I am an erotic author from NY. I like to figure out how people think and what makes them tick. I like to push the envelope. My online persona is quite different from who I am in real life. Online, I am crazy and adventurous and usually up for anything. Most of the time, I play along. Hate to say it, but I'm always thinking about how I can spin something into a story. If you're lucky, you might even get a character based off of you. This site is someplace where people can live out their fantasies with other people, and that makes me curious. I wonder what turns different people on, and I like to do my research. I can't write about something if I don't understand it. Things I won't do on Lush, or anywhere else for that matter...I'm not having a video chat with youI'm not having an audio chat with youI'm not sending you nudesI'm not sending you partial nudes
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I like proofing and editing stories as well, I just can't seem to do it for myself.Let me know.
Introduce the title of your story: Wanna Play? Genre/Category : IR Provide the link : https://(I have no idea why this isn't showing the link) 1. What first inspired you to write this particular story? Most of the other stories that I've written have been longer, and more involved stories. I wanted to try and write something in one sitting that still captured interesting characters and hot sex. 2. How did you come up with these characters? Usually, my female characters are some version of me. The males are versions of men that I know, so that I can add both things I like about them, and things I don't. Finn is a mixture of two of my best guy friends. I find it easier to write characters when I base them off of someone that I know. 3. How does it differ from some of your other stories? For one, this story is much shorter. For another, it focuses on one single scene, and it is also a first-time story. I hadn't written anything before where one the characters is losing their virginity. Although I know that first-time experiences usually suck - for a variety of reasons - I wrote Bree's first time as being sweet and fulfilling because, well...it's fiction. 4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece? It was trying to write everything I wanted to say in as short a story as possible. When I first wrote it, it was about twice as long as the version that is on the site, but I tried hard to cut it down. 5. Anything else you want to tell us about it? I think it's sweet, and I'm sure that the character will feel real to you.
Yep, I love it!!
Only 50%. I feel cheated.
I can totally relate. When I get stuck, and everything that comes out of me sounds like nonsense, I get frustrated and walk away. I have started to try something different. Usually when I write, I just write, one chapter after the other in order. But with my latest work, I broke up all the chapters into their own documents. This way, it seems easier for me to focus on one scene or chapter at a time (and it makes it SOOOO much easier for me to change things around - which I am continually doing with this story). I also found that doing it this way allows me to almost walk away from a chapter that I'm not inspired to write. I can switch it up and move onto something else that's tickling my fancy.
So, I realize that this site is essentially full of beta readers. The author writes something, puts it out there, and then the reader gives their feedback - if they so choose. But, I have a nearly finished story, and I am looking for someone to really critique it so that when I do release it, I know that the readers are getting the best version of my work.I have a bunch of different ways this story can go (and has gone) I just need a fresh perspective. Any takers? It's a m/f, m/m/m/f story about best friends, and self discovery. Of course I will tell you more if you are interested. Thanks!
"Wanna play?" "What's the point? You never win." "I beat you once." "That time I had mono doesn't count." "C'mon, what's the harm?" he said as he laced his hands behind his head. "It’s only one game." "It’s still amazing to me that after all these years, you still can't beat me at Monopoly." "Well, I have taken the years to develop other talents." At his words, Bree took a...
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