okay, i've fixed up the spacing issue...which must have happened when i copied the story from word to the website.

Hey,
I wrote a story a while a go 'Baby sitting for Miss Greenslade' and am considering writing another one, either a sequel or something completely different.
Would love some feedback on the story; what was good, what was bad and ideas for the next story.

Thanks

The_Writer

I was rummaging through the dirty washing in the laundry looking for a pain of jeans that fitted me when I came across one my sister's bras. I felt a slight tingle holding the dirty bra, my sister was pretty....but she was my sister. But I checked the size anyway: 36C. Not that surprising, she had good cleavage and an athletic body to match. I knew this because she spent most of the morning...

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Added 03 Jun 2008 | Category Mature | Votes 128 | Avg Score 3.98 | Views 60,339 | 5 Comments

I woke up the next morning and wondered how soon it should be before I called Kate. After last night I was certainly keen to meet her again, but didnt want to seem desperate or needy. Contemplating on my stupid dilemma I rolled over to look at the clock. Shit, it was 11 already. I got up and pulled a T-shirt on as I left my room. My sister Jill came out of the bathroom, brushing her...

Added 31 May 2008 | Category Straight Sex | Votes 13 | Avg Score 4.38 | Views 6,452 | 4 Comments

     "C'mon Miss, can't you just put my best mark on the report card" My teacher laughed. "You would have to do something for me." Then I swear she licked her lips but nobody else realised anything so I thought nothing of it. Our Teacher, Miss Jones, was about thirty probably a few years younger. She was the gymnastics coach so had a gorgeous trim body, some say she would have been good enough...

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