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What Have You Done To Me?

It's my time now to love ME more than I love you.
What have you done to me? You made this old heart new.
Renewed me, restored me,
Wore me down and left me broken in two.

What have you done to me?
You awakened a joy hidden deep within.
Unleashed my desire, provided unquenchable fire,
Destroyed my faith in men.

What have you done to me?
You made me love you.
Confined me to your little locked cage with openings for the world to view,
We pledged our love to each other but your love wasn't true.

What have you done to me?
You put me under your spell.
Sitting patiently, breathlessly, waiting, shivering in this love from hell.

What have you done to me?
You controlled my mind with lies.
My thoughts were thoughts of pleasing you, wearing and saying what you would like.
Living and loving to please only you.

What have you done to me?
You only did what I allowed you to do.
I gave you all of my power, traded it all so that I could continue to love my fantasy of you.

What have you done to me?
You finally released me from all of this pain.
My will, my spirit and my heart are broken,

I know I'll never love this way again.

What have you done to me?
You gave me back to myself.
You taught me fantasies are not true, I'll cherish the love and lessons you taught me.
It's my time now to love ME more than I love you.

@2013 Writingvixen

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Posted 07 Sep 2013 12:29
OMG OMG !.. I wish I had read this first .. Your heart is crying out.. Please forgive me for not reading this sooner.. It goes beyond words that flow,, your heart is flowing..

Thank you .. It's my favorite ..
Love Sarah .
Posted 01 Sep 2013 17:17
Well done! It's such a beautiful and heartfelt piece...

Posted 04 Aug 2013 09:36
Very intriguing! A very well written and excellent poem!

Posted 03 Aug 2013 15:15
I love it!! I read it twice, and could imagine these words as lyrics. xo
Posted 01 Aug 2013 08:22
It was good. You could feel the flow of the words and the pain behind them.

Posted 01 Aug 2013 02:25
I don't normally read a lot of poetry, but I tried yours. I though your lamentation on the sacrifice of self for a false dream was heartfelt and well expressed. Filled with regret and recrimination, but determined to do better for yourself at the end. Thanks for sharing

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