2012 12:34
Poetic OMD? Clearly climatic but I may have had the warped pressing so didn't quite hit my groove often enough. But still more Sun Ra than Jamie Cullum thankfully!
Kal-El85
Posted 04 Jul 2012 06:58
Just amazing! That's all I can say about this
nazhinaz
Posted 03 Jul 2012 21:36
Interesting. 5

DLizze
Posted 03 Jul 2012 20:10
All I hear is "eeeeeee. alaeada deda dummmmmmm....interspersed with DUM Dum dum DUM dum dum DUm dum eee delada duda dum...." Mercy! Stravinsky certainly knew how to write a Lush theme, didn't he?
And thank you, Emile Berliner, and David Sarnoff. Together, though you'll never know it, you changed my life; probably as much as my instrumental music teachers did. And thank you, Frank and CumGirl for reminding me of those to whom I owe so much.
ArtMan
Posted 03 Jul 2012 19:24
Wonderful!
etairay
Posted 03 Jul 2012 18:02
wow thank you love it ..different hard & deep ..a rush ..a mixture of shapes & sounds dancing together tryin to fit, to become one ..awesome result

Buz
Posted 03 Jul 2012 16:11
That's intense and really great CG!
Ghost
Posted 03 Jul 2012 15:08
Nice, liked it a lot. Well written.
PhilAnders
Posted 03 Jul 2012 12:50
A brilliant collaboration.taking inanimate objects and comparing them with human parts. Bravo to both!
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 03 Jul 2012 12:36
very interesting... and intense... and musical.... nicely done...
bobjack
Posted 03 Jul 2012 12:16
wow. So intense . i loved it
 

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