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What Happened To Us

Bitter Ex-wife
They told me not to do it

That you would break my heart

But I didn't listen

No one could tear us apart

You said that you loved me

And melted my heart

But after all these years of love making 

That was off the chart

You left me cold

And ran off with that tart.
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Comments(19)

Banes1
Posted 16 Mar 2013 14:03
Tell it like it is. Felt the suffering and pain.
fifthrow
Posted 22 Feb 2013 19:07
i feel the pain

midnightraider61
Posted 24 Jul 2012 20:59
Your story of devastation ... but your story of love as well. You are one of the greatest writers on this site and one of the loveliest people as well.
Navin
Posted 04 May 2012 14:52
Funny and sad at the same time.
capemay4u
Posted 27 Apr 2012 06:54
I thought it honest direct and to the point.
Careless_Whisper
Posted 25 Apr 2012 21:29
Sweet and lovely
Careless_Whisper
Posted 25 Apr 2012 21:28
Sweet and lovely
Adey69
Posted 25 Apr 2012 02:32
Excellent little poem says it all in 11 lines
SecretDesire
Posted 24 Apr 2012 02:37
Straight to the point.... heartfelt emotions... thanks for sharing. Well done and excellent writing.
identityelusive
Posted 22 Apr 2012 12:28
Rhyme time.
Gramps
Posted 21 Apr 2012 19:05
Very powerful poetry; I feel the hurt. See deception
eroticideas
Posted 21 Apr 2012 10:35
Sharp stuff! A five well deserved - I hope that goes someway to helping you get over the guy - he doesn't deserve loyalty, yet as is often the case, gets it.
fuzie
Posted 21 Apr 2012 10:07
beautiful.
HK4167
Posted 21 Apr 2012 10:05
Beautiful and honesty words with intense emotions. Thanks for sharing with us and looking forward to reading more nice pieces from you.
JbStone
Posted 21 Apr 2012 08:41
I'm sorry he was so mean. Unbelievable he'd do that to such a sweet person. Good heartfelt poem. It says it all.
tnblue
Posted 21 Apr 2012 04:41
short sweet and to the point
PhilAnders
Posted 21 Apr 2012 03:46
An excellent and explosive short poem, well written with emotion.

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nazhinaz
Posted 21 Apr 2012 03:44
Hard hitting though short. 5
Driver1963
Posted 20 Apr 2012 22:04
Such a short story that tells so much...
 

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