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Things started quickly,
We jumped in real fast,
People thought me thick-ly,
Said it wouldn't last...

I refused to listen,
Didn't want to let them in,
Couldn't make their mission,
To make me give in and sin...

I thought if I tried my best,
And obeyed Your every rule,
I passed Your every test,
We would make it through the Yule...

But I felt for You,
And You felt for me,
Relationship for two,
I soon started to see...

I wasn't made to do this,
It didn't feel quite like bliss,
Fight a losing battle with myself,
And hurt you in the process...?

Now looking back and thinking,
After friendship and more hurting,
I've lost the person I knew,
Both in me and you...

I'm sorry for my madness,
I'm sorry for the pain,
I'm sorry for this whole mess,
I know now I'm insane...

So please come back and know,
Because I find it hard to show,
The right way that I need you,
Best friend or I'll be too blue...

I know I made it awkward,
Should be in a mental ward,
But you deserve a reward,
For seeing I was awkward...

I guess that I just miss you,
I think others do too,
So know I always was true,
And just how much I miss you...
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Saga
Posted 24 Feb 2013 07:08
Very raw and emotional. Great poetry.
nazhinaz
Posted 04 Jan 2013 04:22
What a beautiful poem. I was missing those mature thoughts since Nov? My bad luck. 5++

DanielleX
Posted 02 Dec 2012 15:26
That's wonderful! I love the pithy style - makes it all the more intense. A five all the way
Danny xx
SpeedyC
Posted 01 Dec 2012 00:50
Lovely.poem
flytoomuch
Posted 30 Nov 2012 18:25
Well I love poets who make the effort to confine themselves to a rhyme scheme. Some wonderful lines.

Poppet
Posted 30 Nov 2012 17:47
This is so you. I loved it. It's beautiful, Sarah. I could see myself going through it each step as I read it.. Well done.. I'm proud of you.
 

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