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Wondering

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Staring out over the lake
Mist rising off of the rippling water
Sitting on the deck
Coffee in hand

Wondering

Are you on the other side?
Are you looking my way?
Are you hoping I'll be looking for you?

I take my coffee here every morning
I won't stop coming here
I need to believe you are looking back
Hoping for just a glimpse of your angelface

Not minding the coolness of the morning air
Ignoring the goosebumps on my arms
Letting the hot coffee warm my bones
Remembering a time
When your arms warmed me
Wishing you were here to hold me now

Wondering

Why did it have to end?
Was it all the stupid things I said?
Was it all the things I didn't do?
Did I need to be a better man?

So I sit on this deck
Peering out into the nothingness
Searching for the right words
To bring you back to me

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justhavfun70
Posted 09 Apr 2013 07:48
Very nice, love being able to relate to parts of it.

Poppet
Posted 06 Nov 2012 20:10
Loved it

♥Pop

Jayne33
Posted 01 Nov 2012 02:55
Beautifully written poem, that captures the emotion I am sure a lot of people can relate too. Great work x x

xfallingxangelx
Posted 23 Oct 2012 10:07
I know that feeling, and sometimes I really hate it

sweet_as_candy
Posted 13 Oct 2012 11:00
So perfectly written, so short yet captured every ounce of emotion in there! Brilliant! X

Prowler
Posted 01 Oct 2012 06:48
Outstanding IMHO! 5+++

writingvixen
Posted 13 Sep 2012 13:09
I wonder as well. Simply beautiful my dear friend. I feel your longing.

jrrg
Posted 11 Sep 2012 15:12
Makes me think of Gatsby, looking out from his dock at Daisy's light.

beinggood
Posted 11 Sep 2012 11:14
I felt what you were saying..ty a 5

BelleduJour
Posted 10 Sep 2012 14:48
Been there. Enjoyed it very much.

Ariel21
Posted 10 Sep 2012 11:22
very beautiful! Loved it! Bravo

Kal-El85
Posted 08 Sep 2012 20:42
Great word-play on an excellent poem.

Kiki
Posted 08 Sep 2012 20:26
Beautiful scenery as always, heartfelt... Nice poem!

mimsbim
Posted 08 Sep 2012 09:11
I felt it deep within my heart! This writer always amazed me! Good Job

Callisto
Posted 07 Sep 2012 19:42
Very nice

LauraLee_sugah
Posted 07 Sep 2012 19:40
lovely, poignant, winsome.... wonderful....

sweeter
Posted 07 Sep 2012 19:38
nice poem

Faethe
Posted 07 Sep 2012 18:13
Beautiful, moving, cried...someday you will see Angelface looking back at you again. Just have Faethe.

kay_s
Posted 07 Sep 2012 17:25
Sharing your emotions through beautiful writing, absolutely amazing

EroticElegance
Posted 07 Sep 2012 17:20
Poignantly sufficient! I wonder who she is. 5+

CenterLine
Posted 07 Sep 2012 17:18
Obviously personal and intense. Good for you that you can share that with us.

ThinkTwice
Posted 07 Sep 2012 16:59
love it
 

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