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We've Run Our Course

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I knew the rules, FUCK AND RUN
We've run our course.
So now we must end.
I want you so much,
It's hard to try be friends.

We've run our course.
You tried to be gentle when you sent me away,
I cried over promises that your love was here to stay.
Now your time is filled with other girls,
New mountains to conquer new hearts to destroy.

We've run our course.
I was true to my word,
While you were true to you.
I knew the rules, FUCK AND RUN,
Next time I'll be nobody's fool.
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racking
Posted 26 Jul 2012 13:16
Beautifully written, honest and true. Thanks for sharing hun

billybroadband
Posted 11 Jun 2012 16:11
Wow. So raw I can see scratch marks. Well done.

Skanderbeg
Posted 02 Apr 2012 21:43
I loved it, who of us hasn't been there.

mickeyfinn1
Posted 23 Mar 2012 00:33
Sad and feeling the hurt

Buz
Posted 22 Mar 2012 06:01
Great writing! I really like this one a lot!

assloverxxx
Posted 14 Mar 2012 22:17
it makes me sad and brooding...still love the authenticity of expression...good read...

MexicanGoddess
Posted 14 Mar 2012 15:40
Girl.....♥

Frank_Lee
Posted 14 Mar 2012 09:18
Poetry without emotional risk isn't poetry. This has immense emotional risk, and for that alone, it is truly powerful and something to be thankful for.

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Navin
Posted 14 Mar 2012 09:09
Well written. Heartfelt. Everything I would expect from you, my friend.

writingvixen
Posted 14 Mar 2012 07:11
Nazhinaz - please refrain from commenting on my work. IT IS EMOTIONAL, perhaps that is because I am human and have emotions. I do not regret my choice. This poem is not about my choice it is about choices being taken away, it is about involuntary loss.

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nazhinaz
Posted 13 Mar 2012 23:32
A bit too emotional. Afterall its a matter of choice & why lament over one's choice. Never feel sorry for what you did as it is your own choice and doings. 5

MissyLuvsYa
Posted 13 Mar 2012 19:26
Though sad it is wonderfully written!!!

angeldust
Posted 13 Mar 2012 18:53
so realistic true to the bone,

writingvixen
Posted 13 Mar 2012 15:33
I am overwhelmed that a poem that started as a collaboration of friends experiences has touched so many people. My inbox has been flooded by people that can identify with this poem. The poem actually refers to three people not just one and only one has affected me. I am grateful for everyone's support.

LauraLee_sugah
Posted 13 Mar 2012 15:29
oh my... such hurt and raw feelings...

playsit
Posted 13 Mar 2012 14:51
It may be raw (your words, not mine) but the fresh emotions are real and will hit home to many here. Thanks for sharing your pain with us.

HK4167
Posted 13 Mar 2012 14:25
Beautiful words with real emotions from the bottom of your heart, well done and thanks for sharing with us. Love those who treat us well, and forget those who don't. You still have lots of true friends here.

VictoriaAndVictor
Posted 13 Mar 2012 14:10
sad and heartbroken...

bill11
Posted 13 Mar 2012 14:01
A very true reality check -

TnAlover58
Posted 13 Mar 2012 13:53
love this one... very sexy
 

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