Hi, I'm something of an irregular writer, part based on true events, parts of it not. I hope you enjoy my writing and feel free to leave feedback, comments, anything.Bye for now.The Travelling Man
Was it the same guy?Was it any good? No, a different guy - well couple really. It was ok, like I say, no-one was that relaxed.... first time nerves and all that.
Planned, house parties are and usually meticulously so.
That would be telling.... I've just started it :)
I try and cover all bases, I like to describe the thoughts, the motives and the emotions, there has to be a story. I have done chapters that were short and very much to the point as well, the veritable fuck-fest. Generally though, I'm a storyteller.I don't think there is a preference here, I've had stories with more 'story' praised as much as the shorter fuck-fests.
Her body immolated against his, she felt him flex inside her at the point of no return. Crying out as she clasped his body - they were one.
There's some great advice here from better writers than myself - this is how I try and work.1. There has to be a situation and next, how the story will develop. Is there enough leeway to flex the story? Can I think of sufficient opportunites to throw in some twists and turns to keep people interested and reading. If it is a simple premise, it's a short story. I don't usually know if it's a longer story until I have written a couple of chapters2. I think of a character - I like to think about who they are, how they think and react. They are the main character of the story and are they the right person in the right place at the right time? Then I want an antagonist - someone that bends this person out of shape. I want credibility and authenticity more than anything, they have to be believable and I really like characters that you like and dislike. After that, I think of the minor characters and the dynamics there.3. I plan the story, sub chapters, start and end, they need to flow and set a good pace.4. Write, I aim for about 3,000 to 6,000 words. I stick to the loose plan in 3. The longer the story is in terms of chapters, I realise that to keep people reading, belting out 8,000 words a chapter isn't going to work - so multi-part stories tend to have shorter chapters.5. I let it fester for a while. Often, I think of nuances or improvements and I add them in, also take out stuff that is no good. I double check the pace, I'm sometimes too descriptive on scenes and the action doesn't get much of a look in.6. Edit, edit, edit - I read it back slowly and it's this that I often lack enough discipline with so I publish too early. I recently had to retire three chapters of a whole story because I'd rushed through 1 to 5. I aim to cut about 1,000 words, often re-positioning the opening and ending.7. To improve 6, I go back a couple of days later for the final quality control.
Well said! and from me too.My view is, more than 0 for some people, others can tolerate 1000+I've always thought that people that used these terms are actually afraid of their experience and afraid they won't measure up in the sack.No woman is a slut or whore - women have enough crap pumped at them on body image, etc, etc... We should be happy that they are confident enough to enjoy sex and want sex without keeping score on how many partners they have had.
I was shaved as part of a sex game in my early 20s, I really grew to like the feel. I'm always tightly trimmed but I still shave regularly, the whole lot, cock, balls, ass.
Ok, I'll bite (mmm, not the really the best choice of words).First time, I burst out laughing, I was flattered but I politely refused. It happened again and I accepted. I'll be honest, the actual proposition has been the most exciting part. He was more nervous than me.
It's a turn on for her and for me, we're in our late 30s now. When we go out, she loves getting the once over especially from younger guys. On many occasions, we've gone out deliberately for her to be a tease, a bit of extra cleavage, no panties. Summer is a riot, no undies, tight summer dress, air-conditioned bar - you do the math :)
Yellowy thin sticks of light caught fragments of dust as they poked through the large wooden shutters. They gave the whitewashed walls an ivory hue in the low light. Blurred a little with sleep, I opened my right eye to ease everything into focus. Disorientated, it took a few seconds to recollect just where I was. She was there beside me, a redolent expression on her slumbering face, her...
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Waiting for my flight in the departure lounge, my funk had not shifted for a few days now. Drinking a pint alone with my full English breakfast at nine in the morning was testament to that. My boss’ words were still vibrant in my mind. “Cheer up, it’s the Balkans,” he sniggered as his shuffling feet dragged his corpulent frame back to his office. Single, no ties, no complications, I...
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We had been fucking each other for weeks now, and each time it followed a familiar pattern. Slyvie would dress up for me; she knew now of my predilection for expensive lingerie. She exploited it without compunction and I would be hard as soon as she revealed herself. Our first coupling would always be frantic, two people needing release from their deep frustration. Having her bent over on...
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I was bored, not just bored but mind-rottenly fed up. I like Cuban music; I like the irony of its optimism and its innate rhythm. This was grating on me like fingernails down a blackboard. The bar was packed out, the lights low; the vibe was hot and heavy. Any other night, I would be having the time of my life. There were almost wall-to-wall women all looking for a man, any man that could...
Added 28 May 2014 | Category Cuckold
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Prologue: It’s the first day of working on the commission. After their encounter in her studio, Harry realises that Penny not only enjoys sex but has found an outlet in him for her fantasies. Finding such an attractive like-minded person albeit with more experience has drawn Harry willingly into her world. Peering around the easel, she held out a pastel to gauge the perspective again. ...
Added 23 May 2014 | Category Group Sex
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Prologue: Penny wants Harry as the model for a risque bronze requiring the use of all his attributes and one in particular. Revealing her adventurous sexual tastes, Harry is seduced into fulfilling Penny's desires for him and they go to her studio. The lift door clattered against its runners, Harry pushed Penny from it and slammed the door behind him. The look on Penny’s face needed no...
Added 18 May 2014 | Category Hardcore
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"Our last award this evening is for someone very special to us here at Apraxis. He has been a big part of the Apraxis family for some time now and his hunger and commitment never fails to surprise us. For the best national sales performance of the year, it can only be…” He let the anticipation build amongst the assembled staff. This was fine dining for two hundred souls in black tie...
Added 17 May 2014 | Category Supernatural
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Prologue: To help finance his way through a Masters Degree, Harry has taken up nude art modelling. Penny, one of the artists, approaches him with a proposition. What follows is a steamy sex session demonstrating to Harry that she knows her way around a man's body. Intrigued and finding himself attracted to her, they go to a local cafe to discuss Penny's proposition. The cup clattered...
Added 29 Apr 2014 | Category Seduction
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Tibialis Anterior, Gastrocnemius, Patella, Quadriceps femoris, Sartorius, Gracilis, Penis. A wave of heat prickled her skin, she could feel it rise to her face and settle in her cheeks. She could afford to stare a little longer, she was supposed to after all. The cloying warmth flooded through her body and settled in her loins. Letting her lips crease to reveal a satisfied smile, her...
Added 24 Apr 2014 | Category Straight Sex
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Night had followed from the long dusk and they had met only hours before. Malina’s countenance put Jamie immediately at ease; her face was comely and warm. Her body was tightly held by a cropped tight t-shirt and black leggings. It did nothing to hide her intoxicating curves; on the contrary, she enjoyed showing herself off. Her initial hug by means of a greeting was intimate; she pressed...
Added 13 Apr 2014 | Category Bisexual
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