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Young Lovers

Abandoned young lovers making love on the floor
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I made love to you the other day
On cushions on the floor.
I lay my head between your legs
And licked your musky cream.
I loved your meaty taste and smell,
Good as Nanna's stew.

I had a can of beer or two
Or three or four,
We were feeling mellow you and me, 
Sprawled out where we lay.
Like two abandoned lovers
Upon a bed of hay.

So there, upon the floor of my little cott.
I shoved my throbbing spurting cock
Up your oozing slot, and
To my ears like music in a dream
I heard you rise to a crescendo
And Scream !

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blogger007
Posted 02 Mar 2011 14:37
Wow, I like your other poem a lot but this one is wonderful. The flow and imagery, the rhythm and sound, combined with a sense of cheekiness plus erotica, all makes this read so well! The best part of the poem is easily the lines "To my ears like music in a dream I heard you rise to a crescendo And Scream !" Using tumbling lines builds our expectation and the sense of suspense and the rhyme works just so great, providing an intense end to a great poem. How come u didn't write before? You seem to have the talent for it man.

SouthernJim
Posted 27 Feb 2011 20:49
Cute
 

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