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What I Tell You In The Darkness

Sometimes pillow talk is just pillow talk, and sometimes it's not.
 What I tell you in the darkness…
 That which starts in syllables
 Whispers and cries
 A combination of agony and ecstasy
 Dream and reality

When my body is wrapped around yours
 Every inch of me sensitive to the feel of you
 Skin on skin
 The inner me open and bare
 My nectar escaping
 With an ever flow of satisfaction you have erupted

 When the source of my glow is you
 And the hum of our own sounds envelope us
 Separating us from time and place

 What I tell you in the darkness…
 Do not take it lightly

When those words slip past these lips
 These lips that tremble
 Aching to kiss every part that is you
 Every part that pulsates with the force that is yours.

When my hands are splayed across your back
 Gripping
 Holding…scraping flesh
 Please know that this is a new thing
 This feeling swirling and rising within me
 
There is nothing but you
 And how I feel
 Where your body meets mine
 
My mind is uncluttered
 Life is simple
 I know what I want
 What I need
 What I have

What I tell you in the darkness… is truth
 And does not fade
 In the light

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Comments(29)

SecretDesire
Posted 13 Oct 2012 14:19
Wow! For such a long time I needed to read something wonderful.... I just did!! Excellent writing girl.... very beautiful. I loved it..... 5+++
Veronika
Posted 17 Sep 2012 10:45
Passionate and emotional touches with sensuality ... 5/5
curvygalore
Posted 12 Sep 2012 09:04
Beautiful and heartfelt. Just exquisite writing. Great to have you back and more please!

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nazhinaz
Posted 10 Sep 2012 22:31
Beautifully expressed emotions. 5
johny5
Posted 31 Aug 2012 09:03
nice read welcome back
Issaquah
Posted 27 Aug 2012 09:23
This is an amazing poem. It is a true pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing.
BabydollSlave
Posted 27 Aug 2012 05:28
you inspire me to go back to my poems...if my were even half as well written as yours, life would be wonderful
playsit
Posted 26 Aug 2012 14:49
Wow... your passion shines bright in this work. Your words paint a beautiful picture.
cocokisses
Posted 26 Aug 2012 12:42
Sigh...

Oh how I wish I could write poetry.

This is exquisite writing.

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BlackMentalDom
Posted 26 Aug 2012 10:25
Very nice writing. It got even better after 2 hits of my pipe!
GabrielSweet
Posted 26 Aug 2012 09:55
I like this, I understand this, I am not really good with poetry (not smart enough to understand it I guess) but this says it. At lease the lines ....

What I tell you in the darkness...
Do not take it lightly

I believe we take it lightly too often.... thank you for this. It helps me want to read poetry more....

Frank_Lee
Posted 26 Aug 2012 07:04
This is just a superb piece of work from a superb writer. Seeing something new from one of my true favorites here has been a very welcome surprise. ABG rocks!
Navin
Posted 26 Aug 2012 06:35
Powerfully passionate writing. Well done.
whalee
Posted 26 Aug 2012 05:43
You knocked it out of the park!

Naughtygrl73
Posted 26 Aug 2012 04:46
"When the source of my glow is you"

I love this line its perfect
curvyflirt
Posted 26 Aug 2012 03:39
Perfect... sublime... awesome..
thank you
daveb
Posted 26 Aug 2012 02:20
OMG!!! Such wonderful thoughts and I just love it!!!
Kandikiss51
Posted 25 Aug 2012 22:34
Beautiful, and passionate.
dwarf63
Posted 25 Aug 2012 22:32
Well written and good flow. Keep up the good work 5+.
CenterLine
Posted 25 Aug 2012 20:56
This is really fantastic. I have so much respect for those who can write love poetry. I can write many things. Even poetry, but the love poem escapes me still.

summerjones
Posted 25 Aug 2012 19:58
Excellent .......
Kal-El85
Posted 25 Aug 2012 17:15
Beautiful word-play with exquisite words. Loved this.
Isca
Posted 25 Aug 2012 17:06
Your words touched my soul with passion.
Sisyphus
Posted 25 Aug 2012 16:55
Exquisite, lovely and loving. It moves so gracefully and inevitably to the last line. You are a talented poet.

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GingerKitty
Posted 25 Aug 2012 16:39
This is beautiful, I can't say much more than that. Just beautiful.
Ianthomas
Posted 25 Aug 2012 16:35
I could ruin the mood and say keep the light on; tssk me and poetry, never good bedfellows! Lovely powerful words. Hope the creativity continues to flow.

TastyMissPT
Posted 25 Aug 2012 16:19
Just lovely. Copy-write your writings, they would make great song lyrics.
Albion52
Posted 25 Aug 2012 16:14
Beautifully written!
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 25 Aug 2012 15:57
this is the most passionate and wonderful thing i have read in a long time....

favorite line? "the sound of our own hum envelopes us."

wow....
 

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