Forum posts made by daniellex

Topic Which is better for a first time writer 1st Person pov or 3rd person?
Posted 20 Mar 2017 10:28

I agree with AvBkGrl.

I'd add this though. The two perspectives allow you to do different things and they also have limitations.

The first person gives you the scope to add a lot of detail about your emotions, thoughts and how you perceive people and situations. However, too much detail will make the story heavy going, so be wary of that.

The third person is excellent for multiple character stories. The best feature of third person, is that it allows you to be omnipotent and gives you a much freer scope to expand the story.

The second person is to be avoided unless you want a kicking!

A word should be made about tense. Never write in the present tense unless you're a genius. Always use the past tense.

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Topic What would you have done...?
Posted 05 Mar 2017 09:20

I think everyone must have found some money lying around at one time or another. I think I've found a few coins but nothing major.

So, this woman picked up £20 and ended up in hot water! If you found a decent amount of money, would you pocket the loot or hand it in?


Read the story here


Personally, I would have done the decent thing and handed it, but I guess it might depend on your circumstances

Topic Add your homonyms, but no ad hominems
Posted 04 Mar 2017 21:58

How about weather and whether?

And then there's draught and draft...although I'm not sure if that one counts as one is really British and the other is American dontknow





Good ones. Yes in British English draught has many meanings; an unwelcome cool breeze or a weight pulled by an ox or whatever, etc. Also beer on tap is spelled this way. Draft is a drawing, normally a preliminary sketch.

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Topic Add your homonyms, but no ad hominems
Posted 04 Mar 2017 14:04

Here's a really obscure one.

Oriole - yellow bird
Oriel - bay window on the first/second floor.


I'm a nerd book

Topic Add your homonyms, but no ad hominems
Posted 04 Mar 2017 08:11



yes, you're correct in they it don't fit the homophone or homonym definitions. i wasn't sure about adding them; nevertheless they are often confused and misused. is there a special category for words sharing virtually the same definition, but used in different context? inquiring minds would like to know🤔



https://www.lushstories.com/forum/yaf_postst14085_Commonly-Confused-Words.aspx

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Topic Add your homonyms, but no ad hominems
Posted 04 Mar 2017 01:08

further and farther. people seem to lean towards using further. "she licked further down his chest." when what they mean is farther, because it measures distance versus degree or extent.

Okay, these aren't homophones or homonyms. These are simply two regularly confused words. As you say, strictly speaking, farther refers to distance. 'I now have farther to travel, compared with my old house.' Further is to do with concepts, 'I'm going to need to give this further thought.' In general usage, I think further is the more popular for both senses.

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Topic Add your homonyms, but no ad hominems
Posted 03 Mar 2017 12:02


To me "drawer" is what you put your naughty things in and "drawers" is the naughty things you put in it. $

Yes, that was the sense that I meant, as in panties drawer. I've never heard of the agent noun drawer, but it might be a word dontknow

I guess it's replaced in a lot of senses by the semi technical word 'draughtsman.'





Hmm, you're right (not write), but there is no such thing as an "ad homiphone", so the title wouldn't have worked. So yeah, that's it - I was using artistic license!

And "draw" is what you do, but the person that does it is a "drawer", right?

Ah fair enough Hugs


Topic Add your homonyms, but no ad hominems
Posted 03 Mar 2017 09:51

You know, those pesky words that sound alike and so get used wrong, but spell-check alone won't catch them. 'Your' and 'you're' are good examples, as are 'there', 'their', and 'they're'.

But other ones you sometimes use or see used that jump out at you.

One I see is 'shuttered' when the author meant 'shuddered'. The latter one is probably much more common in erotica, where there is a whole lot of shuddering going on. (Which brings up 'latter' vs. 'ladder'...)

Another is 'taught', which is the past-tense of teach, when the author really means 'taut', the porn term for tight, stretched, firm, etc.

Anyone else got one?

Strictly speaking, these are homophones. A homonym is a word that is spelled the same as another but has a different meaning, e.g. saw and saw.

Anyway, ones that I see are practise (verb) and practice (noun), although I'm not sure if American English sees this distinction.

Also, discreet and discrete as has been mentioned.

I've seen draw and drawer get mixed up, which is unforgivable but there you go.

Stationery and stationary is a regular one, too.

Good thread.

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Topic It's Pancake Day (Shrove Tuesday) - How do you have yours?
Posted 01 Mar 2017 09:33



Flip: verb , to turn over or cause to turn over with a sudden quick movement.

Toss: verb , to throw (something) somewhere lightly or casually.

I flip mine. :)

Well you've started something. Laura agrees with you. I agree, semantically 'flip' makes perfect sense. I say toss because that's what my Mum and my Gran says.

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Topic It's Pancake Day (Shrove Tuesday) - How do you have yours?
Posted 28 Feb 2017 13:53

Pancakes with maple syrup and BACON? You Americans don't half have some funny ideas!

It's not American, I love that combo. It shouldn't work but it does!

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Topic It's Pancake Day (Shrove Tuesday) - How do you have yours?
Posted 28 Feb 2017 13:52

I love flipping pancakes. Embarassed

(This one got the maple syrup treatment.)

https://upload.lushstories.com/523407819-pancake.jpeg

You toss pancakes, you don't flip them.

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Topic It's Pancake Day (Shrove Tuesday) - How do you have yours?
Posted 28 Feb 2017 10:24

I'm having mine two ways; one with banana and peanut butter and another with raspberry and honey


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Topic Super foods
Posted 27 Feb 2017 22:14

I remember creating a similar thread, if you're interested to learn about a few other ones: Power Foods

Ah thank you, SP. I'll take a look at that for sure

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Topic Super foods
Posted 27 Feb 2017 12:11

There has been a lot of rubbish spouted about obscure plants and tropical fruits that are meant to be super foods.

Here are the real super foods that are in every supermarket and what we should all be eating.

1. Greek yogurt. Greek yogurt is a good source of protein and a valuable supplement, especially if you exercise a lot. Mixed with soft fruit it is a very filling breakfast. It's good for your gut, is a good source of calcium and it's unctuous, which means it's filling.

2. Blackcurrants. Everyone goes on about blueberries. Well forget them and eat blackcurrants. They are a rich source of vitamin C and contain massive amounts of antioxidants, flavanoids and polyphenolics that make you healthy and well.

3. Yellow bell peppers. Yes, it has to be yellow peppers. They contain vitamin C and are a source of niacin, folacin, iron and protein.

4. Nectarines. This fruit should be eaten daily. They are an excellent source of dietary fibre, beta carotine and potassium.

5. Broccoli. This is the super food of super foods! It is a very good source of vitamin K, which is an easy one to be deficient in. This vitamin helps you to maintain healthy bones and efficient blood clotting. Broccoli also contains just about every vitamin and mineral you care to mention.


Happy eating and good health!

Danny x




Topic The Walking Dead
Posted 26 Feb 2017 01:48

I know Series 7 was probably a bit too grisly to begin with, but does anyone else think the second half has gone a bit flat?

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Topic does anyone here have a favorite musical?
Posted 26 Feb 2017 01:47

Singing in the Rain

Topic Fart Rape
Posted 25 Feb 2017 10:14

You can't get away from Trumps on Lush in one way or another

Topic Watch out UK readers, Doris is coming!
Posted 24 Feb 2017 22:05

Medium and high wind impact storms that are due to hit the UK are named by the Met Office. They started doing it in 2015/16 so it's now in its second 'season'. The wonderful British public can send suggestions to the Met Office and they then compile a list of the most submitted. They will only consider actual human names. These are then arranged alphabetically and alternate between male and female names. Then, as and when storms come along they are given a name from the list, which is followed in alphabetical order. So Storm Doris was named a while ago and this would have been the name regardless of the strength of the storm or any damage etc.

The names for this year are: Angus (19-20 Nov ’16), Barbara (23-24 Dec 2016), Conor (25-26 Dec 2016), Doris (now), Ewan, Fleur, Gabriel, Holly, Ivor, Jacqui, Kamil, Louise, Malcolm, Natalie, Oisín, Penelope, Robert, Susan, Thomas, Valerie and Wilbert.

Storm Wilbert and Storm Susan don't really evoke fear and treachery either do they? Ah, you can always rely on us Brits to suggest suitable names bahaha.

Yesterday my bin lid flew up and blew a pop bottle and a box of cat biscuits into my neighbour's garden and I can't get round to retrieve them. I have felt suitably guilty about it since. I hope you're proud of yourself Doris.

My Mum's name is Penelope. Is anyone called Wilbert? It sounds like a cartoon name. No offence to any Wilberts out there. Wilberforce would've been better.

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Topic Watch out UK readers, Doris is coming!
Posted 24 Feb 2017 22:01



Looks like you and I are pretty close. We got sent home yesterday in Birkenhead cos the roof of our building got blown off and twatted about a dozen cars.


I guess so. Luciana Berger is my MP. It sounds like you had it worse but it always is over there.

Topic Who is YOUR favorite author on Lush?
Posted 24 Feb 2017 10:42

DanielleX
John_Doe
Simplicity
ChrisM
TonyaL
JWren
Sweetsinner
Burquette
Candidfunk
KindofHeart

The list can go on and on, really. They all have something that I truly enjoyed reading or could relate to in a significant way. There are also many authors who have been mentioned that I haven't read yet as well. Time to give them a look, no doubt.

Awww thank you! love7

Topic Awesome Member Award. New. Please Read.
Posted 24 Feb 2017 08:35



btw,attributes: being awesome. the award says it all.

It's a great idea and not be immodest but I am awesome! My Mum said and she's always right

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Topic Watch out UK readers, Doris is coming!
Posted 23 Feb 2017 10:03

I would have gone to New Brighton today but I had to work.

It was blowy but nothing like the storm we had two years ago. We lost loads of trees in my area.

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Topic Curvy?
Posted 23 Feb 2017 10:00

I would consider myself curvy. I'm slim but I have a 34 DD bust and an ample bum.



Topic Who is YOUR favorite author on Lush?
Posted 20 Feb 2017 12:05

I can see that people tend to read current authors more than longer standing ones. I have given my short lists before so this will be brief:
Lisa
Liz
Principessa
avgblackgrl
DanielleX is someone I have read over and over, especially her "Renaissance of the Heart" series. She is just an instant turn on for me if you just mention her name by now.
Then there is Sprite's, "Do You Want Ketchup With That?"
Then there are the poets I adore: LaylaJune is just extraordinary. We all know her as a very classy lady, but that class somehow rubs off on her gift---her poetic muse.
I tend not to read men but there are some damned good writers here who are male.

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it

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Topic Almost Famous
Posted 17 Feb 2017 09:40

Viewed. Will read later

Well done!

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Topic Your favourite story title?
Posted 15 Feb 2017 12:29

I love loads of titles, but my absolute favourite is...

Renaissance of the Heart by DanielleX. When you read the story the title just fits so perfectly.

Of my own stories, The Last Virgin , because it's so suggestive yet a bit of a surprise when you find out what it actually means.

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Topic For Valentine's Day, a murmuration of starlings!
Posted 14 Feb 2017 14:30

With the changing of the climate we have had the phenomenon of geese staying over the winter in our area of the central United States. In the past they would have migrated much farther south. European Starlings were an introduced species here in the states. They have come to dominate some parts of the country. Nature is, indeed, wonderful. And eminently watchable.

Don't Red-winged Blackbirds also have big flocks? I saw them on a David Attenborough prog

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Topic The Lush Liar Liar Quiz
Posted 12 Feb 2017 04:44

Finally I've managed to get some time to put this together.

Listed below in bold are twenty Lush members who have each posted three facts about themselves.

Two of the facts are outrageous lies, but one of them, however improbable, is the truth. Your job is to work out which one is true.

I'll leave this open for a month or so as there's a lot to get through with twenty questions and profiles to wade through.

Good luck everyone!

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KatieElizabeth
1. At work, I once served Prince Harry with a large wedge of Somerset Brie, five slices of Wiltshire Ham and a portion of Gala pie. He likes his pork pies does Harry
2. A friend sneakily passed off a chilli I’d cooked as hers in a cooking competition. She won, and we shared the prize of four bottles of wine in just one night. Hic!
3. I’ve met three people from Lush in the 3D world and slept with two of them

LYFBUZ
1. I once had a drunken conversation with Kiefer Sutherland
2. I was once threatened by a very famous movie star when I hit on his date at the Mondrian
3. I have Eva Longoria's autograph

Sprite
1. I've been in a major motion picture
2. I've made out with a rock star
3. I've fucked a fireman in a fire truck

Kee
1. I went to Jim Morrison's grave
2. I went to King Kamehameha I's grave
3. I went to Elvis's grave

DanielleX
1. My Nan gave birth to two pairs of identical twins. The odds are 1:70,000
2. My Dad holds the record for growing the world's longest cucumber
3. My Mum has a rose named after her

Kinky_girl
1. I am a nurse and I know it is both a cliché and a fetish, but I have fucked a patient while they were in my care
2. I once met boxer Carl Froch while he was buying bread and nappies
3. I have been engaged 5 times, but only to 3 different men

SeanR83
1. I was visited by the Queen at my work
2. I served Sacha Baron Cohen and Amy Winehouse at work
3. I met the Mayor of London at work

Buz
1. I was a rodeo bull rider one summer
2. I have met and shook hands with four former US Presidents
3. I went to the hospital emergency room with a four-hour erection. They gave me a t-shirt that said, "Proud Owner of a 4-Hour Erection!”

Although I wish it was 3 Embarassed

Verbal
1. In my youth I spent several days in jail in New Orleans during Mardi Gras
2. I once stopped a bank robbery, mostly by accident
3. I have been to every continent in the world, even Antarctica

Liz
1. I am an official product tester for three different sex toy manufacturers.
2. My blood is soaked into the same wooden deck planks where Lord Nelson was shot on board HMS Victory during the Battle of Trafalgar in 1805.
3. I have a small tattoo of a heart on my right arse cheek.

Regnadkcin
1. I trained to climb Mt. Everest
2. I wanted to be a circus acrobat
3. I was held up at machine gun point in Guatemala

Symes4u
1. Queen Elizabeth fell in love with me and we were married in Milwaukee secretly
2. I am a foot shorter now than I was when I was 23 years old.
3. I voted for Donald Trump for POTUS

Simmerdownchick
1. I dressed up as Edward Scissorhands for Halloween and squatted to pee in front of what turned out to be a full car
2. I dressed up in my cutest skirt, commando style, spread my lips and peed off the side of a building
3. I did neither because there are always public restrooms to be found

Simar
1. Once I met president Pranab Mukherjee and his family. I took a liking to his granddaughter and I had my first with her in her grandad's study
2. I was in 12th grade when I fell in love with two of my good friends. I asked both of them out... both rejected me
3. I won the hottest guy in college award

mranonymous7
1. I played one year of professional baseball as a short stop. My career was cut short by a knee injury
2. I graduated from UTA Arlington
3. A friend bought Conan's sword after the movie was made. He let me play with it at the Market Hall gun show when no customers were around. I ran up and down the aisles for an hour waving it around like a mad man

HeraTeleia
1. I have Russell Wilson's (starting quarterback for the Seattle Seahawks football team) personal cell number in my phone's contact list, given to me by him after a chance encounter whilst shopping
2. I speak, read, and write fluent Russian, and usually have both the Google News in English and the Google News in Russian tabs open in my computer, because I prefer to read news from primary sources
3. I shoot Glock pistols competitively and am an internationally ranked IDPA competitor

Browncoffee
1. I once saw Hugh Laurie in a restaurant and accidentally said 'I love 'Love Actually'', confusing him with Hugh Grant. He just looked at me
2. I had a crush on a friend of my father's. I used to babysit for him and was so obsessed, I'd lie in his bed. Once, he came home early and I was half asleep. I rolled off the bed and hid underneath it until he went up to the third floor, then pretended I'd been outside getting a signal for my phone
3. I once stole a large sum of money and was part of a group of suspects who were searched (at school.) I had the money in my shirt pocket the whole time and the teacher was so preoccupied with my untidy locker, he didn't realise

Burquette
1. I worked at NASA on a project that was the basis for the movie "The Martian"
2. I am part of a class action lawsuit to secure adoption rights for LGBT couples in my home state
3. I've published books under another name in both Young Adult and Sci-Fi genres

BethanyFrasier
1. An aerobatics pilot let me take the controls of the Stearman biplane he was flying me in and I successfully executed a barrel roll
2. One of my friends on Lush is actually my personal bodyguard in real life
3. I was one of the original sponsors of a yearly scholarship for young riders in the Ohio Dressage Society

Oshi
1. I was once involved in a sexual escapade that caused nearly £3k worth of property damage
2. I was once part of a hen party that was left stranded in various states of undress on top of a water tower in rural Sussex.
3. I have 9 1/2 toes


Super quiz!!!

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Topic Does this happen to you
Posted 11 Feb 2017 03:08

I run frequently, and I get the usual whistles and little kissy noises from guys. I'm very close to a very big public park with lots of other joggers and dog walkers so I feel pretty safe.

What's described in the OP sounds completely over the top and very inappropriate!

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Topic How to speed up my metabolism?
Posted 11 Feb 2017 02:56

If like me, you pigged out at Christmas, the best way to shed those extra pounds is to cut out refined carbs and eat a protein rich diet. Here was my routine and I lost all my Christmas flab and a few pounds more.

1. If you can do some exercise in the morning, then do it on an empty stomach and have a breakfast of a banana and Greek yogurt with peaches or nectarines. Don't eat before your workout because you want your energy supply to look to body fat first and not rely on any stored glycogen. I try to run two miles every day, but power walking is just as good.

2. For two weeks totally avoid bread, potatoes and white rice. Definitely don't eat any cakes, biscuits, puddings or cookies.

3. For lunch and supper/dinner/tea go for eggs (not fried), oily fish, fresh fish or chicken (without the skin) and vegetables. Broccoli, kale and green beans should be your first choice.

3. If you want a treat a couple of squares of plain chocolate (min 40% cocoa solids - the higher the better) is a nice fix and will boost your serotonin levels.

4. Try to drink plenty of water.

5. Don't eat anything after 7pm while on this plan. If you really get the munchies, then go for a gluten free bar with the puffed rice, fruit and nuts.


Good luck

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