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I agree that is insane, I only hope that the child will see the lion's share of it, but I don't hold my breath for it. However in the state of California, the mom / dad (whoever is in custody of the kid) can get up to 26% of the GROSS income for the month. So that means that the guys she is going after for the child support makes at least $177,000 a month (if she filed in California I don't know how it works in other places). Personally its women like this that make other women look bad. I don't have a problem with a woman getting child support, (in fact I think in most cases its a great thing) but this just sounds like she is a gold digger, she has her own money and a lot of it, but because she doesn't want to be with the guy anymore she is gonna fleece him for everything. She makes all women look like greedy lil bitches who only want a man for his money, makes finding a good honest man even harder than it already is.
Golf is a great stress releiver. Even if you don't play, you can goto the driving range, and shoot. Pretend that annyoing person is the lil golf ball...you'd be amazed at how far you can hit that lil ball.
I think five to ten years difference isnt that bad...but when you get older than that, it screams that someone is desprate and has no confidence in themselves. Seeing someone in their 20s date someone in their 40s + is just wrong. You are in two different places of life you have nothing in common except between the sheets, and no matter how much you connect there thats not enough for a long lasting real realtionship. And anyone who dates someone their kids age, well thats even worse for me. My ideas on this aren't limited to women being the older party, I think it works both ways seeing a 20 something girl with a 40+ man is wrong too.
Here I think is proof that a child is either male or femle on the inside and I don't mean because they have a penis or vagina.David Reimer, named Bruce at birth, underwent the first infant sex reassignment ever reported on a gentically and hormonally normal child. When he was 8months old his penis was accidently severed during circumcision. Soon afterwards his desprate parents tookhim to a psychologist, who sent them to John Hopkins University, where at 22months of age, Bruce had his testicles removed and genetils made to look like a girl. They renamed him Brenda. She resisted her parents efforts at making her into a girl, she was not interested in dolls and dressup but wanted to play with dump trucks and play in group sports like baseball. She walked like a guy, talked like one and played as one. This lead to enormous amounts of teasing by her classmates. At medical visits for psychological monitoring she always drew herself as a boy. As puberty struck, she began to fill out muscularly, and began taking the form of a "man" her parents wanted her to take estrogen therapy, which caused her to grow breasts and accumulate fat around her midsection, because of this she began to overeat and become even more reclusive. Finally a psychologist encouraged her parents to tell her she was in fact a boy. Once she heard this she wanted to under go surgery again to be "fixed". He picked out the name David. He was 14 years old. He had to undergo androgen therapy and surgeries to remove his breasts and create a penis. His teen years were still troublesome but things looked up when he was in his 20s.He married a woman, who left him after a few years becuase he was swindeled out of his money by someone else. His twin brother committed sucide shortly there after and two years later on May 4, 2004 David shot himself ending his life, telling people he had no desire to go on living his life. He blamed all his problems on his medical mishaps.David's story is proof that his genetic sex and prenatal hormones overrode any gender reassignment surgeries or training by outside influences. I think this is very simular, by not giving thier child a gender and keeping them away from society (and even parts of the fmaily) they are doing just as much damage as David's parents did when they had him made into a girl. Your gender is based on your actions and thoughts, not on what is inside of your pants. I think david's life is a testament to those ideas and should be used as an example of how harmeful it can be to a child's life when you mess with thier gender perceptions.
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Lori & Morgan~~ Thank you for taking the time to answer my questions. I'm always up for a challenge, I don't mind having to fit my writings to someone else right now. The advice is very helpful.Thanks!!!
Morgan~~ You mentioned finding out from the publisher what they want in a book, and then write to meet that desire. How does one go about doing that? I have a passion for writing and would love to know how to go about doing it in a methoidical fashion rather than just rushing in and then figuring out what to do. Your advice is a welcome treat.I know I have a lot of growing to do as an author, so I'm open to all advice and constructive critisim that I can get. I hate when someone says "That's great!" or "That sucks!" That tells me nothing other than you liked it or hated it, but what about it did you like or hate. My own personal pet peeve I guess.Thanks!!
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I think it should be a crime. Here's more food for thought: In the state of California, if a medical professional, police officer, fireman, etc. is stuck with a needle, they are tested for such things as HIV, Hep C / B etc. However if the patient does not want to ungo testing for these things, they do not have to, and you can not take a blood sample and test it for those things without their consent. If the medical professional gets HIV, Hep C etc from this patient they can not go back and sue them for it in any capacity. It is seen as a hazard of the job.
Sitting in a cold room agonizing over the exact curvature of his lips, should they be more angular and hard or more giving and soft? His eyes should be a piercing blue that could cause a woman to lose her very thoughts. His body should be hard yet soft enough to give when she curled up next to his heat on a cold wintry night like tonight. Macayla, Mac...
Added 08 Feb 2009 | Category Straight Sex
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What the hell was she thinking? Amber had done it she had agreed to go on a weekend trip with a man she hardly even knew; she hadn’t even met the man in person. They met six months ago online and after the first few conversations they had been intimate with one another. She still didn’t know if she should be ashamed of herself or just be accepting of her behavior. Her thoughts...
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Please leave me a comment, this is my first story here and I want to know what you all think of it, please let me know about any modifications or improvements you think I should make. Thank you! Enjoy! It was late when he finally came home that night. The cold had driven him home earlier than normal; it was almost time for the first snow to come again in...
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