Forum posts made by xxrachelrosexx

some examples in german:

fick dich!
verpiss dich!
hau ab!
zieh leine!
verschwinde!

The only pleasure I'd get out of it is punching him in the face if dares to touch her

x-ray vision,clearly.

1.yes I do

2.I just talk to him/her/them and possibly meet up if both sides are interested. The way I see it they are at risk and decide how they take it I just go along.

3.No I don't aslong as it's just over the internet cheating involves physical contact. In fact, I met a nice couple in an open relationship that allowed me to participate in their life and I had sex with both

it's great knowing you are pleasuring her like this and I think it's only fair we men like getting oral service so I like giving it back. I think many people also underestimate how effective it is in giving your woman amazing orgasms so you dont just need your cock

I like to switch it's best of both worlds but with a nice CD or TV I like to top

Let me think about it while you make me a sandwich

I'd like it just depends on the character and how she pulls it off I always had a thing for final fantasy girls like yuna or rikku

it's definately on my sexual bucket list

hey guys last week I started to work on a new story series but there is always something wrong with it. I'm hoping to find somebody who can help me with the editing. As far as the story goes it's about a very beautiful lesbian girl talking about her adventures in college

I'm about to take part in one next week I'll tell you how it went

with girls I am but I had a guy once

but this might change in a week or two

Oh my goodness, I would have to say Dwayne The Rock Johnson.



I see somebody wants...the people's strudel *raises eyebrow*
he's gonna lay the smackdown on your candy ass

...ok I'll stop now for me it would be my best friend (female) and her sister they are both extremely beautiful blondes

R: good boyfriend
O: has one of the best personalities ever
N: can kick the shit out of u
N: can kick the shit out of u
Y: is loved by everyone

T: very good kisser
U: is very sexual
R: good boyfriend
A: hot
U: is very sexual

double R,U and N FTW

I wanted to open this topic for discussion on my story series It's the small things that count.Not begging for appreciation here just wanna get feedback both positive and negative on my stories.Discuss story development,characters,tips on what to improve and if you want feel free to suggest how the stories should continue.I want to make my stories much more fan-friendly and interactive

1. What first inspired you to write this particular story?
there was a time not too long ago when I often got really depressed didn't matter if it was because of being single or generally feeling like im not making any progress in live.I started writing stories to channel this emotional pain and get it off somewhere

2. How did you come up with these characters?
Brian is based a bit on myself some traits are directly from me while others are how I'd like to be.The other characters are both inspired by how I imagine the perfect partner and also by people close to me

3. How does it differ from some of your other stories?
I currently only have this one story

4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece?
I struggled with the grammar at first being german and english not being my first language.The other was said by people who read my stories it's that I often didn't put enough details into my stories so I had to expand on it

5. Anything else you want to tell us about it?
just read my stories and form your own opinion it really comes from the heart and I'd like to get feedback

don't lose yourself trying to please others.Sometimes you have to think about yourself

black,red,purple and pink for me

bro your describtion reminds me a lot about myself and to be honest don't be so hard on yourself you have a lot of potential you just need to use.Tho model-like guys arent what girls should be looking for they may satisfy their sexual needs but not their emotional needs.Also something I recommend is try to do sport like me I started to do weight-lifting again to get in shape and even more importantly it makes you more confident

I have nothing but respect for people like you that realize who they are and can say they like themselfes and don't care what other people say.Nothing but good luck in your live my dear <3

I like to use a vibrating butt plug both for the effect and it's easy to use.Just get it in,turn it on and forget.I don't use lube some spit is enough as its not overly big.the vibration can get really intense

I'm also looking for an editor as being german and still going to school my grammar can be lacking.Don't get me wrong I'm looking for someone to edit my stories with me and not for me if anybody is nterested please drop me a line

if you really can't come up with anything just stop and try again later.Something else that helps me is just write what comes to your mind.the beauty of writing on pc is you can always fill the blanks later

Passages like this: "To celebrate I invited her to dinner which she happily agreed to.We got along great her name is Rachel and she's from San Francisco so a fellow californian.She's studying biology and wants to become a nurse,which I found to be really cool.We also share the same interest in music and tv shows and she even plays video games like me.We spent the evening watching a movie and she got pretty close."

You could elaborate on the details. Where did you go to dinner? What kind of food? Did you drive there or romantically walk hand in hand? What small talk did you share to, from, and at dinner? How did you find out her taste in music and TV and games? What did you say? What did she say? What were you thinking and feeling? What was the mood, the atmosphere, as you discovered your shared tastes? What were you wearing? What was she wearing? Where did you guys go, or just in the apartment? What did your surroundings look like? It's the details that draw readers in and feel like part of the action.

You have a lot of places where you rush the details like in this example. Slow and erotic and descriptive makes for a better story, at least in my opinion.
alright thx a lot I was about to write part 2 but decided to check if i got more tips so it's nice to read your advise first

I've sent you a fully-edited version of your story.
saw it thank you so much for that

this is my first story and I need help

So here I am 19 years old and about to start my college days.What an exciting time it's gonna be.So you wanna know who I am I guess well the name's Brian I'm 19 years old as said from beautiful LA,California.I'm 5'11",pretty athletic build nothing spectacular but I try to stay in shape and got green eyes and somewhat longer brown hair.Now thanks to my usual lazyness I still had no place to stay during college.One day on campus,while talking to some friends I found an add from a girl looking for a roommate."What do I got to lose" I thought so I got my phone and called:

"Hello who's there?"
"Yo,it's brian I saw your add you need a roommate?"
"Yep thats correct I suppose you're interested.If so come around I'll just get dressed"
"Sounds good I got the adress I'll be there in an hour"

So I was on my way to the place and thinking about what to expect.I didn't really care much about how the place looked aslong as I had a place to stay and the rent was cheap.But my mind also wandered to my possible new roommate I didn't know what to expect.My ex broke up with me 3 months ago and well let's just say I'm sitting on the dry ever since.Once I got there I tried ringing the doorbell but the door opened before I got to.

"Sorry for surprising you but I saw you coming already"a voice shouted from upstairs.So there I was in front of my new place and my jaw almost dropped to the basement.My future roommate was stunning about 5'8",perfect curves in just the right places and long black hair with red highlights.She was wearing red skin tight jeans and a suicide silence shirt with the sleeves cut off.I like this girl already.
"Don't you wanna come in?"
"Ohh...sure right "

She went around showing me the place and I took the opportunity to check out her nice ass.I'm a guy what can I say.
"Where's my room?"
"Right here next to mine"
"Alright I'll take it"
"Oh really?Wow thanks so much I've been looking for a whole week now"

To celebrate I invited her to dinner which she happily agreed to.We got along great her name is Rachel and she's from San Francisco so a fellow californian.She's studying biology and wants to become a nurse,which I found to be really cool.We also share the same interest in music and tv shows and she even plays video games like me.We spent the evening watching a movie and she got pretty close
"I hope you don't mind I haven't spent time with a guy in a long time".Hell like I would complain

So the next few weeks were pretty uneventful between lessons and spending time with Rach.One evening she told me of her failed acting career."One day I was offered a huge role in a movie it could have been my breakthrough."
"So why did you decide not to?"
"Well there was one scene where I would have to be completely naked."
So she's not that easy I like that.It was weird though as she had no problems showing off her curves at home always wearing tight fitting clothes,short skirts and tank tops,which she filled out quite nice.

But one night would change everything.After a party she came home,ran off to the bathroom with tears in her eyes and slammed the door.I went to check on her
"Rach are you ok?"
"No I'm not the party was terrible they embarassed me."
"Why what happened?"
"Sorry I don't wanna talk about it"
Just as I was about to leave I heard a loud noise like someone falling so I quickly went into the room.
"Oh god what happened?"
"I slipped on the floor and fell.Ouch can you help me up?"
"Of course no problem."
It was kinda embarrasing she was only wearing bra and panties and admittedly I got rock hard since,as I said it's been a while since my last time with a girl.I carried her onto the couch in the living room and gave her a massage so she feels better.Suddenly I noticed a bulge in her panties but I ignored it.She went up and thanked me for my help when it finally all came together.While getting up a cock flopped out of her panties and I was shocked.She turned red,sat down and covered it with her hands
"Oh god brian don't look!"
"Was that what I think it was?"
"Yes I have a cock damnit!!!Thats why I went home early and why I didn't do the movie!You must think I'm a freak now."
She was close to crying again which I felt so sorry for.
"I dont think you're a freak You are still a great girl.Can I see it?"
"What?"
"Your cock I wanna see it"
She hesitated at first but took her hands away letting it spring to live.I dunno what got into me but I reached for it and stroked it.It was warm and pulsing in my hand it's quite big too a good 6 inches I'd guess.She leaned over and unzipped my pants letting them fall to the floor.
"Oh wow you hid that all the time from me?How mean"
I could see the lust in her eyes as she started jerking me and eventually took it in her mouth.My hand never left her cock.I dunno why I did what I did but I lifted her up into 69 position her fully erect cock dangling in front of my face so I started sucking it.The room filled with loud breathing and moans nd soon I shot my cum down her throat which sent her over the edge and made her cum too.She just got up,layed in my arms and looked deep in my eyes."I love you Brian"She gave me a kiss and I went for it forgetting she still had my cum in her mouth.We both fell to slepp on the couch with her in my arms
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it still says there are mistakes I need to correct unfortunately english isnt my fist language so i cant find any ways to fix it myself thats what I need your help for

Thanks! Yeah, I've been having issues submitting longer stories lately, too. It just loads and loads and then goes to a General Error page.

then hopefully it gets fixed soon we need new stories from you and with we i mean me

sure get it in if its not too big its ok.oh no guys though

I'd love to just need a nice girl to do the blowjob lol

if she doesnt want to swallow no prob just shoot it on her boobs or ass