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For all the sleepless nights, 
And the tears I have shed,
For the unfulfilled promises, 
And every broken word,
I forgive you.

For the wasted moments,
The opportunities missed,
The dreadful doubts,
And unrealistic fears 
you held inside of you, 
I forgive you.

For the darkness of the past,
And leaving no bridge unburnt,
For all the locked doors,
And not even one window open to the future,
I forgive you.

For every bit of my heart you ripped away,
And every offering of love that was ignored,
For all the misery caused by that,
And moments weighed down by loneliness,
I forgive you.

Forgive me for the trouble I gave you,
I neglected you for so long,
And truly am sorry I wasn't around more.

Now I feel it,
Something moves inside me,
Hot, warm tears soak my neck.
A smile lights my eyes, and I cannot
hide my grin.

Hear me whisper,
"This is how I forgave myself,
This is how I freed myself."
At last I am free,
Of who I used to be.

* Great Thank you to my genius friend Gypsymoth, who amazes me every single time with editing my writing. Thank you so much my dear, I am loving our journey.

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Comments(17)

Veronika
Posted 05 Dec 2012 09:15
Very nice... so emotional, so touching.... I love it

Saga
Posted 22 Sep 2012 10:14
You my dear, have a way with words!

She
Posted 06 Sep 2012 06:00
and i was forgiving myself. Poem is from me to me Thank you all for reading it!
flytoomuch
Posted 06 Sep 2012 05:56
A woman's forgiveness is as deep as the ocean and truly liberating! So touching.
fsharp
Posted 15 May 2011 07:51
nice! it's easy to see the wrongs of others, but to honestly face your own...
lensman
Posted 05 May 2011 11:16
just wonderful
tobydog2370
Posted 26 Apr 2011 08:05
Tortured, passionate, peaceful. If words could be fingers, they touched me. Nice.

She
Posted 11 Mar 2011 03:23
Thank you Gypsy for that extra correction and thank you all for your great comments! Glad you like this one, it is special to me.

AngelHeart01
Posted 03 Mar 2011 08:34
Great subject .. and forgiveness to me is such a powerful thing.
lafayettemister
Posted 03 Mar 2011 05:59
It's often the things said in a whisper that are the most profound.

GemGeekett
Posted 03 Mar 2011 05:04
HUG THANK YOU THANK YOU For commiting this on paper. There is a bravery in this

Dancing_Doll
Posted 03 Mar 2011 04:59
I can definitely relate to this one... Wonderfully written!
MexicanGoddess
Posted 03 Mar 2011 04:48
Amazing....

CuriousButterfly
Posted 03 Mar 2011 04:45
beautifully written
Piquet
Posted 03 Mar 2011 04:27
Lovely sentiments. Nicely Done !
scarletblue
Posted 03 Mar 2011 03:40
touching ! Ms She >> thank u for sharing
lovely_lady
Posted 03 Mar 2011 02:58
Great work
 

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