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Caught in the Act
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Lisa

Caught in the Act

Anna's new housemate catches her in a private moment.
Anna had only been living with Lincoln for three months, one week and five days when he walked in on her masturbating. He’d originally left with an overnight bag swinging from his clenched fist and a casual comment thrown over his shoulder letting her know he'd be spending the weekend at a friend’s place. Ten minutes after he'd walked out the door she'd stripped down to her tank top and panties, feeling the urgent need to relieve some of the tension that being around him regularly caused.

In terms of personal habits he'd been the perfect housemate; tidy, helpful around the apartment, paid his share of the bills on time. The only problem she had with him was his appearance. He was gorgeous, and combined with his warm, easygoing personality, it had proven to be a major distraction. His eyes and hair were the colour of rich espresso, while his addiction to running and his job as a personal trainer helped maintain a long, lean body. The playful way he had about him, from his sense of humour to the flirty comments he always threw her way, pushed all the right buttons. Often.

She’d removed her bra and settled into a cross-legged position on the couch, with a Channing Tatum movie playing on TV for inspiration. Just as she'd really started getting into it—one hand inside her panties and the other cupping the breast she’d tugged her top down to expose—Lincoln had barged into the apartment rambling about having forgotten something.

He stopped mid-sentence and stared. His mouth opened and closed. Shocked amusement filled his eyes.

Anna recovered first and screamed, “Oh my God, Oh, my God! Get out! Close your eyes! Stay there! Shit. Just GO!” She scrambled to yank up her top and clamped her legs together, throwing the remote at him as a distraction while she sprinted from the room.

Embarrassment swept over her again at the memory and she wondered for about the hundredth time whether she’d ever get over it. Luckily she hadn’t been calling out his name at the time. If he’d turned up thirty seconds later it would have been a different story.

She sipped from her can of Pepsi and stirred the brown rice bubbling in the pot on the stove. It was already after seven so he’d be home any minute now.

Her exhibitionist moment had become that elephant in the room no one dared speak about but it was only a matter of time before he cracked and brought up the subject. Since returning from his weekend away three days ago the amused glances he kept sending her way confirmed her hunch; the only reason he held back from talking about it was because it made her uncomfortable. This whole situation had become far too entertaining—for him, at least.

Anna heard the front door open and close. He usually headed down the hall to drop his work gear off in his bedroom before he came looking for her. She took the pot of rice over to the island bench to drain while she waited for him to appear.

Moments later he entered the kitchen, sending her a grin while he strolled across the tiled floor barefoot. She knew—she just knew every time he looked at her now he pictured that scene all over again. “Hey,” he said. He wore black athletic shorts and a sleeveless red top that revealed his muscled arms.

“Hi.” Anna smiled and met his eyes briefly. “Dinner’s almost ready if you want to set the table.”

His hair gleamed under the lights. He always looked so healthy and full of life while she was on the skinny side of slim with mostly unremarkable features. Her only saving graces were a plump mouth that according to her last boyfriend looked obscene when she wore red lipstick and a pair of breasts that were a little too big for her frame.

Her job as a columnist for a teen magazine meant she sometimes worked from home so she’d thrown on an old grey t-shirt and navy yoga pants this morning. Her feet were bare and her dark-framed glasses perched on the bridge of her nose. A tortoiseshell clip just barely held her messy blonde bun together at the back of her head.

She left the drained colander in the sink, switched off the burner under the stir fry and went about serving up dinner.

When they were both sitting in the dining room beside the floor-to-ceiling window that showcased the twinkling lights of the city, Anna speared a piece of chicken and shoved it into her mouth. She chewed and swallowed, then quickly replaced it with another to avoid having to talk to him.

She wished things could return to normal between them, that they could go back to sharing their flirty banter and having fun together. They’d clicked from the moment they met. Now it was just awkward and the fault lay entirely with her. He hadn’t changed a bit. Her eyes remained directed at her plate. It was only when Lincoln let out a snort of amusement that she raised her head.

“It’s natural, you know,” he said. His gaze roamed her face, taking everything in. “To want to do it, I mean. Everyone does it.”

Anna closed her eyes. “I don’t want to talk about it, Lincoln.”

“I know.”

She opened her eyes and forced herself to look at him. “Then why are you bringing it up?”

“We need to talk about it.” He balanced his fork on the edge of his plate. “This is serious. The tension around here’s putting me off my food.”

Although it didn’t help at all she still appreciated his attempt to bring humour into the conversation. “Can’t we just pretend it never happened?” she said.

“Anna, it did happen and it’s not a big deal. You’re just turning it into one.”

Her eyes widened. “That’s easy for you to say. How would you feel if I walked in on you… pleasuring yourself?”

“I don’t know because it’s never happened to me. I always go somewhere private to… pleasure myself.” She heard the laughter in his tone. “I’ve never set up camp on the couch before and just gone for it.”

Oh, my God. If the humiliation at hearing his words wasn’t enough now she had the image of him all aroused to contend with, too. Anna pushed her plate away and leaned her forehead against the table. “I’m just going to bang my head here until I knock myself out, okay?”

“C’mon.” His patient amusement only made the situation that much worse. Why couldn’t she be the mature one here?

Chair legs scraped against tile then his hand wrapped around her upper arm. He tugged her reluctantly into a standing position. Knowing he wanted to talk about it rather than eat his dinner made her realise just how determined he was to fix this problem.

She tilted her head to stare up at him, blown away by the jolt of awareness she experienced whenever she looked into his eyes.

“Why does it bother you so much?” he asked. His brows pulled together as he studied her.

“Is it really that hard to understand? You saw me with my hand in my panties, Lincoln. You saw my boobs, too.” She turned her head and stared out the window, wishing she could be anywhere other than here… with him… talking about the first place holder on her list of embarrassing moments.

“One boob,” he corrected. “A very… very nice one.”

Her eyes flicked back to his to check whether he was making fun of her but his compliment appeared to be sincere. “Thank you,” she said.

“No, thank you.

A reluctant smile appeared. She should have talked about it with him when it actually happened instead of leaving it to him to address the issue. It would have been a lot simpler. Still… “It just feels like I’m at a disadvantage. You saw me during a private moment and it's obvious you still think it's funny. I don’t like you having that over me.”

His mouth turned up at one corner. “You want me to jerk off in front of you to make things even?”

Her stomach fluttered at the thought. Anna knew he was joking to lighten the mood but when she opened her mouth to speak the word that wanted to come out was yes. “Umm…” She sent him a tentative smile.

He let out a laughing breath. “Ahh… I can’t believe it. You actually want me to jerk off in front of you.”

Now that he’d brought up the idea Anna kept her eyes on him and her mouth shut, waiting him out. She refused to get herself in any deeper without some indication that he felt even a tiny portion of the attraction that tormented her on a daily basis.

He watched her and the humour slowly slipped from his expression. The silence stretched on and the strain between them grew until it eventually became unbearable. His gaze dropped to her breasts as they lifted and fell beneath her t-shirt. When his eyes met hers again the intensity in them left her stunned. “If we’re doing this I’ll need some inspiration.”

Her breathing shallowed and her pulse raced. “Like… what?” She could barely get the words out.

“Use your imagination.” He grabbed her wrist and led her into the living room where a chocolate brown floor rug and two oversized leather couches filled most of the space. He took her over to the coffee table and urged her to sit on the edge. Lincoln positioned himself on the couch opposite her and relaxed against the back. When his attention returned to her his brows lifted. “When this is over so is all the awkwardness between us. I want the old Anna back.”

She swallowed. “Okay.” Did he actually intend to go through with this or was he teasing her and making her wait for the moment where he burst into laughter? She went for something safe just to test him. Her fingers reached up to tug at the clip holding her hair in place. She pulled it free and her long blonde hair tumbled over her shoulders. “Does that inspire you?” she asked, already knowing the answer.

He let out an amused breath. “You’re gorgeous but I’m going to need more.”

She hid her pleasure at his words, at the warmth they encouraged inside her. Anna pinched the temple of her eyeglasses and prepared to take them off.

“Leave ‘em on,” he said.

Oh, so he liked the glasses? He’d never mentioned that before. She nibbled her lower lip, wondering how far to go next. Affection and tenderness filled his expression. He looked like he wanted her to keep going. The fact that he just sat there patiently waiting, his hands resting on his knees while his gaze swept over her, helped her relax. He didn’t push her or tease her so she decided to make the next step more adventurous.

Anna held her breath and gripped the hem of her t-shirt, dragging it over her torso. The bundle dropped from her slackened fingertips and she sat before him wearing only her blue lace bra and navy pants. An intense longing spread through her as she watched him watching her.

“Now we’re getting somewhere,” he said.

She heard the huskiness in his voice and shivers tickled the surface of her skin. Before she could change her mind Anna stood up and made quick work of removing her pants. “I seem to be the only one who’s actually doing anything.” She sat back down in her white thong, gripping the edge of the table to keep her trembling fingers steady. “Don’t you have a job to do?”

His mouth quirked with the smile she knew and loved. “Why don’t you just tell me you want to see my cock?”

Desire swelled inside her, crashing in the pit of her stomach, making her feel as if she’d just lost her footing. She met his eyes and in a voice that had turned surprisingly breathy she said, “I really want to see your cock.”

Heat flashed in his eyes. “Keep that up and you’ll be doing a lot more than looking.” He grabbed his top at the neckline and leaned forward, drawing it over his head to reveal his entire upper body to her for the first time.

He’d never been one for strutting around the apartment half-naked and she regretted that the moment she set eyes on his bare chest. “Amazing.” She felt a sudden urge to run her tongue over his abs. “You’ve got an incredible body, but I still don’t see your… you know.”

He chuckled then and it thrilled her that they could find time to laugh despite the sensual nature of the moment. “You’re a little eager, aren’t you? Been a while?”

“Ages.” She reached behind her to the clasp on her bra. Anna flicked it open and drew the straps down her arms until they settled at her bent elbows. She kept the cups in place with her hands and sent him an expectant look. The idea of baring herself to him in this way made her heart race. He’d already told her he liked what he saw when he caught her here on the couch. That wasn’t the problem. It was being almost naked and sitting just across from him while he…she had to drag in a steadying breath.

He grinned and lifted his hips, shoving at the waistbands of both his shorts and underwear. He lowered them at the same time, stopping just before he got to the good stuff. “You sure you can handle this?”

She watched the ridges in his stomach contract and her mouth went dry. She really wasn’t sure of anything right now. “I won’t be the one handling it, but I’m sure I’ll enjoy watching.”

His huffed out a laugh and his thumbs stayed tucked in the top of his shorts, teasing her with the skin he had on display and the mystery of what remained hidden. “There’s only one problem,” he said.

She clutched her loosened bra to her breasts. “What’s that?”

He met her eyes. “I didn’t get to see you come.”

Her cheeks flushed and a quick thrill ran through her. She knew exactly what he was getting at; she’d have to be content with an unfinished show from him or join in so they could reach that peak together. The thought of him in that moment, watching that look come over his face, she didn’t want to miss out on seeing it for real. “You want to watch me?”

He gave her a half smile. “I’d rather make you come than sit back and watch, but I’ll take what I can get.”

Her heart slowed to a heavy thud. “What?”

Lincoln shook his head and laughed. “So pretty, yet so dense,” he teased. “What do you think all the flirting’s been about?”

“I just thought—I thought you flirted with all women like that.” Knowing she’d jumped to the wrong conclusion made her happier than she’d thought possible. “You want to have sex with me?” Anna narrowed her eyes, staring at him. He’d better not be joking.

“Hmm, no.” His gaze travelled over her, pausing at her mouth before moving slowly down her body. He finally looked her in the eyes. “Having sex sounds so clinical. I want to fuck you.”

She let out the breath she’d been holding. A surge of something completely and utterly carnal took hold of her. “I didn’t know,” she said breathlessly. “I mean, look at you… and look at me.”

He frowned, appearing annoyed by that, as if he couldn’t understand why she felt so out of her depth when it came to his physical appeal. “If you don’t shut up and come over here I’m going to start wondering why I’m so hopelessly attracted to you.”

She couldn’t catch her breath. Her fingers tightened around the delicate material of her bra as she took it from her breasts and let it fall to the floor. Anna shook her head slowly. “I still want to watch you,” she heard herself saying.

His gaze dropped to her bared breasts and his jaw clenched. “Better lose the panties, then.”

The expression on his face made her want to kiss him. A rush of need swept through her. Her nipples tightened into sensitive buds. She pushed herself off the coffee table and slipped her fingers into the waistband of her thong. Lincoln’s eyes followed her every movement, and as she lowered her panties he pushed his shorts and boxers down his thighs.

She stepped from her underwear just as he revealed his cock, inch by delectable inch. Her pulse raced. She couldn’t tear her eyes away from the sight. It was already hard and now she’d just found somewhere else on his body that she wanted to lick.

He kicked his shorts free as Anna sat back down on the table. She perched on the edge, torn between the need to climb over him and straddle his lap or keep her distance for a better view.

“Ladies first,” he said. A muscle twitched in his jaw. His eyes burned with need. She’d never seen this side of him before.

She lifted her feet, resting them on tiptoes while she slowly, slowly parted her knees. One hand reached behind her, her palm flattening against the table top for support. The other dipped between her thighs to tease her damp folds. Moisture coated her fingertips. She sighed, wanting to tip her head back but unwilling to lose sight of him for a second.

Lincoln groaned and grabbed hold of his cock, stroking the thick, hard length as he watched her. His eyes slid over every part of her, from her face to her breasts, dropping between her legs like a physical caress. The veins in the back of his hand stood out. The way his fingers gripped his erection made her own move faster over her slick pussy.

She wanted his hands on her, all over her. She wanted to feel the damp heat of his mouth as it travelled across her skin, the rigid length of him as it sank inside her.

“I was thinking about you,” she said, struggling to put the words together. “When you walked in on me, I mean.” Her fingers slid over her clit, massaging the swollen bud while her gaze meshed with his. She hit a sensitive spot and closed her eyes briefly, swallowing a moan. “I’m always thinking about you.”

“Anna.” She opened her eyes at the sound of her name. He let out a heavy breath that bordered on a groan, working his cock with increasing speed. The head glistened with moisture. She imagined lapping at it with the tip of her tongue. “C’mere. I want you.”

His words gave her a head rush. She drew her legs together and warmth pulsed between her thighs as she rose from her position on the table. She took the two steps that lay between them, leaning over him to bring her mouth into close contact with his. He reached up with one hand and filled his palm with her flesh, massaging her breast, teasing her nipple while his lips brushed hers.

Anna sighed and climbed over him, hovering with her legs spread either side of his thighs. She clasped her hand around his, encouraging him to keep stroking his cock. He groaned and pressed his mouth to hers, taking control, guiding the kiss. He took it deeper, drawing it out with slow sweeps of his tongue, soft nibbles of his lips.

He thumbed her nipple. A whimper sounded in her throat and her hand skated over her belly to delve back between her thighs. She found her wetness, teasing her hidden nub. She moaned and rocked her hips to meet the firm glide of her fingertips. The slick head of his cock bumped against her knuckles as they both pleasured themselves.

Her control faltered and she kissed him harder, thrusting her tongue against his as her desire grew. Her hips jerked. She broke the kiss, her breaths coming heavily as she whispered, “Your cock… I wanna ride it.”

He growled and tugged harder at his thick length, using his free hand to grab a fistful of her hair at the back of her head. “Come for me first,” he said, “then it’s all yours.” He used his grip on her hair to hold her right there and crushed his lips to hers.

His tongue plunged into her mouth. A husky moan tore from her and she rubbed her clit, massaging, teasing… pushing herself closer to the edge. Her eyes closed tightly, her only focus to come. She needed him inside her. Now. His hard, wet cock kept sliding against the back of her hand, taunting her, urging her on.

He seemed to sense her impending release. Either that or he was close himself. His mouth grew more demanding, his groans more frequent. Anna’s fingertips increased pressure on her clit, slipping back and forth. Her other hand cupped the back of his neck, holding on. Her belly tensed and her hips thrust.

His mouth roamed over hers, his tongue caressed. It only increased her desire, her need for him. His hand in her hair, his body beneath her, she wanted him so much. Anna pulled her mouth free to drag in a shaky breath. Her forehead rested against his. She cried out, shuddering. It flowed through her in a surge of complete bliss. Her moan, when it came, was throaty and full of pleasure. Her fingers kept rubbing, her hips jerking.

While the final tremors still shook her body Lincoln released her hair and clasped her hips. He shoved his cock inside her, pulling her down to deepen the connection. Her back bowed and she let out a garbled sound. He filled her, harsh, fast. Her wet fingers dug into his shoulder, her other hand clutched his hair.

His deep groan against her throat made her shiver. He wrapped his arms tightly around her and fucked her hard. Anna held on, turning her head to press her lips to his temple. Her breasts jolted against his chest. Her stomach quivered as the need built inside her all over again.

His arm tightened around her and he lifted her, still connected with him, lowering her onto her back on the couch. He rested on one elbow, using his other hand to grasp her ass as he took her even harder. His cock plunged inside her, his hips smacking hers. Sweat-slicked skin met sweat-slicked skin. His chest brushed against her taut nipples.

Lincoln looked into her eyes, a glint of something wild in his gaze. His mouth lifted in a half-smile. “You’re so fucking hot,” he said.

Anna clenched her thighs around him, linking her ankles at the base of his spine. “Shut up and make me come.”

He nuzzled her throat and chuckled. Damned if the sound didn’t make a shiver pass right through her. His pace increased, growing in intensity until she found herself having a brand new appreciation for athletic men.

She met his thrusts with her bucking hips, tipping her head back and biting her lip. She felt it coming, the throb beginning between her thighs. Lincoln’s teeth grazed her throat and it was all she needed to give her that final push. Anna gripped his shoulders and let out a hoarse moan, writhing beneath him. She was still so sensitive from the last effort that she wanted to pull away from him and get closer all at the same time.

Her release only spurred him on. Lincoln’s fingers dug into the flesh of her ass, pulling her toward his thrusts. His mouth travelled across her collarbone, moving up to her jaw. He rested his lips there, his warm breaths whispering over her as he reached his peak. Anna held on, bracing herself as he gave a couple of final, forceful thrusts, letting out a low groan as he came inside her.

She hugged him, her arms and thighs wrapping around him to keep him close. He relaxed against her, his heart thudding hard, his breaths wrenching from him.

Her eyes drifted closed and a smile claimed her features. She relished in the weight of him pressing against her. She couldn’t believe how much had changed between them in such a short space of time. From the awkwardness this morning to this… now… Anna let out a trembling breath and pressed her cheek to his, closing her eyes to take it all in.

A short while later Lincoln stirred against her and lifted his head. “Hi.” He smiled, his eyes heavy-lidded as he lowered his mouth to give her a long, lazy kiss. She lifted her arms above her head, stretching leisurely beneath him and sighing as his lips moved over hers. 

He gave her one final soft kiss and pulled back to look her over. “We’re going to have to come up with some arrangement here—housemates-with-benefits or something—because I need to do this again.”

Anna lowered her arms, hugging his neck as she squeezed her thighs around him. He was still inside her and judging by that look on his face he'd be hard again in no time. “Really? You want to do it again, huh?” She could barely keep the pleasure from her voice.

“Yeah.” He slipped his hand over her breast, massaging her flesh. “We were in such a hurry I neglected these. I want to make up for that oversight.” Her breath caught and her hips lifted beneath him. He smiled. “You okay with that?” He dipped his head to draw her nipple into his mouth.

Anna let out a sound that couldn’t decide if it wanted to be a laugh or a moan. “Yeah, I think I can handle that.”

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Comments(71)

Broccck
Posted 03 Apr 2014 05:59
Lisa, there is something you have perfected that makes your work a little different from our other great authors: I would call it "naughty loving."
I would clal you the "Mistress of Naughty Loving." Love always seems to find its way into the mix of your powerfully lusty stories. It is a very deep and clear vision fo the way men and women really do relate to each other. It was just a gorgeous piece of writing.

delsmith
Posted 03 Mar 2014 03:15
Brilliantly done and captivating beginning to end. This story has it all.

AlexaFox
Posted 28 Feb 2014 20:21
Funny, clever, & sexy ! very well done.
DirtyFlirtyUnder30
Posted 17 Jan 2014 02:24
absolutely brilliant.
Chanel
Posted 31 Dec 2013 22:54
It felt so natural & the discriptions so vivid I felt I was right there. You are a very talented writer.
IBIC
Posted 21 Nov 2013 18:32
mutual masturbation is so hot...love the story

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LASARDaddy
Posted 05 Nov 2013 19:31
This has been a major fantasy of mine. Well written and the character development made me want to know them. Not necessarily for sex.

Thank you for this story. I've read 2 others from you and I really liked them too.
honeyx
Posted 16 Oct 2013 15:47
Great story! I loved it

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real69luvr
Posted 18 Sep 2013 18:05
Just let me add my cuddos for a job well done. Damned hot and very erotic.

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real69luvr
Posted 18 Sep 2013 18:04
Just let me add my cuddos for a job well done. Damned hot and very erotic.
groucho73
Posted 18 Sep 2013 10:00
Great Story! Well written.
txman3522
Posted 10 Sep 2013 23:52
Damn!
Amazing, Passionate, Excellently written, Amusing and it kept me really hard wishing I had a roommate like that.
elizabethblack
Posted 04 Sep 2013 15:19
I'm so glad several readers found the word "scorching".....perfect! My, my, my. I wish it was Christmas and I'd know what to ask Santa for..........Lincoln. You really do rock, Lisa. Thank you.
xreynolds
Posted 19 Jul 2013 18:55
Show us how to get past the barriers we put between us. How many times have two people wanted the same thing, and it never happened because of... Well, now we know better! A good write is a good lesson in self knowledge! You can't give what you don't have. Thanks for the wisdom.

Wilful
Posted 19 Jul 2013 15:33
I'm actually embarrassed that you've read one of my stories. I feel like Anna, being caught diddling myself on the couch, by comparison. You're a brilliant author. Everything from your vivid descriptions to your natural interactions. I'm in awe! But if you could not leave me so desperately wanting more next time, that'd be great.
JefferyB
Posted 15 Jul 2013 21:20
What could I say that the others have not? Beautifully written and leaving us all wanting more ...
SSean08
Posted 15 Jul 2013 18:50
Like everyone else said...WOW. So well written. You were very descriptive and erotic. I felt like I was there portraying Lincoln
TonyT
Posted 10 Jul 2013 16:42
Great story. It captures the passion of the first time but I also love how both of their desires built up until the needed each other. You captures that desire wonderfully
subgirl14
Posted 25 Jun 2013 15:04
Wow. I mean, just, wow. and I don't say that about every story I read. This is quite possibly the best-written piece I've ever read on here, factoring in descriptiveness, erotic content, and *grammar*. You have the trifecta here, and it's just absolutely fantastic!!
Emerys
Posted 06 Jun 2013 19:38
I really enjoyed this. The interaction between Lincoln and Lisa was particularly awesome. I absolutely loved the dialogue. Thanks for sharing! This was just delicious.
trazz13
Posted 03 Jun 2013 03:08
....amazing story...erotic and so imaginable...

matt55
Posted 30 May 2013 09:01
Perfect, Lisa...just how people might actually act. I love the dialogue and how the story progresses to very hot sex!
sexybitch6996
Posted 26 May 2013 03:13
very erotic ...loved it
BrendaHapp1
Posted 18 May 2013 07:33
This is the only story on Lush I have read ... and reread .. and reread. Love the characters, the dialogue and the way you wrote it. Words I'm associating with you: natural and stylish.
Valkyrie_angel
Posted 12 May 2013 22:40
This is an amazing story! I could not stop reading it. Your writing just flowed and I truly enjoyed reading this ^^ I agree with the rest as well, you've managed to create such vivid characters! Anna and Linc are wonderful together ^^
master69
Posted 12 May 2013 07:10
Hot
magic10fingers4
Posted 29 Apr 2013 07:57
what a scene - I also ask, how could you get a 4 for that?

I will read more of your stories - lol - you will have a very high standard to meet from now on!

Thank you!
archie1
Posted 09 Apr 2013 11:48
Excellent, just excellent,, how could anyone give you a 4... This is the very best horny reading. So real.
Elling50
Posted 01 Apr 2013 12:36
I must just join the crowd of admireres. Very good writing.
phantom741
Posted 24 Mar 2013 02:50
Excellent! Gripping right to the end. Well done and a well deserved 5!

Liz
Posted 18 Mar 2013 09:21
Lisa, this was fantastic! Every motion and emotion felt real and vivid. Your descriptions of the anxiety and passions really brought this to story to life in an exceptional way. Sexual, sensual, sassy!
AvaMarie
Posted 24 Feb 2013 10:38
Wow just wow! I loved reading this, got me wishing I had a housemate like him! x
uwant2ido
Posted 22 Feb 2013 19:11
We.both loved it
Simon66
Posted 10 Feb 2013 02:43
Haven't read a story yet that's had so many votes and still averaged 5! Brilliantly descriptive without being crude. Loved it.
SITTING
Posted 08 Feb 2013 07:48
Brilliant (as ever). Relateable characters and I love the way you always manage to make the sex seem natural and unhurried. The dialogue was perfect and you set the scene perfectly... had me hooked all the way through!
sweetcutecock
Posted 07 Feb 2013 19:07
loved it from the minute i started reading,keep up the good work

Dancing_Doll
Posted 07 Feb 2013 17:48
Your characters and their interactions always feel so natural and relatable. And your narrative is literally as smooth as silk - always! Congrats on your EP too - verrrry well deserved! This story is a real stand out and just seems so effortlessly sexy.

Naughtygrl73
Posted 07 Feb 2013 03:11
Such effortless writing.
An absolute pleasure to read

Mazza
Posted 06 Feb 2013 01:16
Absolutely fantastic, Lisa!

As always, you got the balance just right. Funny, sexy, hot...

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CharlotteRusse1
Posted 05 Feb 2013 16:59
Great characters and build up. I was waiting for a new story for a while. Thanks!
hardnhot18
Posted 05 Feb 2013 13:23
Extraordinarily hot. Very nicely done.
gossipgirl
Posted 05 Feb 2013 11:13
Wow, I really hope there's more! This story was beyond amazing!
Davnibbles
Posted 05 Feb 2013 08:09
Well done Lisa, fantastic effort., probably one of the best I have read. The pace of the story is perfect, the sexual play is very imaginative. Its so realistic, I think this may have come from your own experiences.

Buz
Posted 04 Feb 2013 15:54
Truly superb! I love this outstanding story Lisa. You did such a superior job with this.
carmen_has36
Posted 04 Feb 2013 07:13
Very erotic and extremely arousing Lisa !!!
Lover_Eternal
Posted 04 Feb 2013 06:02
Excellent story!
SallyRAnne
Posted 03 Feb 2013 22:45
Wow, scorching, stunning, loved it. 10 out of 5 from me.

Tashtego
Posted 03 Feb 2013 21:31
Holy smokes, what a story. I'm breathless, really. "No, thank YOU" ... classic. 5++ no question.
Dwin
Posted 03 Feb 2013 19:37
Wonderful story. Now I want you to watch me. In by delectable inch.
Lonelypole
Posted 03 Feb 2013 10:46
Hot story!

stephanie
Posted 03 Feb 2013 08:02
You had me at the image of that girl playing tapitty-tap-tap inside those white lace knickers. But then I READ the actual story...

A five, no question.

xx Steph
Coco
Posted 02 Feb 2013 19:38
"Sweat-slicked skin met sweat-slick skin." That did it...

Lisa, this is superb. The flirtatious banter has just the right touch. I'm such a fan of your work. We'll done, my friend.
NaughtyNicola
Posted 02 Feb 2013 13:58
I absolutely love stories like this great job!!!
magichands101
Posted 02 Feb 2013 13:41
Awesome story Lisa, I think anyone that's ever lived in a share house can relate to this ! Very hot, thank you
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 02 Feb 2013 12:46
breathless. heart racing. holy moly.

Green_Man
Posted 02 Feb 2013 12:20
What the hell? This was perfect. I loved it. You are so fine Lisa. Please, please me again soon.

principessa
Posted 02 Feb 2013 12:18
Well done, Lisa.
TJoker
Posted 02 Feb 2013 12:16
Great story. Well done, very erotic. "V=5+++."
ArtMan
Posted 02 Feb 2013 10:56
A most excellent story. The writing is splendid and it is wonderfully erotic! 5+

DLizze
Posted 02 Feb 2013 09:39
"... set up camp in the couch ... and just gone for it."
I'll never again view camping the same way.
MissyLuvsYa
Posted 02 Feb 2013 09:17
A wonderful story!!!!

naughtynurse
Posted 02 Feb 2013 08:37
Lovely story!

TheGulfCoaster
Posted 02 Feb 2013 08:32
I loved the way the anticipation and desire just kept building. Not a single dull moment.

Saga
Posted 02 Feb 2013 08:25
Wow. This was exceptionally good!! I absolutely loved it!!

WellMadeMale
Posted 02 Feb 2013 07:43
Seemingly effortless, again.

sweet_as_candy
Posted 02 Feb 2013 07:01
Wow! Absolutely stunning! Flawless!

Sexy from the start, loved the playful dialogue too.

Scorching hot stuff. Well done Lisa xo
Callisto
Posted 02 Feb 2013 06:59
Great job Lisa, loved it.
fadedglory
Posted 02 Feb 2013 06:23
Oh wow, that story made my day a whole lot better, well written.
irishlad123
Posted 02 Feb 2013 06:13
Loved it.

clum
Posted 02 Feb 2013 05:58
Just magnificent. Not a single fault I can pick with this. Wow.
scooter
Posted 02 Feb 2013 05:58
Boy Lisa, you sure know how to bring life to your fantasy characters.

And to think I was starting to feel sorry for Anna. What a lucky day for for two loving friends.

I enjoyed this one from start to finish, and even in between.
 

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