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My Fantasies - No.1 The Doctor

My Fantasies - a series of stories describing fantasies I have masturbated to throughout my life
Many thanks for your ongoing support and comments about my stories, and for voting for them. So far all the stories I have written have been factual accounts of my sexual experiences growing up.

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This is the first in a new series of stories detailing my sexual fantasies.

I have several fantasies, which I use regularly during masturbation. This first story is one of my favourites, which I hope you will enjoy.

I am 18 years old (probably because this was my age when I first imagined this fantasy) and as usual feeling hot and horny. I am desperate for some naughty fun, and want to do something naughty and different.

(I am sure you know that sensation, girls, when you are feeling so sexually aroused and frustrated, when your pussy is tingling and begging for attention, a mixture of painful torment and intense pleasure, when all you can think about is fingering yourself, but knowing that the longer you can resist that urge, the more intense the eventual orgasm will be.)

My sexual imagination is running wild all morning, creating a teasing wetness between my legs that is leaving my panties damp.

So, finally an idea springs into my mind. I decide that I need to visit the doctor. I ring up and make an appointment for later that day. I then spend the next few hours deciding what to wear and what I'm going to do.

By the time I arrive at the surgery, I am tingling with sexual arousal. Wearing a pink crop top, my nipples can be clearly seen protruding through the thin material. My slender, flat stomach is naked, and I am showing off the full length of my long, slender legs by wearing a 9 inch mini skirt and strappy, open sandals with heels. I look absolutely stunning, with my long shoulder length blonde hair and blue eyes.

After a short wait I am called into the doctor’s room. I walk in, and I can feel that I am right on the edge now. The dampness between my legs gives away my inner turmoil.

He is sitting at his desk writing something down. He is in his late 40's, a bit grey but good looking. I close the door and he turns around to face me. I can tell immediately by his expression that my appearance has made an instant impression upon him, as I stand there looking fabulously sexy.

"Ah ,erm yes, er, come in ,come in," he stumbles, standing up to show me to a chair opposite where he sits. I smile shyly at him and sit down, crossing my long, tanned legs.

After a few moments shuffling paper around his desk he looks up at me and smiles.

" Good , Good", he says, as he tries not to stare at my legs, " Its Katie ........., is that right?"

I nod, "That's right".

"Ok. What can I do for you today, Katie?"

Now I put my naughty plan into action - the one I've been thinking about all day. Its quite simple really. I am playing my role as the stunning, horny teenage girl, who is at the same time naive and innocent; unaware of the effect she has on men, with no understanding of how her behaviour is interpreted, or the impact of her appearance.

I smile shyly at the doctor. " Well, it's a bit embarrassing really............." I reply. There is a pause, as I look at the floor.

"Katie, just take your time, there's no hurry. Anything you tell me will remain confidential. What happens in this room is between us, OK?"

I nod. "OK. Well, I just wanted you to check that I've got nothing wrong with me".

"I see", he says, "Well, I'll certainly try. What are you worried about in particular?"

"Well, er..............I been having some out... from ......", I look down, and vaguely point down to my crotch area, "down here".

"I see", he says. " And when does this happen - how often?"

"Well............its usually when I ..............you know.........touch myself down here" I reply, and point between my legs.

“Oh..I see,” he replies.

He leans back in his chair, and I look at him, blinking innocently. There is a pause as he turns and writes down something in my medical notes.

" So, this happens when you masturbate - is that what you mean?" he asks, still writing.

"Yes that's right", I reply in a quiet, embarrassed voice.

" And when this fluid comes out, does it cause any pain at all?

" No - no pain. It just feels .............strange".

He looks up at me, and gives a reassuring smile.

" Is there any sign of blood in this fluid?" he asks.

"No..I don’t think so"

"And how long has this been happening, Katie?

I think for a moment. "Well, I suppose about 2 or 3 years. But I've been too embarrassed to see anyone about it. Its just that I'm really worried now that there is something seriously wrong with me, that’s why I came here today".

He leans forward. "Katie, don't worry, I'm sure we can get to the bottom of this". I give a weak, shy smile and pretend to look worried.

"Can I ask you how often you masturbate?" he suddenly says.

"Er, well..........it depends really...." I begin, " I guess 4 or 5 times a day, I suppose".

He leans back, his face showing slight surprise.

"And , er, does the fluid, er, appear when you have sexual intercourse as well?" he asks, his voice slightly quieter.

I smile shyly at him, looking embarrassed. "Actually I haven't had sexual intercourse," I reply.

(In reality, this is a lie - in fact I lost my virginity when I was 17)

"Oh, I see, er........yes , I see", he says, and I know he can hardly believe that this horny, sexy, 18 year old girl is still a virgin. He looks up something on his computer screen.

"But I see that you are taking contraceptive pills, from your records here" he states.

" Oh, yes, I do," I reply, " My mother wanted me to, just in case..............you know...........I needed protection."

"Ah well, yes..... very sensible", he says. His face has flushed a gentle shade of pink.

"Well.........perhaps I could just check you out, Katie. Blood pressure first."

He gets out his blood pressure monitor and takes my reading. It’s fine, of course. Then he asks me to open my mouth and he checks my tongue and throat, and finally uses his light to check my eyes. He sits back down.

"Well, all seems to be ok there" he says.

"Well that's good news", I say, feigning relief.

He writes down something in my notes, and as he does so he asks, "Could you tell me what the fluid looks like, Katie?"

"Er...... well, its sort of like cloudy water. Sometimes it’s almost clear. It changes sometimes", I reply. I can feel my heart beating now. Even just talking about it is causing me to tremble down there.

" And how much comes out when this happens?" . He is looking at me now, and I feel my pussy tingling, as I reply.

"Well, sometimes just a small trickle. But other times it can be quite a lot. Do you think it could be my bladder, Doctor?" I ask," Do you think there is a problem?" I gaze at him, my blue, limpid eyes displaying a childlike quality, despite my obvious teenage sexuality.

He pauses, and shifts in his chair. Then in a low, husky voice, says, " Well, I would hope not, but I would like to examine you, to see if there is anything serious to worry about. Could I ask you to remove your skirt and panties, Katie, so I can take a look?"

I give him a nervous, puzzled look. “What..you mean.. here..now? I ask, trying to sound worried now, but inside feeling the excitement build.

“Yes, if that’s alright”, he replies gently.

" Oh, well............er........I thought you would just be able to tell me whether there was a problem, without ........you know.....having to examine me.", I say, my cheeks becoming hot now.

He gives a little cough. "Well, I really would need to carry out a proper examination, in order to diagnose the symptoms correctly. After all ,I wouldn't want to miss something important."

I pretend to look embarrassed, but inside my heart is pounding and my pussy is hungry.

"Well, ok then" I say, shyly. “So you just want me to take my skirt off?”

“Well...yes, but I will also need you to remove your panties as well,” he replies, “just so I can examine you”.

“Oh...ok”, I say, almost in a whisper.

I stand up hesitantly and, as the doctor looks on, I unclip my miniskirt and place it on the chair. He gives a small cough, as I then bend to take of my sandals. Finally, I hook my thumbs inside the elastic waist and pull down my pink, lacy knickers, giving a little wiggle to allow them to drop to the floor by themselves, before stepping out of them. Looking down, I notice a small, dark pink patch of dampness on them. And so does the doctor.

I am now stood a metre away from him, as he now gazes at my smooth, shaven, naked pussy. His face is a picture! Here he is, sat watching this horny young girl strip off for him, apparently an innocent 18 year old virgin, with a beautifully smooth, shaved pussy, which he struggles take his eyes off, taking in the sight of the dark pink, glistening lips of my puffy labia.

"Er.............good.....er..very good" he says eventually. He stands up, and walks across the room.

"Now, could you just come over to my examination table for me, Katie", and he leads me to his black, leather clad table in the corner, which has a white pillow at one end. He unrolls a length of white paper towel and spreads it over the table.

Inside I'm now trembling with arousal, finding it more and more difficult to keep up the pretence of my role.

“There we are. If you could just climb up on there with your head on the pillow for me please,” he instructs.

I follow him and climb up on to the table, laying my head back against the white pillow behind me.

"Thank you", he says," and now if you could just place your feet apart for me, and open your knees."

I part my feet, as he pulls on a pair of white latex gloves, and then leans forward over me.

"I'm just going to examine you down here now Katie" he says, “So if you could just open your knees wide for me?”

I slowly and shyly comply, and immediately feel a trickle of pussy juice run out from between my lips.

And with that his hand is between my legs, and I feel 2 fingers delving between the lips of my cunny. I'm so well lubricated down there that he has no difficulty in slipping them easily inside, and I try not gasp as he does so, anxious not to give away just how aroused I am now feeling.

There I am , lying half naked, as this doctor is now giving my pussy a good fingering.

"Let me know if I'm hurting you" he says, and his trembling voice gives away his aroused state.

"OK" , I gasp in reply, as I allow my feet to move further apart, to give him more access to my dripping puss. I bite my bottom lip, desperately trying not to let out a moan of pleasure, as he thrusts deeper inside my hotness.

"You are very wet, Katie. Is this normal?" he asks, as I feel him delving deeper inside me.

"Oh, ..................yes" I gasp, half reply, half pleasure. " I'm like this most of the time...thats why I am worried that its my bladder". My face is now hot and flushed.

" I see" he replies. He looks down at me and smiles, as his fingers are now pushing in and out of me, in deep rhythmical motions, and I know that this is no longer simply an anatomical examination. He is actually masturbating me! I can’t believe my luck! I never imagined it would go this far!

“And how does this feel?” he asks, as I look up at him, trying to keep control of my urge to scream. “Do you feel any pain when I do this?”

“Ahh..ahh..no..no pain” I gasp, as the sound of his fingers sliding in and out of me fills the room.

“Well, that’s a good sign”, he replies.

His face is flushed too now, and despite his medical training, his natural sexual desires have taken over. How could he resist the opportunity to finger a shy, sexy 18 year olds hot, wet shaved pussy?

After a few more moments, he removes his wet, sticky latex covered fingers.

"Well, everything seems normal there," he says, his cheeks now distinctly pink. I also notice a bulge in his trousers.

“Oh, thank goodness”, I say breathlessly.

"Now, could I ask you now to turn around, Katie, onto your hands and knees, and bend over for me?" he says. By now I can feel myself on the edge.

“Oh..I thought you had finished”, I say, looking puzzled.

"Well, I would like to check you out again from behind this time. It allows me to examine your bladder from a different position," he says, hoarsely. I'm sure he cant believe his luck. Here he is with the horniest of 18 year old girls in his surgery, giving her a very personal examination, and she willingly allows him to do anything he wants! He is in heaven!

Now, I am bending over on hands and knees, my legs spread wide, allowing the doctor a perfect view of my red, swollen, wet pussy lips from behind.

" You have very ...er ..swollen lips", he says, his breathing heavy. “Do they feel sore?”

“No..not really”, I reply “But quite tingly”.

I hear him moving behind me, and glance around. He has removed the latex glove from his right hand, and then I feel his naked fingers once again enter me - this time harder and deeper than before - now ramming me in and out, in and out. I am gasping for breath, as I know I am about to cum.

" Doctor," I gasp, " I think its going to happen soon" . And I moan with pleasure.

“What is going to happen, Katie?” he asks, pretending he doesn’t know I am on the verge of an orgasm now.

“Its going to happen..I can feel it” I say breathlessly, “The fluid is going to come”

He continues to thrust his naughty fingers in and out of me now, as I lay my head on the pillow, my pussy pushed up behind me, exposed and vulnerable to his eager fingers. He is in heaven now, his fingers slipping deep inside my tight, quivering puss, the aroma of my hot juices filling the air.

And then, in a rush of orgasmic pleasure I Cum.

As the doctors fingers pound my eager puss, he looks on in amazement, as I suddenly erupt, sending a stream of my hot, aromatic cum spurting out all over the examination table beneath me, soaking the white paper towel. It makes a swooshing sound the force of my ejaculation squirts out like a fountain, drenching his hand and spraying over his shirt.

He jumps back in surprise, pulling his fingers from between my swollen lips, as another gush of cunny juice squirts out at him.

And he cant believe what he is seeing - this half naked, 18 year old “virgin”, having a squirting orgasm in his surgery.

With his hand removed, I can’t help myself, and reach down between my legs to rub my tingling clitoris, moaning loudly now as wave after wave of pleasure rips through me, causing my vagina to quiver and contract. Another squirt of fluid pours down my inner thighs onto the table, as I gasp and writhe in front of the stunned doctor.

And eventually the fluids stop running.

I collapse, face down on the soggy table, drenched in my wetness. Panting, I try to regain my composure, and look round at the doctor.

He is now sitting in his chair, watching me, taking in every moment of this teenage girls ecstasy. I notice my fluids all over the front of his shirt. I give him an embarrassed smile, as I climb off the table and walk shakily back over to my chair, my knees still trembling as the remnants of my orgasm continue to ripple through me, and wetness trickles down my inner thighs.

“I’m so sorry, Doctor. I couldn’t stop myself. I’ve made such a mess”.

He looks at me thoughtfully, his penis obviously erect in his trousers.

“No..no..please don’t apologise. I think perhaps my examination was too much for you, so really I should apologise to you. How do you feel?”

“Oh..a bit shaky actually” I reply, trying to regain my role as the innocent young teen.

He nods. “Yes I can see that.”

I pull my knickers back on, followed by my mini skirt, and sit back in the chair opposite him.

He is making some notes on the computer screen, seemingly unconcerned that he has just committed a sexual act on one of his young female patients.

"Well, do you think I have a problem with my bladder Doctor?” I ask in a concerned voice." You saw how much I wet myself."

He looks at me over his glasses, and gives me a reassuring smile.

"No Katie, there is nothing to worry about. You are a very healthy young lady".

He then proceeds to explain to me the facts about the female ejaculation.

"Oh I am so relieved," I tell him, getting out of the chair.

Then I give him a knowing smile.

"Well, thanks Doctor - you were great - I really enjoyed that".

And without another word I leave.

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I have several other versions of that fantasy - one involves there being a young medical student in the room, who is asked to examine me on the examination table. In another, I am not wearing panties, and allow the doctor to peep at my pussy. Over the years various versions have evolved, but all have me playing the innocent, horny teenager role.

It has often occurred to me to turn this fantasy into reality, but I have never had the courage to do it, although I did come close once.

About 3 years ago I had to see the doctor about pains I was having in my stomach.

It actually got to the point where I was lying on his examination table, wearing just my short skirt, with nothing underneath, as I don't wear panties at all these days. He had asked me to remove my blouse, and so I was just in my bra and skirt.

I don't know whether he ever knew I was panty - less, but it certainly got me feeling horny!

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Comments(82)

mrcool22
Posted 04 Apr 2014 04:56
it was very good & very sexy as well
Cute_Guy_Uk
Posted 12 Jan 2014 04:15
Would love to be your doctor
TXtabber
Posted 03 Jan 2014 11:41
Nice...I liked the update at the end.
Kubbestol
Posted 30 Nov 2013 07:05
Excellent grammar. A very skillful writer she is.
ajmor
Posted 04 Nov 2013 07:03
That was an excellent read, very very erotic
ParMach
Posted 25 Aug 2013 08:54
Just another high quality story
mrcomfy
Posted 23 Jul 2013 10:01
Very well written and detail excellent. 5+
xreynolds
Posted 20 Jul 2013 00:45
There are three elements that play into the story from the readers view. First, and somewhat of a downer, you are for the most part never free from the author telling the story. (The reader, I suppose, prefers to have their own fantasy.) Part of the reason for this lack of independence is the elaborate preparation prior to the story, and reminders during the story that this is fact your imagination. The second is, written in the first person, the reader is somewhat dragged through the scenario rather than led; also, stylistically, not the best for a fantasy. What I found particularly good was the extent and continuity of detail important to the fantasy and the absence of irrelevant details. This, I feel, always makes for a more compact believable/readable piece.
afterglow
Posted 14 Jun 2013 10:02
Wow, those Doctor / Patient stories can be very cliched..but that was excellent
HotBttmInBriefs
Posted 12 Jun 2013 12:55
Hot story. Enjoyed it.
jhmik_88
Posted 29 Apr 2013 15:35
Very well written and hot!
Stephanie008
Posted 28 Apr 2013 00:38
very well written honey. Love how you open yourself up and share your fantasy. 5 excellent
IR_Lover
Posted 24 Mar 2013 09:20
That was a really hot fantasy!
LucieRose89
Posted 02 Mar 2013 12:41
this is great, might go try it myself
Gramps
Posted 28 Feb 2013 20:41
I loved this story and enjoyed the theme. But, I could not quite "feel" that I knew the characters; actually, I related more with the young lady than with the doctor with wet hands. Wish I could be him, and enjoy.
AllMyIdeasWereTaken
Posted 18 Feb 2013 06:59
Really hot sexy story, similar to some of my fantasies i loved it! So very hot
momis402003
Posted 12 Feb 2013 21:11
Well written and interesting. I hope to read more from you.
Tammy_Nguyen_77
Posted 09 Feb 2013 20:29
Damn!!! That was so fucking hot I might wet myself
magic10fingers4
Posted 09 Feb 2013 08:21
Never really thought of the perspective of a woman experiencing her first ejaculation. I look for a woman who squirts - an truly enjoyed this story and looking forward to reading more - thank you
loveemily
Posted 05 Feb 2013 01:46
its a very hot story well written
HarleyWolfe69
Posted 20 Jan 2013 11:25
That was so hot!!!!!
wddavid60
Posted 21 Dec 2012 13:10
That was a great story so sexually charged and erotic .You are a very good writer and i will surely enjoy you throughly,er reading your stories that is.
Tigerlily67
Posted 20 Oct 2012 10:07
Loved it...the 2nd story of yours that I have read, and will admit, I'm a little wet myself..Love your style..Thank you!
mashman
Posted 19 Oct 2012 11:46
Like to story will follow your writing real promising.
onlyanalias
Posted 14 Oct 2012 16:26
Well done, naughty girl!
stud014
Posted 10 Oct 2012 05:56
Katie...read your first story...great..simple...factual real life...keep writing..i will look to read more
cprivate
Posted 12 Sep 2012 12:49
Got a rise out of me.. Now what do do with it...
cprivate
Posted 12 Sep 2012 12:49
Got a rise out of me.. Now what do do with it...
purplepelican69
Posted 28 Aug 2012 03:17
Just fantastic! An easy 5 out of 5.
Davidsouthuk
Posted 13 Aug 2012 07:26
Love your two fantasies - and I've just bought your ebok for mk iPod Touch so I'll be reading it in bed tonight. My wife will be next to me, totally unaware that I am reading about your sex life :-)
oneway
Posted 08 Aug 2012 14:34
As a fantacy story, she tells both sides well. She feeds my imagination very well.
Posted 30 Jul 2012 14:18
Great little story
naughnukk
Posted 28 Jul 2012 21:24
It made me want to be that Doctor.
seemywowzza
Posted 27 Jul 2012 08:28
WOW! One very hot story. Well done!
AnnieBGoode
Posted 22 Jul 2012 18:30
Brilliant.
jimmyjoyce
Posted 16 Jul 2012 10:42
I like this detailed fantasy very much. It's well written and very sexy. And funny too, though the humour wasn't my main consideration after a while ...
coguy
Posted 02 Jul 2012 02:40
Amazing fantasy! How could I have missed reading it for so long!
burrito
Posted 28 Jun 2012 08:16
really great story cant wait to read more
coffeebean2009
Posted 15 Jun 2012 12:48
That was great. Loved it.
Acountryboy
Posted 07 Jun 2012 13:12
Katie. Very hot story. Please keep them cumming.
Sugarfoot
Posted 29 May 2012 17:47
Just the spark an old guy needed! Thanks Katie.
hornyhelen
Posted 28 May 2012 20:59
my ultimate fantasy, great imagination, love the story
sweetboy
Posted 22 May 2012 09:20
Good story for mastubrating.
tightpanties
Posted 04 May 2012 07:28
Superb!
PhilAnders
Posted 23 Apr 2012 03:45
A fantastic, hugely AROUSING fantasy tale well told.
MissyLuvsYa
Posted 05 Apr 2012 11:20
Very nice girl & very hot!
eroticideas
Posted 06 Feb 2012 05:08
mmm nice.
Hotnite
Posted 13 Oct 2011 23:45
Poor Doctor...Immagine him now stroking his cock and jerking off like crazy when U left his office...hahaha
SerayaBlue
Posted 08 Oct 2011 21:23
wonderful fantasy
naughtynicole
Posted 31 Aug 2011 09:42
very sexy made me think sbout my trips to the doctor keep up the good work
Horny96
Posted 30 Aug 2011 21:00
OMG that is such a fucking awesome story!!! Made me horny!!!
cumonmesweetpuss
Posted 20 Aug 2011 06:20
oh my your such a nasty young girl i want to watch you play with your sweet young little swollen lips and make your clit hard your story is hot sweet wet and very nasty i would have walk over to the door and lock it then help you cum i would have kiss your sweet young puss and lick you from one end of your sweet young ass to the other and suck on your clit licked it as i finger fuck you and as you told me how you like to cum so tell me young lady do you like to cum do you like girls do you want that sweet swollen pussy to cum can i watch oh my what a sweet story
Geongiv4
Posted 27 Jul 2011 13:12
Nice fantasy very arousing, 5 in my book
nazhinaz
Posted 25 Jul 2011 04:07
A sexy fantasy which is hard to be fulfilled. Docs examine female genital parts in routine without buldge in pants. They do it clinically.
somemarriedguyinks
Posted 27 Jun 2011 07:51
incredible fantasy
bill11
Posted 27 Jun 2011 06:28
What an interesting story - enjoyed the feelings - look forward to more

Buz
Posted 20 Jun 2011 06:14
Katie that is very hot!!! Great story!
CuteIrishGirl
Posted 14 Jun 2011 11:28
Mmmm makes me wanna go see my dr right now!
robart88
Posted 12 Jun 2011 03:29
kinky and very erotic view of a woman's orgasm potential..well written
anton777
Posted 15 May 2011 01:32
great and hot story
tobydog2370
Posted 24 Apr 2011 21:53
I can see why that is one of your favorites. My erection grew as I read the story and I felt very satisfied by the end. You have great use of imagery and a style that is unique. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
BubbleButtMan
Posted 04 Feb 2011 09:15
That is an AWESOME fantasy. You should absolutely fulfill it and let us know how it goes...
Harty
Posted 15 Dec 2010 02:03
Well done! full off innocence. thanks.
T0ady
Posted 22 Nov 2010 23:39
wow! as normal katie, wow!
cadeautje
Posted 15 Nov 2010 05:43
Very naughty, very sexy, very exciting! My fantasies are mostly about photoshoots that turn into sex.
Buddybear
Posted 05 Nov 2010 15:42
Wow, what a lovely erotic fantasy. So hot! I can see why you would want to finger-fuck 4 or 5 times a day. You've convinced me to share my childhood masturbation fantasies. But they'll never be THIS good!
andyhants
Posted 08 Sep 2010 02:11
Hot story and maybe I should have taken up a career as a doctor...keep the stories cumming
gspanker051
Posted 03 Aug 2010 19:13
Very good story
lickadysplits
Posted 26 Jul 2010 21:09
Amazing... CUM to Doctor Dan!!! I can HARDly wait to Cum across your other stories... literally! Dumb Doctor though, we all know that if nothing is discovered upon initial exxxamination there must be a more thourough Probing!!! Rx: Take on shower and SEE me SOON!
SwartCat
Posted 01 Apr 2010 20:50
Very naughty!!! You'll make me go to med school just so I can give you a check up!!! yummy!!!!
john712live
Posted 25 Mar 2010 10:51
Great story, i really loved it. Made me wish i went to med school
Potlood
Posted 12 Jan 2010 03:30
Your stories are excellent.
beachbum6031
Posted 08 Jan 2010 13:58
damn fine story... I too thought the doc was going to fuck you... especially when you were on your hands and knees..
TDHDC
Posted 28 Oct 2009 18:54
You def got me hard. I thought for sure though the Dr. was going to give it to you.
Redwolf
Posted 25 Oct 2009 09:49
I can only say wow to that one.
luvgirls
Posted 12 Oct 2009 08:02
very erotic and hot story.. loved it, very simple but really amazing...i am full satisfied reading it
york202
Posted 27 Sep 2009 02:24
Love your stories Katie, real and fatasy very erotic, begining to wish i was a doctor. Keep them comeing or is that cuming.
Chauncey
Posted 23 Sep 2009 13:05
wow what great fantasies you have. Well written and very arousing. Definitely a 5
surf
Posted 21 Sep 2009 07:17
love those fantasies.....very hot
DBarclay
Posted 19 Sep 2009 05:57
"Remember," he said, "that closing quotation marks go on the outside of the punctuation, not the inside."

The ellipsis should be used sparingly and alway in three's... no more no less
ell690
Posted 19 Sep 2009 02:44
very sexy katie,,,your naughty
Jason_NYC
Posted 18 Sep 2009 16:27
Crisply written and amazingly erotic, Katie -- as usual. Rates 5 stars * * * * *on my arousal scale.
 

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