I've always wanted to write and it just seem comfortable for me to write erotic stories as I've done so in the past. But haven't had anything posted
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Recently I learned an essential guideline for good writing. Granted, I'm not as experienced with writing but I found this to be very useful and wanted to share.When writing it is better to Show It Not Tell it. Give Information through action and dialog versus narration. I was known for not following this which I believe made my writing stale. But, now that I've started following this guide I find my writing easier, more fluid and better to read. My latest upcoming story will reflect this, of course it's not complete yet.
This is pretty much for everyone, but I am curious as to what tips everyone may have at improving their writing. I ask because I find my writing is the same and I would like to improve.
Welcome back to the groove!So, what was the new environment that helped you? What I have found is that if one plans to write, the environment needs to be what is comfortable for you. And, what I have noticed is that I need to be alone with no distractions. And when I have this, my writing just flows...
Its been a long hiatus since I last posted or even written anything. However late last night the writing bug came back to me and I've started writing again. I've find that environment plays a significant part in writing inspiration.Its good to be back in the groove
After a long drought, I finally started writing again. Nice to get the writing bug again <img src="/forum/images/emoticons/hello2.gif" alt="hello1">
Wow, I just looked at the last time I posted a story and it HAS been a while.I just wanted to get back in the "swing" of things, and now I'm clueless what I want my newsubject to beany suggestions?:-"
Lately I've been having some serious writers block, I was on a roll for awhile there for about a month and a half. And now nothing, has anyone experienced this before, and how did you get out of it?Do you find that the environment where you write makes a difference?<img src="/forum/images/emoticons/mblah05.gif" alt="blah5">
Since I'm fairly new at this, I am finding that many of my stories seem to be very similar and I'm curious if anyone has fallen into this type of "habit". And if anyone would have any good suggestions or comments on the stories I've posted so far. This way it will help me improve my writing, I appreciate any help you can provide. And don't worry I am looking for criticism and etc.thanksRob
http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa238/koeyha/Bokep/Christmas_Girls_12242006105244AM284.jpg a very Merry Christmas indeed, thanks for the pic
http://ac4.yt-thm-a02.yimg.com/image/7c19e80e054220fe great answer ...LOL
As the sunlight was dimming and the shadows grew larger over the building, the sound of a high-winding engine echoed throughout the canyons of the streets. In the blink of an eye, the bright red MINI Cooper S raced around the corner and down into the Holland tunnel. The driver with an intense look focused on nothing else but her fast-paced driving. Sometime later, the MINI Cooper S...
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Tanya had been watching the young brunette as she mingled through the place. Her eyes were transfixed upon the silhouette of that wonderful body under that black dress. Focusing upon those perky breasts, tapered waist and those wonderful legs, and she could feel her mouth beginning to water at the thought of what was between them. Robyn was feeling good; either it was her friends or...
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Caring touch so soft and supple Slippery and smooth, feather touch teasing, Like no other, A precious gift, Anticipation building Pressing, sliding as sensations build The blessing from nature, Soft supple curves Tenderness and love with each touch Tracing, teasing each curve Enclosed in warmth and wetness, Soft caring and unselfish, With each touch increasing love, Mother Nature’s work of...
Added 31 Dec 2008 | Category Love Poems
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How much longer he wondered, how much longer he would be locked up like a savage animal for a crime he didn’t commit. But the prosecutor made sure to get him out of way; it was just as well he had been in a short unhappy marriage. When he first met Patricia it was all fun and life was good but not too soon after Patricia’s darker side appeared. Jay knew there was something amiss when...
Added 29 Dec 2008 | Category Love Stories
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When they left the party they couldn’t stop looking or thinking about each other and the excitement kept building in the two of them. They arrived at her building and Andrea invited John up for a drink. She gave him a brief tour of her place, and then offered him a glass of wine while they were in the kitchen. He kept looking at her lips wondering how soft they were, she could feel him...
Added 19 Dec 2008 | Category Straight Sex
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Too many times tonight guys on separate occasions tried to pick up Christina. But she was not interested she just wanted to drink alone and be with her thoughts of how unhappy she had been. The past few relationships she had did not last or ended in disaster and the last thing she wanted was to be with another guy at least tonight. On the other side of the bar this beautiful blonde who...
Added 17 Dec 2008 | Category Lesbian
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The GRAB 2am in the morning and the moon appears ominous as Melissa walked home, she was a little lit from the party but feeling very relaxed. She passed by this club where a few other young woman in various dress were outside milling about smoking. One of the young women was gazing at her hips and her ass swinging as she passed, thinking of what it was like. A few moments later, as Melissa...
Added 15 Dec 2008 | Category BDSM
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THE CABIN Donna took her by the hand and guided her out of the cold wet snow into the warmth of the cabin. The young blonde woman, a little nervous and shaken from the crash that occurred just days ago, just left her the sole survivor out in the cold and emptiness of the wilderness. Donna, removed her parka took the young woman by the hand and brought her closer to the warmth of the fire ...
Added 13 Dec 2008 | Category Lesbian
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Even in the large suite there was no peace, the captain and Marissa were arguing again. Tyaja whispered to Ayanna “what is going between those two?” Tyaja replied “Maybe the tension of being on the lam is getting to them. Suddenly the door blasted open and that bounty hunter that was pursuing them stepped through the remainder of the door. The captain charged and caught the bounty hunter...
Added 13 Dec 2008 | Category Love Stories
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