This was written by my husband (I can't write this stuff, I just read it) he was at work and came across a couple of female co-workers talking about romance novels and how detailed they can get and that they are only as good as they are because women write them. Well, he decided to insert foot and told them that a man could write that stuff just as well as a woman. So his co-workers dared him to prove that a man could so he had to write something for them, this is the result. let me know what you think and I will pass your comments on to my husband. Fell free to embellish it if needs it.
An Erotic Detail
Looking deep in to her big green eyes he grabs her by the neck with his muscular arms and says to her in a soft romantic voice that I want to show you how I love you I want to give you my heart and body. Looking back at his blue eyes she kisses his lips very softly then moves to his ear and said I am all yours. Smiling back at her he begins to kiss her more passionately. As the two lovers kiss he runs his fingers through her soft golden blond hair she moves her body closer to him and begins to hold him tighter.
He feels her hands softly tickle the pits oh his back and a soft moan comes from his mouth. He turns her over lifting the back of her hair and exposing her neck kissing her neck softly with small pecks around her ears she pushes her self back to him enjoying his kisses she says in a soft low voice that feels so good. Smiling he takes his hands lifting her shirt exposing her soft silky skin. Feeling his soft hands upon her belly she begins to moan.
Continuing to kiss her neck softly he moves his hands up to her breasts feeling her nipples harden from his touch. With a soft whimper she begins putting her hand behind her feeling her lovers thigh and the erection that he has. He feels her hands on his erection and begins to moan with the pleasure that he feels from her soft touch. Smiling as he moans she turns back to his face looking deep in to his big blue eyes him gazing back in to hers he tells her that I love you so much and you mean every thing to me.
Smiling back from hearing those words she tells him that I love you to. Hearing those words come from her mouth the words that he has been waiting so long to hear, he puts a finger to her mouth and looking in to her eyes he says to her make love to me, the two lovers beginning to kiss again. Kissing each with a more intimate feeling he picks her up and takes her to the bedroom.
Sitting there on the bed he pulls him self away from her and tells her that this is the moment I have been waiting for since I first laid my eyes upon you. Smiling she comes in closer to him and puts her lips back on his. As the two kiss he takes his hands puts them around her back feeling her soft body against his. She begins unbuttoning his shirt exposing his chest to her. Taking her hand he puts her hand upon his left breast over his beating heart he looks at her and sees a tear come from her eyes .He knows deep inside it is not a tear of sorrow but a tear of happiness He looks deep in to her green eyes wiping a way her tears he tells her I know.
She knows now that her lover has given her his heart the one thing that she has wanted more then any thing. Smiling back at him she tells him thank you. Hearing those words come from her soft kissable lips he begins to kiss her more. Kissing her softly he moves to her chin down around her neck with small teasing pecks he pulls her shirt off lifting it over her head and shoulders the clip that was holding her hair up came off and her hair fell to her now exposed shoulders. Leaning back in to her lips she pulls her self away looking at him in a seductive manor she tells him to close his eyes. His eyes now closed she looks at him even more and smiles telling him I love you. He smiles. She undoes the back of her bra exposing her breasts to him her nipples erect she takes his hand and puts his hand upon her left breast, he feels the hardened nipple and feels her heart beating through her skin.