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You Pierced My Soul

Tags: love, loss, regret
You pierced my soul and invaded my heart.
I can't get you out of my head.

Words spoken to you long ago
Yet as true today as then.

But its been so long since I've heard your voice,
Since you told me to cum for you.

Days, weeks, months go by
Yet still my heart won't heal.

I've cried, I've tried to fill the void
With wine, with friends, with sex.

Nothing helps, nothing works,
The aching still persists.

The error I made was only one
But you called it a giant fail.

It killed your love, it killed your trust.
It destroyed your compassion for me.

All I have left is the consequence of
My horrible, lamentable lapse.

My soul's still pierced, my heart's still yours,
I can't get you out of my head.
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Comments(14)

MysteryBaby
Posted 21 Oct 2013 19:22
Very well written
stanstroker
Posted 13 Oct 2013 12:35
a soulful tale of regret
your use of intense words well done

AbigailThornton
Posted 12 May 2013 05:32
Lovely poem - intense hidden story which makes the reader wonder.
Ardentmale
Posted 01 Feb 2013 03:46
You have an amazing way with words... You allow all to feel them...
HK4167
Posted 26 Jan 2013 20:53
Intense honest emotions wrapped in strong words. Well done.
nazhinaz
Posted 21 Jan 2013 21:44
A nice communicaton of your commitment.

Knuffelbeer
Posted 20 Jan 2013 17:55
such a good poem but regret is one of the worst feelings ever. you describe it beautifully
coguy
Posted 20 Dec 2012 18:07
Oh I didn't notice this poem until now. Guess we need to talk about it. Left me speechless - this poem is that good! Kisses!

Green_Man
Posted 08 Dec 2012 11:36
Regret is the worst emotion of all, isn't it Beautiful expression of it.
Hotnripped
Posted 01 Dec 2012 20:13
Filled with such heart, such truth. I feel for you.
carnal_kitty01
Posted 27 Nov 2012 16:30
can totally relate to this one...

asleep
Posted 26 Nov 2012 08:09
Strong and painful. Thank you for sharing this with us. "5"+++

Saga
Posted 25 Nov 2012 19:19
Such strong words and emotions. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Warlock
Posted 25 Nov 2012 09:35
Failing makes your successes greater.. and finding your way back so much more rewarding..
 

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