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Words Can't Describe

My feelings defy description...but I'll try...
I tried to tell you how I feel,
But the words just didn’t work.
How can I express what you mean to me?

If I were an artist, I’d paint you,
With fine lines and bold color and great movement
To illustrate your physical grandeur.

If I were a musician, I’d sing you,
With swelling crescendos and intricate chords and complicated harmonies
To communicate your creative spirit.

If I were an athlete, I’d play you,
With contracting muscles and pounding heart and gasping breath
To demonstrate your impressive strength.

But how can I paint or sing or play
That part of you that is most attractive to me?
That part of you is also the hardest to define.

For that, the writer in me needs words.
So I’ll rely on metaphor, and hope it is enough.
To me, you are:

An evening thunderstorm in June.
Bright, strong, wild, and warm,
Sparking with the promise of power and excitement.

Satin sheets on a hotel bed.
Soft, inviting, smooth to the touch,
Ready to caress my body and cradle me as I sleep.

A towering plate of chocolate candy.
Sweet, filling, mouth-watering, comforting,
Irresistible to women, and oh-so-bad for me.

A late night on a bearskin rug,
Romantic, warm, restful, soothing,
Changing to hot, hungry, passionate and lustful.

These words come close…
But to really express how I feel about you
Would require my mouth pressed against yours,
Our hands exploring each other,
Our bodies, naked, writhing together in shared ecstasy.
And those images are worth a thousand words.
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Posted 02 Sep 2012 13:06
I love it
Posted 31 Mar 2012 06:12
Absolutely beautiful. I love the things you used to describe him, i just loved it!
Posted 29 Feb 2012 04:37
beautifully constructed ,.expressive and from your lustful heart!
Posted 19 Dec 2011 19:26
that is great
Posted 07 Nov 2011 15:00
I agree with Playsit, a beautiful piece of writing, very well done.

Posted 07 Nov 2011 14:21
Wow. Every now and then I run across something that is very special... a work that speaks to my soul. Thank you for a new favorite
Posted 26 Oct 2011 21:45
i envy the man who inspired you to write this, for you truly have deep feelings and/or love for him.
Posted 24 Oct 2011 17:21
Very lovely and romantic.
Posted 22 Oct 2011 10:03
Beautifully sensual prose, initially reminding me of the song "If I were a carpenter", but became more expressive and suggestive. I wanted it to go on...
Posted 22 Oct 2011 08:31
Metaphors, and they worked.. nice job.
Posted 22 Oct 2011 07:59
I loved the way you transfered your feelings to your keyboard. This was amazing: passionate, descriptive, sensual, heartwarming, the whole package. Very well done
Posted 22 Oct 2011 07:48
Great poem, to the point and very romantic, I gave it a 5+.

Posted 22 Oct 2011 07:36
This is really great. Very romantic!
Posted 22 Oct 2011 06:21
Lovely use of metaphors and a fun, playfully romantic tone. Well Done.
Posted 22 Oct 2011 03:42
Good poem, nice imagination and expression of feelings.
Posted 22 Oct 2011 01:36
Very nice... a writing that resonates to the masses, whom share online experiences.
Posted 22 Oct 2011 01:21
Sweet and the one who wrote it.
Posted 22 Oct 2011 01:15
Heart warming expression of the feelings. But from wonderful descriptive of love flowing you end up at lustful exploration. 5
Posted 22 Oct 2011 01:06
absolutely breathtakingly beautiful!
Posted 21 Oct 2011 23:57
Brilliant writing!!...Not much left to say.... Thanks for sharing.
Posted 21 Oct 2011 23:27
This really moved me. Thank you!!
Posted 21 Oct 2011 23:25
Heartfelt and beautiful !!!

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