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This is my first story and by all accounts mostly true with a bit of fantasy mixed in. I live alone in a single home and work probably too much at times. When I do have time to myself I prefer to spend it in the nude but having families around me I have to keep it inside or in the backyard. One day I was in my backyard and it was hot so I had taken off my shirt when I heard something over the fence in my neighbor behind me. This neighbor is divorced not quite the MILF you might think but while she's not a 10 she is very beautiful. I only talked to her a few times just normal things between neighbors. I was about to shout over the fence my hello when I caught a glimpse through the fence boards of naked flesh so I went silent. I crept over to the fence to get a better look and was surprised to see my neighbor totally naked rubbing lotion on her body. I was only wearing my shorts and no underwear so I reached in and my cock was already more than half hard. I stroked my cock looking through the fence watching my neighbor was making me harder than I had ever been before. I hadn't yet seen between her legs but I'd always imagined she must've shaved. I was not disappointed to say the least when she lay back and spread her legs. Her beautiful pink center was juicy and moist as I continued to stroke my engorged member. When she finally reached between her legs to run a finger through her lips I wished it was me doing it to her but I was scared. As we continued to masturbate I swear I saw the moistness between her legs thicken and run down to the chair. She rubbed her pussy and tweaked her nipples till they were hard as a rock and could put an eye out. Oh how I wished I could be the one to suckle those pebbles on her 34b breasts and slide my finger between the fold of her hot pussy. It seemed like forever that I'd been standing there and my legs began to feel weak and I felt I couldn't hold back anymore so I shot my load on the fence as I watched my neighbor writh on her chair and cum at the same time. When she had finished cumming she sat up quickly. I thought did she hear me but I'm positive she couldn't see me. I stood there quietly letting the cum dribble from my deflating cock and watching her stand. Oh what a gorgeous body she had not a scar or scratch on it and her pussy was shaved or waxed smooth the lips wire swollen from her orgasm and cum was leaking between her lips. I don't think that anything could get any better. WOW I thought I never expected to see that in my lifetime. Now when I see her in the front yard she gives me a smile and I wonder if she heard me. I still walk around naked or as few cloths as possible hoping to see more of my exciting neighbor so we can masturbate together again.

This is my first story and would love feedback on how I did or what I can do to make it better. I've read so many other stories and I'm not sure I can ever be at the same caliber as the others but maybe I will gather up the courage to compose another maybe several. Thanks and Blessed be to the Goddess.
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Comments(11)

reboot
Posted 19 Dec 2013 09:23
Very good for your first attempt, keep going you will get better.
allikat269
Posted 13 May 2013 15:55
I thought is was really good for your first story. Maybe get a little more detailed & make it a lot longer. Can't wait to read next one!!
HotBttmInBriefs
Posted 11 Feb 2013 13:35
Very good for a first story. I enjoyed it a great deal.
Kandikiss51
Posted 03 Feb 2012 02:19
You need a proof reader, and also need to look at your story composure. Break it down into paragraphs, give more description, ie) why is the neighbor a ten? Keep trying.
MindSparks
Posted 07 Aug 2011 10:14
Scored with a 3 because: Paragraphs. Read all about 'em.
whorecrux
Posted 06 Aug 2011 16:18
Scored with a 3 because: That is a gigantic wall of text - try to break it up.
dback
Posted 06 Aug 2011 15:33
Look at other Lush stories. See how they're broken up into paragraphs. As a first step, without even changing a word, your story will be so much easier to read.

Good luck with your next effort.
Ianthomas
Posted 06 Aug 2011 15:23
Yeah maybe a bit too much of a first-timer in that it is a bit rushed, but good enough, so write more.
hornyolderguy
Posted 06 Aug 2011 14:15
Very good for your first!!!
akwildman
Posted 06 Aug 2011 13:10
Yes, great for a first story! Seems like a lot of us here like them longer, I know I do. More build up, getting to know the characters better! But This was great! Thanks for sharing!
ArtAngel
Posted 06 Aug 2011 12:57
For a 1st try..very good, could be a bit longer
 

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