I'm 18, and unlike other girls my age I've discovered my sexuality earlier than most. I have fantasies of control and domination (where I am the submissive) but not to the extent of being the slave: I'm a romantic. But I am also an independent woman, I hate men who are sexist, but I also understand the 'vintage' roles of the woman, and I don't really have much of an issue with them. I'm studying writing at university and would love to be an author one day. This site is really just a way to satisfy my sometime 'lust filled mind' and perhaps share some of my fantasies with the world.
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Grace, your story was actually reviewed and returned to you by an Australian moderator. She mentioned that there were some spelling/grammatical errors and that it only required a little editing in order for it to be verified. I just took a look and can see a few errors in the first two paragraphs. I'll take a proper look now and work through it with you. All moderators are aware of the differences between American and British English, regardless of which country they're from. In future it's always best to reply directly to the moderator who removes your story if you have any queries or disagree with the reasons for removal. Thanks Lisa, I didn't know I could respond to moderators. I'm so new to this site, I only joined a couple of days ago. But now I know I will reply next time, thank you! :3 In the end though I didn't see any changes to those first two paragraphs after all. :)
Something I learned when I submitted my first story was to make sure your English is American English. I am from Australia and we use British English and according to the mods my story was riddled with spelling mistakes, but to me it was spelled fine. Maybe it was because I was so close to my story to not see the errors, as you normally are as the writer. On another thought there probably were a few errors but hey? Writers are touchy you know? Haha :)
Mr Anderson was a dignified man. In his early forties, he was respected throughout the community as The All Girls Vittoria Academy’s Headmaster. With salt and pepper hair he was not an ugly man, but he was not a smoking hot young one. His look was distinguished, powerful. All Girls Vittoria was a prestigious school, a school that Mr Anderson took pride in. The school valued student...
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