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What did I do, why did you leave me?

Of all the moments in my life, you were the best surprise
 
You are deeply imbedded in my heart and I long to look into your eyes

I pray to feel your touch but know I never will
 
We talked and loved deeper then I thought possible

I love you with all my heart

You broke my heart

You were my wish

You were my desire

You were my hope

I think of you always

Once as a blessing

And now as the greatest loss I'll ever experience
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john368
Posted 08 Dec 2013 22:45
very good very sad
CenterLine
Posted 23 May 2013 15:36
Intense and brief. I found the broken rhyme scheme particularly effective. I love how it fades from true rhyme into syllabic rhyme, then pseudo rhyme and eventually deteriorates into blank verse. On another note, my empathy for what events caused you to experience this. I'm really impressed. Five out of five.
Elling50
Posted 07 Apr 2013 01:37
Sad and beautiful. Get the emotions very well across to me.
BabydollSlave
Posted 27 Nov 2012 08:00
ohhh that is so sad and so powerful. just lovely

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Navin
Posted 16 May 2012 14:38
Such sorrow. Very powerful.
HK4167
Posted 28 Mar 2012 13:22
Intense emotions, splendid work.
ArtAngel
Posted 03 Mar 2012 19:32
wow..powerful words...I'm sure many can relate to this...excellent writing
whyusearealname
Posted 19 Sep 2011 21:25
All I want to do is wrap my arms around you!

WorkAlone
Posted 21 Jun 2011 15:54
That's a lot of pain, my friend. I can only imagine what it's like to be abandoned like that.
stuart1975
Posted 17 Jun 2011 22:24
keep up the good work
 

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