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Yes, always...

some moments are perfect
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Today we sat in the sun

together.

You took my hand

and twined your fingers in mine.

Suddenly

your hand

was the center of my universe.

I lifted it to my face,

kissed your palm,

touched my tongue to your life line

leaving a line of my moisture there.

Your fingers

moved to my mouth

as if by magic.

I sucked each one.

The taste of our life together

made me smile.

Your soul patch invited my mouth

so I kissed it

Your mouth curved.

I looked into your eyes.

You whispered to my heart,

“Yes, always.”

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Mystic_Angel_77
Posted 05 Dec 2012 16:38
so pictured every word, so romantic loved it

HK4167
Posted 15 Jan 2012 21:34
Such a sweet and romantic poem!

DLizze
Posted 15 Jan 2012 15:47
Lovely. And so incredibly romantic.

Mobius_NR
Posted 11 Jan 2012 05:23
Girl you doooooo have a gift!

nazhinaz
Posted 10 Jan 2012 02:32
You really moved my heart & mind Sugah. Great. Wish I could write like you Sugah. 5++++

PUSSYSPECIALIST
Posted 09 Jan 2012 18:57
ur poems are great lauralee

SecretDesire
Posted 09 Jan 2012 13:54
Romantic and lovely. Loved it

Michael
Posted 09 Jan 2012 08:30
Yes, we have all been there, those moments... You captured it beautifully.

allinabout18times
Posted 09 Jan 2012 08:27
very sensual..

Sisyphus
Posted 09 Jan 2012 07:19
I like your writing and I love poetry. I liked the lines "you whispered to my heart" and "your hand was the center of my universe." I think "I lifted it to my mouth" is a weak line--"lifted it" is hard to say. I would suggest, "Lifting it to my mouth I kissed... Hope you don't mind my suggestion.

ibee
Posted 09 Jan 2012 07:15
YES..your smile Perfect. Yes.... your fingers amazing.

Buz
Posted 09 Jan 2012 05:25
Very nice!
 

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