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The Dark Shadow of Desire
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Buz

The Dark Shadow of Desire

A man discovers a new fetish when he catches his fiancée fucking two men.
Hidden in the depth of your lust, you will find your own dark shadow of desire.

My therapist asked me to write out my confession, read it to myself, seal it in an envelope and burn it.

My name is Derek and this is my confession. 

It was last Friday night. I had arranged for a limousine to take my fiancée and I to the formal ball that begins the Arts Centre’s new exhibition season. The tickets were very expensive but I knew that my fiancée loved elite social affairs and the art shows so I wanted to provide her with a wonderful time. I wore a black, classic tuxedo with a red bow tie. 

I rang her doorbell and, as usual, it took Tiffany several minutes to come to the door.

“You have a key, silly,” she said, opening the door to let me in.

She stood inside the doorway with her back to me, looking back over her left shoulder, holding the tiny strands together at the neck that held the hooks to her backless dress.

“Would you please hook this?” she asked in a frustrated voice, “I can’t seem to line it up.”

I connected the tiny hooks and Tiffany spun around playfully, her eyes beaming and smiling at me as she asked, “How do I look?”

I could hardly speak. She looked so stunningly beautiful and glamorous. Her long, slightly curly, sandy blonde hair was styled to one side; her make up was perfect. She wore long, hanging diamond earrings on tiny, single, white gold chains and a red sequin dress. Of course, it was backless, hooked behind the neck and open almost to her ass. In the front, it scooped very low between her perky breasts, almost to her navel. The dress hugged her perfectly shaped, tight body almost like a glove. The dress was short but not ultra short, showing off her sexy long legs in a pair of natural colored stockings, displayed on a pair of high-heeled, red, patent leather pumps. Her right wrist was adorned with several silvery bangles and, of course, her left hand displayed the diamond engagement ring I had gone into great debt to purchase.

“Well?” she asked, shrugging expressively, her eyebrows raised, both hands flattened out with her arms bent at the elbows.

“Stunning!” I said, “Absolutely, amazingly gorgeous.”

“Thanks!” she quipped in a happy satisfied tone. She spun on the balls of her shoes and walked across the room to where her wrap for the evening lay draped over the edge of the sofa.

“Could you help me with my wrap, kind sir?” she asked playfully.

“Of course,” I answered and quickly walked over and placed it around her sexy, exposed shoulders.

“You look stunning, yourself,” she said, smiling sweetly.

We walked outside and Tiffany saw the uniformed limousine driver holding the passenger door open for us.

“Oh, my God; you sprang for a limo!” she exclaimed.

“The best for my lady,” I answered,

We were both already slightly buzzed from drinking champagne in the limousine by the time we reached the gala. The large, historic art deco factory building loomed before us. It had been fabulously refitted and was now the immaculate Arts Centre for the city. A huge, open room where factory equipment was once housed was now a grand ballroom and, in almost every direction and on several floors, there were hallways leading to dozens of art exhibit rooms and art studios.

Techno dance music thumped loudly and many patrons were already dancing as we entered the main room. All around us, people were dressed fabulously. Formally dressed servers with trays of champagne and caviar darted in and out of the large crowd of attendees. Most of the finest and wealthiest people in the city were there. Not all were among the finest, though.

The ball the year before had featured an orchestra playing waltzes and the exhibit had revolved around a rococo art theme. This year was very different, with the theme being erotica, and I was quite curious as to what art would amuse us all that evening.

 Tiffany and I had just begun to sip more champagne when out of the crowd appeared Leone and Tamango. I hoped they did not see us, but Tiffany’s bopping to the music in her heels soon caught their eye. The two of them quickly weaved through the crowd until they were upon us.

Leone was an Italian guy, originally from New Jersey, and owned a night club that was a favorite with the city’s young jet set. He was always way too tan, obviously spending much of his time in tanning beds. He was dressed just as hideously as I could have expected. His gold tuxedo jacket fit him very tightly over a shiny, gold shirt and shiny, maroon bow tie with gold polka dots. His dark hair was long and pulled back into a pony tail. Dangling earrings, which seemed quite strange for a man to wear, adorned both his ears.

 Tamango, a Jamaican avant garde artist, seemed to always accompany Leone. Tamango was quite a fixture at Leone’s nightclub which featured much of his art work as decorations. Tamango was tall, dark, and though he claimed to be Rastafarian, I had never seen him wearing dreadlocks, just long braids. He wore a much more conventional tuxedo though his shirt was a very shiny, silky material with a frilly weave pattern. 

 Both were well acquainted with Tiffany and I, but I had always had an apprehensive feeling about them. Both of them were always too flirtatious with Tiffany and annoyed me by touching her arms and back when speaking to her. Furthermore, I had heard many rumors about their bawdy sexual activities with countless numbers of gorgeous women.

“Tiffany! Derek!” exclaimed Leone in a friendly voice as he squeezed between two patrons and walked up to us.

“Hello!” squealed Tiffany as Leone offered her a quick peck on the cheek and slight hug, immediately followed by Tamango doing the same.

They both then shook hands and acknowledged me standing next to Tiffany.

“How are you guys?” she asked.

“Extremely well,” offered Tamango in his Jamaican accent.

“Where are your dates?” Tiffany queried.

“No dates tonight,” answered Leone.

“Too many fine ladies available,“ Tamango interjected, “We thought we’d try our luck.”

Tiffany giggled and said, “You won’t have a problem finding someone, I’m sure"

I really wanted to pull Tiffany away from those two sleazy guys and look for other friends to mingle with, and to check out the art exhibits. She, though, seemed quite content spending time talking to Leone and Tamango.

Tiffany had soon finished off her champagne and asked me to get her some more. As I started to leave to find a server, both Leone and Tamango asked if I could get them a glass of champagne also. I was quite annoyed at that but made off through the crowd to find either a server or a bartender.

In just a few minutes, I was weaving though the crowd holding four champagne glasses awkwardly above my head to avoid someone jostling them and returned to the place we had been standing; I could not see them. As I perused the crowd, I finally saw them standing over by the wall viewing a large, impressionistic-style oil painting of a woman being sexually ravished by two men. Soon, I had made my way up to them without having spilled much of the champagne and distributed the glasses amongst them.

We were soon making our way along the wall, viewing the various erotic paintings. I found myself very uncomfortable hearing Leone and Tamango discussing the sexual nature of the paintings with Tiffany. We stood in front of an enormous painting of intercourse and listened to Tamango say, “Look at how the penis enters the rosy, aroused labia.” I was not feeling very comfortable with the situation. 

As we continued viewing the paintings, Tiffany persisted in rocking her body to the thump of the loud music. She loved to dance and I was not much of a dancer so when Leone turned to me and asked if it would be okay for him to dance with Tiffany, I did not want to upset her by saying no. 

Before I could even answer, Tiffany interjected, “Since you aren’t into this techno dancing, Derek, why don’t you find the mayor or business friends and do some networking while I have a few dances with Leone and Tamango?”

“Okay, I’ll do that for a while and you can get in a few dances,” I hesitantly answered. I did feel quite uncomfortable with the situation but I really did need to kiss up to the mayor because of an ongoing business deal needing the city’s approval.

After spending more time socializing than I wanted to with the mayor, city dignitaries, and business leaders; I wandered back over to the dance floor area. I finally saw both Leone and Tamango dancing with Tiffany. They were taking turns spinning her and doing some sandwich grind dancing on her. Tiffany seemed very much into it, which made my face flush, but an even more bizarre feeling of arousal built within. I watched them dance for a minute or two; then I stepped in and grabbed Tiffany by the hand.

“I’m cutting in,” I said and pulled her away to dance the next song with me. 

 No objection was raised from Leone and Tamango, but Tiffany did turn and say something in French to which Tamango responded in French. I was not pleased with that, especially not having a clue what they had said. After one dance, I took Tiffany by the hand and led her from the dance floor.

“Let’s go check out some of the exhibits,” I said.

“Okay,” answered Tiffany, obviously well buzzed from the champagne.

I led her down one of the many corridors, all of the walls decorated with erotic paintings and sketches of all sizes. We came to a room and I led Tiffany inside. Erotic ceramic art was displayed throughout this room. There were chairs surrounding a coffee table which was adorned with a large ceramic penis. 

“Let’s take a load off,” I said and sat down, Tiffany sitting next to me.

Tiffany told me that she wanted some more champagne. Just then, I saw a server near the doorway so I jumped up to get her attention and almost stumbled over a large ceramic vagina on the floor in the process. I did, however, retrieve us a couple of glasses of champagne.

Just as I sat down, to my great disappointment, Leone and Tamango appeared at the door.

 “I can’t believe you guys are in here,” yelled Tamango as they came bounding through the door in a fervent display of excitement.

I had so hoped to have Tiffany alone to view all of the erotic displays, anticipating that it would get her in the mood for some torrid sex once we got back to her place later that night. I was distinctly disappointed at Leone and Tamango’s arrival.

They sat just across the coffee table from us and immediately began to laugh and comment about the big ceramic penis on the table. Tiffany was joining in on the hilarity and reached over to erotically stroke the erect piece of art, causing Leone and Tamango to laugh and flirt even more.

Under the influence of the champagne, Tiffany was putting on quite a display. In fact, I was sure that she was crossing her legs a lot as if attempting to subtly tease the two of them with up-skirt peeks. I did not want to leave her alone with them but my bladder had filled to capacity and I was overcome with the urge to relieve myself. 

“I’m going to the men’s room and I’ll be right back,” I said as I stood up.

“Oh, Sweetie! Could you please bring me some more champagne when you come back?” Tiffany asked.

Right away, she was joined by Leone and Tamango asking for me to bring them back champagne also. I just nodded my head and hurried out the door. I really needed the relief and wanted to get back to keep an eye on things.

After my visit to the men’s room and collecting the champagne, I rushed back, only to discover they were not in the room. My stress elevated immensely. I walked back out into the hallway, giving descriptions of the three of them and asking if anyone had seen them. One guy pointed toward the back end of the hall. 

I hurried down the hall as fast as I could walk, still balancing all those filled champagne glasses. I looked in all of the rooms, which were occupied with partiers viewing the erotic art exhibits, but I did not see Tiffany, Leone or Tamango anywhere. I finally had arrived at the end of the hall where there were two large double doors that led to an area where art studios and classrooms were. I pushed the doors open with my back, still holding the glasses, and proceeded down the darkened hallway until I heard voices.

I then slipped into the room quietly; still carrying all those silly champagne glasses. I stopped behind a wall of lockers in what was obviously a painting classroom. I peeked around the corner of the lockers and saw Tiffany standing there with Leone and Tamango in the midst of several easels and paint caddies. Next to the three of them was something like a large round ottoman, only larger. I suspected it was what a model used to recline on during art classes.

My heart began racing and I almost felt like I was going to shake. I knew that I should just walk right in and confront them about what was going on but some bizarre curiosity overcame me. It was overpowering and I was just frozen in place. 

Leone pulled Tiffany towards him and kissed her. I almost dropped the champagne glasses so I sat them on the floor behind me. I felt rage build up inside me but still I stayed hidden behind the lockers, watching. I could not understand why I did not charge into the room. 

Tamango, standing behind Tiffany, started to rub her bare back and his hand slid down to her ass. Watching that, my rage seemed to intensify but something else startled me; I realized I had a raging erection.

‘What could be wrong with me?’ I thought.

 I could see that Tiffany was giving Leone deep tongue kisses as his hands began caressing her breasts; all the while, Tamango kept rubbing her ass. Leone’s hand next moved inside Tiffany’s dress, squeezing and fondling her perky breasts which, even from my view, prominently displayed her very erect nipples. Tamango then unhooked the tiny straps behind her neck and her red sequin dress began a slow, sensual slide down her tight, sexy body.

I was completely mesmerized yet overcome with rage and jealousy. However, it felt as if some spirit world entity had overcome my body, holding me firmly in place, keeping me discreetly hidden and peeking around the lockers.

 Tiffany’s dress hit the floor, exposing her nakedness except for her very sheer, tiny, red thong panties, thigh stockings and her red heels. Both guys lifted her onto the model’s cushioned platform and immediately began pulling their own clothes off. To my shock, Tiffany’s hand slid into her panties as she lay there and she began to finger herself as she watched the two guys undress.

Tamango was the first to lay beside her and immediately started to kiss her as his dark chocolate fingers slid into her panties and she embraced his shoulders with her arms. Leone then crawled down next to them on her other side and began to fondle and squeeze her breasts. Tiffany then began kissing one, then the other; passionate, deep tongue kisses. She soon lay her head back and arched her back as Tamango was by then finger fucking her pussy rigorously while Leone squeezed at her nipples. Even with the thump of the techno dance music in the background I could easily hear Tiffany’s loud moans of pleasure.

Leone then slid up toward her face and Tiffany grabbed his erect cock and started to lick it while Tamango slid down between her wide-spread legs and buried his face into her pussy.

I could not believe what I was seeing. I could not believe that I found myself so incredibly aroused. Part of me was ready to charge in and confront them. It certainly was not fear of the confrontation that held me back but this bizarre and overwhelming arousal and curiosity that did so. 

 ‘Where has this come from?’ I asked myself, ‘How long has this been buried deep inside me?'

In utter amazement, I continued to watch the erotic scene unfold before me. My cock was raging inside my trousers; totally erect and throbbing, pushing my tuxedo slacks outward, I knew better than to touch it as I was so excited I would probably cum all over myself.

My heart still pounded as I watched. Tamango continued licking and fingering Tiffany as she had Leone’s cock in her mouth. Next, Tamango moved up to where Tiffany could move her head left to right, taking Leone’s cock in her mouth then going to Tamango's cock. Her legs were spread out wide in plain view for me to see. Her wet pink cunt lips inside her ultra sheer panties were visibly swollen with arousal.

Leone next slid in between her legs, pulled her panties off and pushed his cock into her cunt. All I could see was his ass thrusting back and forth as her legs spread outward with each push. Tamango still had his cock in her mouth. However, he soon moved back just to watch the action himself as Leone started to fuck Tiffany much more furiously. Tiffany's voice cried out in pleasure and she yelled out, “Fuck me!” 

“Fuck me hard, dammit!” she screamed.

I could feel sweat beading down my face as my heart beat so hard I thought it would come through my chest. I was still shocked by the overwhelming feeling of arousal combined with extreme jealousy, though the rage had seemed to subside.

By then, Leone held one of Tiffany’s legs almost straight up and Tamango had hold of the other, allowing her ass to be pushed upward for Leone to penetrate Tiffany’s pussy deeper. With every thrust, a slapping noise smacked out loud from the collision of the two torsos and her body shook from the impact. Her moans were intense and her loud, breathy pants coincided with each thrust. 

Then Leone quickly pulled out of her and, as he moved, I could see that Tiffany’s juicy cunt hole was gaping. I thought for a split second that I would squirt in my pants. Leone next turned her over, putting Tiffany on her hands and knees. He then slid up behind her and shoved his cock into her pussy from behind while Tamango moved in front of her and pushed his cock in her mouth. For several minutes, they sandwiched Tiffany from front to back with her on her knees. I was startled when Leone smacked Tiffany’s ass cheeks a couple of times and she let out a pleasurable scream. 

Somehow, with my brain as numb as it was from watching all of this, I had the forethought to reach down and grab a glass of champagne, which I drank down in almost one long gulp. Exhaling, and my heart still racing, I could not take my eyes off the scene of Tiffany being fucked wildly by those two guys.

Leone seemed to strain and his thrusts staggered as he grunted. He groaned out, “Oh, fuck!”

I realized that he had just shot his load of cum into my fiancée’s cunt. Leone then pulled his cock out of her and collapsed onto the edge of the large ottoman. I could see Tiffany’s creamy open cunt from behind. Immediately, Tamango crawled up underneath Tiffany. 

“C’mon, babe,” said Tamango, “I know you like it on top!”

‘How would he know she likes it on top?’ I wondered. 

 Tiffany held Tamango’s nearly porn-sized cock in her hand as she manoeuvred on top of him. I was astonished as I watched her ass, which was pointed in my direction, and saw her juicy, wet, pink labia spreading out over the big round head of his dark cock just before she slid down on him. His big penis just disappeared into her. She went all the way down to the very base of his cock as her labia spread out against the top of his balls. As she came back up, I could see his cock totally shiny and wet from her juices. She began to more quickly bounce up and down on him, grinding her ass from left to right, sliding upon Tamango like he was a Sybian.

Tiffany was so wet that she soaked his balls and crotch. She began moaning, panting and screaming out how much she loved it. Her head arched backward and she slung her styled hair all around. She was riding him like a rodeo cowgirl on a bucking horse. Sweat began to build upon her body, covering it all over in a shiny sheen.

 My arousal was mind-numbing. I felt hot all over. My cock still throbbed relentlessly. I could not believe how wild Tiffany was. The sexual aggression she displayed was shocking to me. The sex she and I shared had always been much more vanilla than the torrid scene I encountered.

“Oh, fucking God!” she screamed out loud, “I’m cumming!”

She kept grinding on Tamango but then started to slow down.

“Oh, no girl!” exclaimed Leone who had been laying next to them watching. “It’s time for your favorite.”

‘Her favorite?' I asked myself.

Leone was on his knees next to Tiffany and she began to lick, spit and slobber all over his cock, getting it really wet. She never moved off of Tamango’s cock. Next, Leone moved up behind her and I could tell he was starting to push his cock into her asshole.

 I was totally stunned. I had no idea that she would do anal sex, she never did with me.

He finally pushed all the way into Tiffany and she now had two cocks buried into her at once; Tamango still inside her cunt and Leone buried deep into her asshole. Tiffany moaned out and screamed, “Oh, fuck, this is so fucking good!”

Leone began ploughing in and out of her asshole while Tiffany lay sandwiched between the two guys. Tamango still inside her cunt, trying to move in and out as best he could.

I watched in a combination of intense arousal and shocking horror as my fiancée screamed out loud in intense pleasure. It didn’t take long until she was again screaming out, “Oh, fuck; I’m cumming!”

Leone and Tamango did not stop fucking her holes though. They kept ploughing her until I was sure that they both had shot their loads into her. Then they all began to leisurely wind down to a stop. They slowly pulled apart, all of them shiny with sweat by this point. Tiffany’s labia were swollen and droopy, cummy, creamy, wet and nasty. The sight of that almost made me orgasm. Tamango, whose cock had been last buried in her cunt, was covered in creamy cum and cunt juice.

“C’mon, baby,” he said, “You know you love to lick it clean.”

I was stunned as Tiffany engulfed Tamango’s wet, nasty cock and then she slurped her tongue all the way down it, licking it all over really good, including his scrotum. When she pulled her face up to where I could see, I saw her lips, face and chin were shiny wet.

I was, by now, keenly aware that this was not the first sexual encounter between Tiffany and those two guys.

“Shit!” said Leone, “I guess we need to get dressed and hurry back before Derek gets too suspicious.”

By then I had come out from behind the lockers without even realizing what I was doing. 

I spoke out in a loud demanding voice, “You two fuckers get the hell out of here, now!”

Both Leone and Tamango jumped to their feet, their eyes were wide open in surprise.

“Now!” I shouted.

They both scooped up their clothes and disappeared out the door in a hurry, scurrying to get their clothes on in the dark hallway outside that room.

Tiffany, still laying down with her legs spread in front of me, just looked up at me. She did not seem upset at all. In fact, she seemed rather pleased as she looked at me, almost smiling.

She asked, ”You watched it all didn’t you?”

 Tiffany stood up and walked right up to me and poked her fore finger against the horizontal protrusion in the front of my trousers. Her finger playfully twirled around the swelling. She then walked around me in a circle, letting her finger slightly caress me all the way around, and she stopped again in front of me.

“You are so fucking aroused!” she exclaimed.

Tiffany then pressed her mouth to my ear as her hand slowly caressed my throbbing penis, “You loved watching me get fucked, didn’t you?”

She then softly kissed my lips before she buried her tongue in my mouth until I responded by sucking it and pushing my tongue into her mouth. She then quickly pulled her head back and looked deeply into my eyes.

“Tell me how much you loved seeing your girl’s pussy get fucked!” she said.

I gulped but could not get a word out.

“Tell me!” she demanded.

“I loved it!” I finally quipped.

“This changes everything you know,” she said, “Oh, our sex life is going to be so much more fun now.”

“You want to fuck me so badly right now don’t you?” she asked demandingly.

“Yea, I do,” I answered.

Tiffany lay back down, spread out her legs in front of me, displaying her wet, nasty cunt, and said, “You can fuck me only after you taste my freshly fucked cunt.”

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I find myself bound by the arousal of my darkest desires. Do you know the depths of the shadow of your darkest desire?

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Comments(71)


Banes1
Posted 11 Mar 2014 16:52
Another Master piece! So very well written.
HotBttmInBriefs
Posted 29 Jul 2013 04:03
Another awesome story Buz. Love all your stories.

scarlet
Posted 29 Jun 2013 13:38
I have to say, I did had a read before but didn't comment. Mostly because I didn't want it to end in all honesty. It's a dramatic and arousing insight into the exploration of fantasies and, the discovery of new ones. A great piece that really gets you involved in the scene and creates the scene perfectly.
LOVES4PLAY
Posted 25 Apr 2013 17:37
Buz every thing has been said only thing i can add is that i'm going to read more of your excellent works.. Joel
johnny1705
Posted 30 Oct 2012 14:21
Damn! That was a hot story!

JessicaX
Posted 25 Aug 2012 15:27
Taking my time reading through your collection. Saving your stories for when I want to read the best!
Jared
Posted 27 Jul 2012 03:06
Got me very hard as I like to watch my young wife get fucked by one and sometimes, two guys! Thanks, great story. Love to see more of this kind.

Sandrine
Posted 22 Jul 2012 18:51
The descriptions are truly amazing. You have a gift with words..Very very hot!!!
cadbury13
Posted 22 Jul 2012 04:32
Great work man...simply amazing! Good luck with the competition!

TXGirl
Posted 21 Jul 2012 07:17
Well...apparently I didn't score your story the first time I read it, so I was glad to be able to give you a 5! (I'd give you another one if I could!!)

LadyX
Posted 20 Jul 2012 09:43
I think your fiction far outshines your true accounts. You certainly have a mind for the dirty, and I think the dirtier you get, the better it ends up. Good luck, Buz, and nicely written, damn!
Americanheart
Posted 13 Jul 2012 20:26
just loved it

sweet_as_candy
Posted 03 Jul 2012 22:24
Oh wow! This was one hell of a hot story! I absolutely loved it! A RED HOT 5! X
HK4167
Posted 02 Jul 2012 23:20
Wonderful story, great storyline with steaming hot sex scene and all the sinful twisted emotions. Bravo! Good luck with the contest!
SecretDesire
Posted 01 Jul 2012 11:21
Another excellent story from you Buz.... Well done and good luck!

Lisa
Posted 29 Jun 2012 16:33
This was wonderfully written, Buz. I've noticed your style changing just a little with each story you write and you've really developed your own distinctive "voice". I loved the last line. What a great way to end your story. Good luck in the competition.

RumpleForeskin
Posted 23 Jun 2012 15:23
Leon has my kind of style sense. Very well done, Buz. Best of luck in the contest.
perkynipples
Posted 22 Jun 2012 19:27
Damn Buz that was a hell of a story there is so much stiff compittion with these entries. Good luck man
Magical_felix
Posted 22 Jun 2012 15:54
You have a talent for really raunchy romps! I like the way you describe the characters in your stories, especially this one. The art theme was sexy and I like how you peppered it through out the story to add some humor. Good luck Buz!
Kiki
Posted 22 Jun 2012 07:23
Mmmm this was wickedly good. Loved it! The characters emotions style you brought alive, very impressive and very good! Great entry Buz!
Piquet
Posted 18 Jun 2012 09:13
Well done on your first piece of fiction Buz. I found Leone and Tamango very funny - like characters out of Moliere. The gallery setting was just perfect but your sex scene was a masterpiece -"cummy, creamy, wet and nasty" Excellent work mate !
etairay
Posted 18 Jun 2012 05:21
wow thank you love it ..awesome
Bad_4You
Posted 14 Jun 2012 17:47
I do believe this is your best work yet; fantastic job Buz!

DanielleX
Posted 12 Jun 2012 12:48
A Very well written story! An interesting premise from how you introduced the story

Danielle x
sprite
Posted 12 Jun 2012 11:34
love the idea, the execution, the detail that never gets in the way of a very hot and sensual story - not that you're a slacker in the first place, but you really elevated your tale telling in this piece, Buz. excellent work from the opening lines all the way thru.
belvoriangarath
Posted 12 Jun 2012 10:01
that was fucking hot

Kim
Posted 11 Jun 2012 15:47
Awesome story, Buz
subside
Posted 11 Jun 2012 11:49
Well done. I was impressed with your narrative and description of the surrounding and the events. Great sex story. I enjoyed the story completely-very hot!

TheDevilsWeakness
Posted 11 Jun 2012 11:13
I can't seem to find the appropriate word to describe fuckably-filthy-and-awesomely-delicious! Well done, my friend...
PhilAnders
Posted 11 Jun 2012 09:02
GREAT story, Buz!!

AngelHeart01
Posted 11 Jun 2012 05:55
First of all, good luck on the competition. It's nice to read some of your Fictional work, and making it seem so real. Left me wondering if this "desire" belonged to the author

ShyVixen
Posted 11 Jun 2012 05:03
Naughty at it's best, oh my! You always manage to add in a bit of eveything. A sinful delight. Good luck, this is fantastic!
justaddkatie
Posted 10 Jun 2012 16:23
This storyline is AMAZING! And I truly love your writing style. So thoroughly entertaining.
notlooking5
Posted 10 Jun 2012 14:19
Loved it ,Really time to get the cuckolding thing going .Great job

Dancing_Doll
Posted 10 Jun 2012 13:50
I love the way the story unfolded. From the opening sentence, you totally drew me in. I was anticipating the dirty action to come but was most interested in your main character's journey of discovering his own arousal at seeing his girl getting fucked and used by these guys and the way it unexpectedly turned him on. And I LOVED the ending. Dirty, dirty, dirty... and just fabulous. A wild ride all around - verrry nicely done and very well written!

LatinSugar
Posted 10 Jun 2012 13:18
This is marvelous creation, erotic and sensual. The mix of emotions very well thought...Excellent work...Bravo!
jhmik_88
Posted 10 Jun 2012 12:57
There's no way I would've been able to handle seeing all that. But it was still a hot and dirty story. Great job, Buz. Good luck in the competition!

TXGirl
Posted 10 Jun 2012 05:29
Loved it, Buz! Very creative introduction to the story. You suggest a lot by referencing the therapist, and I love that the story is actually a confession. I was hooked from the beginning. Great job!
beowulf69
Posted 08 Jun 2012 19:22
Awesome! Mingles emotions & hot sex into a great story!
thursdayschild007
Posted 08 Jun 2012 13:24
Great story!
loveamongriots
Posted 08 Jun 2012 08:30
The balance between his anger and arousal was splendid. So very well written!
mickeyfinn1
Posted 08 Jun 2012 07:18
AS always Buzz HOT HOT!!

tashitasha
Posted 08 Jun 2012 05:52
Great Story Buz
bat
Posted 07 Jun 2012 21:04
Wow Buz that was GR8... Brings a new meaning to " Always expect the unexpected" Good Luck
ArtMan
Posted 07 Jun 2012 19:16
I found myself enthralled with the the story Buz. You did an exceptional job of composing this most wonderfully twisted erotic thriller.

naughtynurse
Posted 07 Jun 2012 08:10
I agree this is your best story so far.

principessa
Posted 07 Jun 2012 06:53
This is your best one yet, Buz. Well done.
TJRogue
Posted 07 Jun 2012 06:50
Great writing, terrific story line, wickedly arousing, and pervsersly exciting. And what an endcap when you ask: "Do you know the depths of the sahow of your darkest desire?" Exceptional.
TJRogue
Posted 07 Jun 2012 06:50
Great writing, terrific story line, wickedly arousing, and pervsersly exciting. And what an endcap when you ask: "Do you know the depths of the sahow of your darkest desire?" Exceptional.
carmen_has36
Posted 07 Jun 2012 05:19
This is one of your very best. The storyline and descriptions are explicit and so sexually-charged. 5+++
perverse_cowboy
Posted 07 Jun 2012 04:03
Wow Buz! That is one of my biggest fantasies, to catch my wife playing with two or three cocks, even a gangbang! My cock is so incredibly hard after reading this! Thank You!

Naughtygrl73
Posted 07 Jun 2012 03:00
a saucy read, well done

Jaymal
Posted 07 Jun 2012 02:40
Classic fantasy, realised in deliciously filthy terms. The up-market trappings make it seem all the more debauched. A great entry which does credit to the VIP theme. Nice work, Buz.

angieseroticpen
Posted 07 Jun 2012 01:19
Mmmmmm my type of story! Weel done.

clum
Posted 07 Jun 2012 01:08
Buz, this is a joy to read. I'd like to echo everything NatureBoy said. Truly a triumph; definitely a contender for 500 big ones.
MexicanGoddess
Posted 06 Jun 2012 23:19
Oooh Wow... Buz, loved the story. Erotic, Sexy, Hot... Damn, I wish I was Tiffany! ♥
LeahLidocaine
Posted 06 Jun 2012 23:12
Got my pussy worked up!
Espresso
Posted 06 Jun 2012 22:37
Thank you Buz! Super arousing and dirty- hit the spot just right!
LauraLee_sugah
Posted 06 Jun 2012 20:01
heavenly days.... that girl gets what she wants doesn't she? great story...
MissyLuvsYa
Posted 06 Jun 2012 18:25
Buz I love it! I was enthralled. It is dramatic, dark, sexy & erotic! A very wonderful story! 5+

jillinjulie
Posted 06 Jun 2012 15:40
A departure from your normal storyline & I quite enjoyed it! 5++

Milik_Redman
Posted 06 Jun 2012 15:09
Awesome. Just awesome. The feelings of anger and arousal work so well together in this story. I'd love to read of the passionate sex that took place after the fade out. This is a winner Buz!

Kal-El85
Posted 06 Jun 2012 14:32
Wow! Awesome story Buz. It's dark feel drew me in.
curvygalore
Posted 06 Jun 2012 13:40
Brilliant Buz! A real change of pace! Very well imagined characters and action. Dark, erotic, amusing and wildly sexy!
sugarbabe
Posted 06 Jun 2012 13:31
Interesting Buz, you always write an exciting arousing story.
Good Luck in the contest.
Coco
Posted 06 Jun 2012 13:19
You know how I love your stories Buz! This is hot, a sexy read with a little cuckolding thrown in, I wonder what the future holds for the wicked Tiffany and her man.
Makavelli
Posted 06 Jun 2012 13:12
This is a HOT story, Buz! I felt like I was one of the partiers at the gala observing the whole thing. I liked the flow, the characters, and the dialogue of the story. You have a natural gift making a story sound believable. Good luck with the contest!

VanGogh
Posted 06 Jun 2012 12:57
Buz!! this was a terrific story! I'll send you a PM of my darkest desires later!
Bunny12
Posted 06 Jun 2012 12:27
Your best yet you keep getting better buddy! Good luck hope you win
Q-Ball711
Posted 06 Jun 2012 12:26
great writing like always. great story bro.
kimyy
Posted 06 Jun 2012 11:42
one more great story buzz
 

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