About PaleMoonShirudo


I did a bunch of writing in the fantasy fiction genre, standard magic and monsters kinda thing. There was a scene in one of my stories that was rather sensual. One of my readers pointed it out and told me I should give erotic fiction a shot, so I did. Apparently I am kind of good at it, who would have thought



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Topic: New author looking for criticism and requests!
Posted: 23 Aug 2012 08:45

I recently started writing for Lush and managed to post three of my short stories.

My first one is Happy Anniversary, you can find it on my profile page...

I use the same two characters in the other two, which can be found on my profile. I am looking for criticism, someone to point out the areas i need to improve on and maybe areas I spend a little too much time doing.

I always am looking for requests to write someones fantasy, I find it helps develop your skills as a writer. Simply send me a message and we can work out details.

Hope you enjoy reading and I hope to release more short stories in the coming months.


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Edit : Thanks to Shylass for pointing out my mistake, the link was blocked by my rookie status and I adjusted the message accordingly.

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Dinner with a Twist

Clair and Blair are a very adventurous couple. They tend to play a little game whenever they are out with friends, and everyone they knew close enough played with them. Sexually tease your partner and see if you can make them cum without anyone noticing. Although in most cases it became a contest of who could subtly bring their partner to orgasm sooner if they had figured it out. Jack...

Added 03 Sep 2012 | Category Oral Sex | Votes 1 | Avg Score 4 | Views 9,335 | 1 Comment

Unleashing Her Inner Dom

Jack had a rough month, first he had to fire half of hisdepartment, then his car got towed, he lost his house key, and to top it all off he was coming down with a cold. Lauren knew it had been rough and tried her best to comfort him, never going further than hugs and kisses because he ‘just wasn’t in the mood’. His lover was starting to get frustrated at their lack of intercourse; he...

Added 25 Aug 2012 | Category BDSM | Votes 9 | Avg Score 4.89 | Views 8,822 | 4 Comments

Storm Warning Fun

Jack got home at the usual time that day, unsurprised to find Lauren sprawled out on the futon wearing nothing but a robe and her panties. She had called him when she got off work, telling him she was getting the rest of the day off because the storm warning. When Jack shut the door Lauren glanced over the arm of the futon and waved at him. “So why exactly does a storm warning give you a...

Added 24 Aug 2012 | Category Straight Sex | Votes 2 | Avg Score 3.5 | Views 6,467 | 2 Comments

House Party

Lauren was never one to go to wild parties, even when theywere hosted by friends. The idea of watching her friends get shit faced was just not for her. The only reason she even decided to go to this one was because of Jack. Her boyfriend insisted all day that it was going to be the best night of her life. So far she has only been hit on 5 times while Jack went to get some drinks and look for...

Added 23 Aug 2012 | Category Straight Sex | Votes 7 | Avg Score 4.71 | Views 10,009 | 2 Comments

Happy Anniversary

Lauren was always the pretty girl in school. Brilliant natural red hair running just past her shoulder blades, flawless lightly tanned skin and perky B cup breasts. She stood at just over 5 feet and 3 inches tall, shorter than everyone else she knew and most of her height was in her legs, which she took advantage of all the time. If it was warm enough to wear a skirt she did, and it always...

Added 22 Aug 2012 | Category Straight Sex | Votes 3 | Avg Score 5 | Views 4,021

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